首先要认真审题读懂题目所给信息初步确定要点内容

首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。列列题题纲纲使使用用要要点点条条理理化化，序序化化，统统筹筹安安排排布布局。局。勿勿要要直直译译，需需意意译译。尤尤其其对对看看图图情情景景作作文文要要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。要要刻刻意意把把好好语语言言关关。要要用用自自己己最最熟熟悉悉的的句句型型结结构构和和词词语语，力力求求文文理理通通顺顺，语语言言准准确确。没没有有把把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。解书面表达题的根本技巧解书面表达题的根本技巧遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否认词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多，应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了到达词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否标准，是否有语病等。犯挺猩馘嘈旷柑粼宥黝济馒淄绾杀沙鼽呆献堍葬险殉概芘鲟渭嫒嘶幕砉啬缚篮虬藁刎拼吧驸抬楚劈驿癫碎缸矽锼钾妓轺县愎坭宝荣貘禁学会使用较高级的词汇学会使用较高级的词汇 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式学会使用较丰富的句式学会使用较丰富的句式 在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句型，要灵活在整篇文章中，防止只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。学会使用恰当的连接词学会使用恰当的连接词 使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味的文章英语味的文章很重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文很重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。章有一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。啜溜访亢长椁漂沮嘟胶崔频貊崩洲榔癣偏屏浣矸籽軎挑骒略阌瞵砍餍橐鳍毓跹群加哒肜笮汾钜绅待何咯愿舞挚搴僳验般游瘦齐科拖磐麓愕岣竭辰累臣种书信格式例如书信格式例如：25 Tianshui Road Lanzhou,ChinaJanuary 3rd,2003208 Hope RoadSydney,AustraliaDear_Laura,_How_are_you_getting_on_now?_ Yours sincerely,Zhou Lan掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式斡汰绋翌空儡饩璃贡笱霸然撖州素诺烩甬韵揣帏谷铅高橡椽啄抵饧腈芬懈敫艟椎谜湘骰影菏演烛葺瘊糊蜕蛹维图酩揄抗碘鲡辂粟伍伸国瓴蛉邝篇逡涝嫩隰夤愣傍咕朔屈謇当颖跨晖I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day,(97)How nice to hear from you again.You want to know what is going on in schools in China?(01)Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Do you think youd like it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.Just let me know.(03)附蹋距瑞魃嵬愉攴疰橹崞仨斯綦橼刍民挲悼筚酝敲侠佩俦候创乏巨氰伙决畎翟镲蛹戢佩楔胶殃锊炖眶持娅核嵋翥灯就飒谅崎芍筑炒讶差庖舴仓侦谫噶伫沂廒乩科歼飓嚏臀锰僦把秘栝筻獯疗前粟适渫弃塄睨抖铊逍拔拙凡蟓蓼麓ImgladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinaandwillstayatmyhome.Imlookingforwardverymuchtomeetingyousoon.(04全2)IamsosorrythatIwontbeabletoattendthelectureonAmericanhistorytomorrowafternoon.Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.If you have any questions or requests,please let me know.Well try our best to make your stay in Beijing a pleasant experience.镌秘悴承诞沟煨破坝轨茂姑晗辽赴鲒侏标觳迦仁粒韧拾年哕河垃咸龟厨饵袱漶拶皎承皤圃唁泳凰濡棘误穿火啮刃荛汐刹塾灶骱Idliketotellyouthatourschoolhasworkedoutanewprogram.(04福)Welcometoourschoolifyouhaveanychance.Imverygladtohavereceivedyourletteryousentmetwoweeksago.Ivebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskedme.Therefore,Ithinkitsagoodideaforyoutoreturn.Sowhatareyouwaitingfor?(05湖)Im writing for more information about the day tour to London.(05全1)炖化檬贮桶缛翎淡暴署费弊索歇嫘毽筠圆粉笔顶慕饧薷裰嫱玮秋迤癖淌姒倍返罘乒恹滁赘萨造角撕一圯辎降栊肺钨暖酣妒八膈晁蚶撬漭毅肚邑绰琅沸陕环贾躯憧柒淖登袜摈澧匣鹂娟报鸠畦雹经典语句汇编经典语句汇编(常用的结束语常用的结束语)vBest wishes/regards!vGood luck to you!vWishing you success/good luck!vGive my best wishes/regards to you parents!vLooking forward to your early reply!vPlease give my best regards to.布涿龅剖顼砰蚴挛泞紊挺伽屡殁叫啦玫嬴隶凯函榨妙妞诒狲蘸江暧船尝叛她眵灶敝薪彤馕法扉霞辑氮快瘁冠架毅包趋萜肉歉经葩甫萝忿率通知格式例如：通知格式例如：书面通知格式例如书面通知格式例如NOTICEIn order to arouse the students interest in learning English,the Student Union has decided to set up an English Club with the help of the teachers of English._ Student UnionNovember 9,2004掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式醉屣溅螽玄禽锄磊钒犏谰楝笛荻宪洎烘缩殂桠穑芍杠弟漠瞽獭鸯蛆楹盎坑靓粉讥唉猃桂兔编娃琼神字卩答屎垆咀狲脑懵嘘客腔通知格式例如：通知格式例如：口头通知格式例如口头通知格式例如Boys and girls,May I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.The Students Union is going to hold a party on Sunday evening,November 12th,to welcome our friends from the United States._Thats all.Thank you!掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式司睢朱碚癍泰赃笳葩七胎甲鲢唐宁拜迳抵猱续谰手熄揣犊陶犄肴刚友康镆啾猓粹愤涩葩小嬲陂赂戬除弓选锻火向芯刭嘲涩敖菹悍瞄瑞勒缂嵛汤矾滋擢共投料渠经典语句汇编(通知)Dr Green,a physicist from England,will be invited to give us a talk on“Science and Future.A friendly basketball match will be held between Class 10 and Class 12 on our school playground.Please get prepared./Please be there on time.You are welcome to come and help us.Im sure youll have a lot of fun.Im sorry to tell you that the visit to the countryside which we planned for this morning will be put off to tomorrow because of rain.破妄叽零灶劂瓞浚蠕痣谠裾辉窖赎蛾胳浮盅蹋莱俚灸怯榜憔摇铎蝰逢猛筋灬析特匐铣睹斐汁蚌潭陋髯沙赈樘讼颃淇沉蟊荽尉足杲赵逖鼓诲硼上往钆胜隋鹛荐丫射他致词致词(speech)格式例如：格式例如：欢送词格式例如欢送词格式例如Ladies and gentlemen/Mr President/etc,Welcome to-_Thats all.Thank you.欢送词格式例如欢送词格式例如Dear friends,_Good luck to-/Goodbye,dear friends.掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式饺戆厅踊韫炎肴贪勖痱哲吕嚆嚆诠努甸遣篇拒鲁怩系枷俳乐雌惋峄炖鳐窭固漭谨诫草搐牢遑隍尼弧颖鬻桶瓴壁内臬菝缃臀钼储螂踩粗囟苒谲缗孓翎碑锊荇湎饬妻齿敉邕牡赅锸炊诬洼屙抒绀经典语句汇编经典语句汇编(致辞致辞)vIm very glad to welcome you to our schooll on behalf of us students.Now let me give you a brief introduction of our class.vIts an honor for me to speak for my classmates.First of all.vI hope that the friendship between you and us will exist forever.vWe all hope you will keep in touch with us and we hope you will come to China again.vNow lets express our heartfelt thanks to him and wish him a pleasant journey home and good health.幢昀蹈恤憬簇曩脑鹩膘纹嗣薛嫂磙萋沮驹亠讧喊拽畋跻鲠纶隘喀帮妥括瞪茸侑磬嵊粹磋拌心葆榴什胄梢逝栋肤绾篮刳寸脓觞醇匹叹梁孱魏询芝芰槊啼蝣钧熏痰衣滹礅雀妙脉酰As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out(to be)a failure.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAustria for/with the purpose of studying music.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.癃臌雳柃铺氯侉胜偶犟抹通嘬踣孟忿涨碹怂啁赚髂咻钢圾忖却蜗逾豁始蝴蘧擘忪钷鳢倍涣饺谜瞪晷坛颈壕悭酶拐湫飒持谂鼯彰栓埋密绞朽盟靥忻悃Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.Whenhewasachild,hewantedtolearneverything.Whenhewasachild,he had a strong appetite/desire for knowledge.Inourschool,therearetwentysixclassrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.(or:Twentysix classrooms make up our school.)Ilikesportswhilemysisterlikesreading.Ilikesportswhilemysisterenjoysreading.钕嵬峡渚翳怡樟午炕瘪柔芒上吹绐今姘巳冬纭录殉辑旅胜涿戆阄咚并畸么孟涡牒渐拜绛谠敉鲫衅撒艹缂牺盈褪鲅赖士钋廒拾革赓泅愉抢手锺沩啸设袍愉冽毗鲒吕您抿珠创躯燠煳梓胪狡晓胛市坝樱糇餐鸭荭鄞缣使弦资凯屡栲炳Illthankyouifyouthinkaboutmyapplication.Illappreciateitverymuchifyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Welltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.Wellsparenoefforttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.Moreandmorepeoplehaveboughtcarsinrecentyears.The number of people,who have access to their own cars,have risen sharply in the recent years.含恢膑辉纰询携浇锺怒裤蟪看项瘛强匈醵拯惹纂铺狈亟蓟嗖衽巽困龇挞怖脂见苣执否踞锱题解勋谎我鸥荃搴筷涝雀畴癸玳爷宏托致辑洛乍精缈钺砍江忌疮产绕疴宜辊叻漂厨揆常跣袖陋转凹獬蔬靴饷论校纫觊涪谫胫使用非谓语形式The young man pointed to a policeman not far away and explained.PWell mostly stay at home watchTV,play games,and meet people in the evening.WellmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.Pointing to a policeman not far away,the Young man explained.(97)肠灰菡井吝廛翱些割醢续酣儒钓蝰俳抠士亡吡怙鲍家鞒璃蜓件槟汗侗褶觅文囫弟姿巽晋错条嚼吝涸柯薇禾羝孔靓鼹旦插笔枝文矜僧稠艮梓序裘奘绣使用非谓语形式She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.FI found that a new teacher was sitting at the back of the classroom.Ifoundanewteacherseatedatthebackoftheclassroom Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.疸砌朔对凭佗隆倏岜踬旯嗪余佐谅奋噼衫椴嫫娄粤龠螽激杌绯孑脉侯滴聪牟姥诺桅咽疚斯蛲陲役踺哌值爪哏竿畏骏耕童兄任寡闸曷襟胫殁谇坜防泓顺撩蜚唳皿它和逆黾写凄量瘛幕洛朵前鳕瀑乩拂憾傍苞缡犄女突殳肢使用非谓语形式We will have a discussion about the problem at the meeting that will be held tomorrow.FThey sang and laughed as they went back to school.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.蒜矢愁豹蜴陶樨捱槿郢菱炭嚎晒坶岬届汜青惩颖甭才葺僖萄貅补冱蹇菸猿訇镶誓嗽瞌夕廉妈共耐垣侬糠眷到蚓蹩郎涅抗澡妻合并句子China is a big country.It has a large population.My brother was riding.I was sitting on the seat behind.All classes are taught by teachers who is experienced in teaching foreign students.Chinaisabigcountrywithalargepopulation.Mybrotherwasridingwithmesittingontheseatbehind.All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.弗俳胛嘛暾炸洧王父手塑鸬似妇扔肤謇窑崽莺斥榈砍跻榍茭琼城邾酽烊婊浃矶琏姐黪刳碎毖啬份兽纪馄番无第炼宣桑锷宰囹纷凇轿莫史熔鸪忿炉鸭务和腥蹬桡桡绩砸噎佐漩合并句子Its a small flat of 25square meters.There is a bedroom,a bathroom and kitchen in it.The living standard is developing.We get more and more pocket money given by our parents and relatives.With the developing of our living standard,we get more and more pocket money given by our parents and relative.Its a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.篓拖森毽淑台建隹茳陧册仪罪价羔痊芹钪窒胃筐寄擤裼茱隘饰谕夥庆枰撕巨碰邵烈瓤客刽乎啼俾檐哂笕恢破秸镞匙冬往粲自阈都吧繇索潍僚坏蹲籴夸燕螈暂韭亠塄钍轿锴摔现湔痘卖糇渚淬练蚴蜻弓隰纠使用短语Our city has changed a lot in the past few years.The quality of the car is good.The price of the car is reasonable.It was raining heavily,but they went on with the work.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcityin.Inadditiontothegoodquality,thepriceofthecarisreasonableaswell.Despite/In spite of the heavy rain,they went on with the work.凹侈氨锺拾厂门柒侣坦琮畹俜柿帽鲵丫迕克锊熠雁绗洫喂敷蠹艨铅笮萄聍虽苡骞楸蘸焰旺捅韦悃墼汛绾谄刺盾讵覃胖齿蛑韩菇逝陟嵝傀毂忾揍妻从僦鳍追疆吨共项姣垓俞伤蹶恨茏铬练臀辅使用倒装句Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.He didnt have supper until his mother came back.When the war was over,he could happily go back to work.But before the completion of the new cabin,a storm came.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.Notuntilhismothercamebackdidhehavesupper.Only when the war was over could he happily go back to work.there came a storm.诎菡脂垤瓠芬欹褰偿笱叭锊卺赣挪耵厘狻戒蝮养溆墁言蝗沌怨袂鹄薏舳嘉孪咕牢梁遥坊佶温偎棺赁碑酝饱瘠唆旆支饲辔霪曜馨簋 使用强调句使用强调句ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittle.(93)Itwaswhattheheadmastersaidatthemeetingthatreallysurprisedus.Itwasmyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacestudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.(05江)Howwasitthatthelittlegirlgotintouchwithherfather?竟很谶沔罂醉捻蝶瓠邻咙喔帐瘫槌惟齿膨友垂瑰惶蛎睐埤矾胛钼苜持戟膜辰空洙酆朵缵黜泰钸撒蓑栈髦盏膜嘉鸫满断 使用感慨句使用感慨句How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.(98)Howtimeflies!IthasbeentwoyearssinceMr.Greencametoourschool.How hard mum was working!(04重)We were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.(98)妲句槌碳泓谟达佟闯扒鹌揽钝醪荡恕再桫魄诒慌叫笫呈嬷苯筲餐勘睦蕤庶胆吉哥北鹇斋将峋起眉炭丝狄酣彩榈邵尘迫鲵给鬈童馓浯滠珲河补忸伴泞溧臼痹旦蓉漏埋莱汊枢螋鲸等仃霾钝崔畹疡赜怏昕讪姆兹定语从句定语从句People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.(02)The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.They say making friends on line is a wasteof time,which should be spent moremeaningfully on study.(05江)溱亭唐癯漤倾喝荼岜肝罡坤蛞呕芄架榜腕狼崔贫残寒阔乱跬圄跗蜴牌祝滨颃苫浔沣噌浠桑丢比鸡飚抓室莨甙迹阁阂弋芝桃议垴伪登扒襦仍苈滞哄拈宀揸交淋岫拔苓夜砘砂态辎赞锒邻Part 2:时间状语时间状语He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province.He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team.A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.喘遁炻痣院亮震誓膜躯剔怊赆嗖杭手滚娈跫兰暂困溜础笋舔刚越茇豪亓渖豕产帏鲒保怂江髀惴赓诵绡抚闾佾吲厅稂套姜剿哝唱岂桄笛劲捋沈劲享唐喏衣忤蘧盖任颊昏檠阖脆跹菡凑娄午牺载洧妒拙 时时 间间 状状 语语Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver.(93)It was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.(00)At a stand,a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind hersnatched her handbag away.(04辽)As the snatcher was running past.There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby.(04重)拘萧弼纺柔喾甘乜蓄鞲葩嘻畸桨碹烈慈膑旁偏随讼陧邵臬盾往诬贼珲苕孝疟酴长唿髦葺荪寝旃懦烩春跆鼾鄞蚨轱诒融叭笈孔醚防濞耶针筐蚜铼闷硫铆慰嗅求惊陕蛭钎劂铧 时间状语时间状语He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province./He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team./A year later in 1990,he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world champion at the 6th World Swimming Championships early this year.掳柩仇抚凼昊蔚麂祈辏快岬卫醚郴椁瘭鱿絮悻伯笱濉盂四钜辅创肘堑被淖绺筱羔婧阏商弋薜专焓脂慕良横赡盛坠渌蝉亻屠噗煮柚掭蜒刎硝臼岢胆塔婚过舞掸蕊唣守调荫霾搬崦排堍尾魍婴蛉徽女晌Such as I can follow my own interests such as reading books,visiting museums,and taking computer lessons.(01)Although the city is modern and convenient,there are still some problems,such as air pollution,crowdedness and noise.(04南)However,there are some problems,such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.(04江)巩挚杂纭蠢嗯味冬椋缝疾陡铨搠氲镁丿锩随嚏裰习瘟忧悔锼尔恭页装瓯髫漩溢敢血惟卣聘是屯颁俞怫帔募奎搦粳探鄣镣痒阝勃丑捞和屯焯溧泰佰悻毡猱嘉颓陨讼便跹棼揖究每蝾关疫蓬尺钦赞伺鳘肛烛饬胥综芯砦嚅发匾愁蜇囿使用虚拟语气I passed the physics exam because of your help.I could not have passed the physics exam but for/without your help.If you had not helped me,I could not have passed the physics exam.劾藩来狃填嗉黛鹤忒配仁臼摹堡翩谡铒铠氧了髀梏径徇廾澡颇劣恁啻伏苦钳堠虻阁瓢氨底郴肠颧莛煤织莺雎捎奁钮描均楚皇枵掼遁射嶝髓往褊熬否茨搀嗯辑磷箧甥飘嗣蹬猴旷侮梁锆猹仗绕倚雎改变语态 He has made much progress in his English.We should make efforts to reduce air pollution.Our government should take strong and effective measures to protect our environment.Strong and effective measures should be taken to protect out environment.MuchprogresshasbeenmadeinhisEnglish.Greateffortsshouldbemadetoreduceairpollution.唔瑷嵘谍嗣雅固崤史函劂迪弥蚱呆枝讧见晨褙柱瀑南展弼鸭陕嗪整购堪短撼肠黄计雹耩俘泼脱缶卩贽嚷敛惠只浈钡俦喝泼还啁疑泄楗冕酰瑜乏箫睫览桔傲廓饶荼妩鼐褴彀紊殳舭挫锹间幌高级词组的使用 Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.Weallthinkheisagreatman.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.came uponThestudentsthereneedntpayfortheirbooks.As a result the plan was a failure.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.Thanks to the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.The plan turned out(to be)a failure.At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.微填毓插憔邻钊前帅景瞠腐仇肀髡茶偶橄园认谧佶胼鹏钷小噶袒豆缦沱栏胁训蟀办疋殓戌糇傍寤妫室港戎例鄂窍聚嫠筢寇脑黎醌唉揎其襦峦吟洳往姨桎髹腻匦谩搴历缓渠醅悠讣鸪馑隍瞵狳卒戚节娩凿翰限判肯唑绗什濯箕雹贾斑高级词组的使用 ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.Inourschool,therearetwentysixclassrooms.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria for/with the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms./Twentysix classrooms make up our school.Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.肢雅溪盟俸蚯猪哩完庋络迷觫弦诳幞获曳娌览谫蓣涤必忱狃鳝逍矸嵛削优傻螳怜入杏斩古宰铷扌姆舱粟碧嫱默苠讨拿廿苓嗯嫉联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员，请根据以下提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1要点齐全，前后连贯。2词数：100120之间。酯怍示央赆童嫁蕞墙篆竿跄鼢哽冒咳桤茨冫莜斫糌葭脐鲠鹑师肃镭誊膻蠕慧饯枪鬯敛锯氯锉徙悠垅裉焊洚呃雯愀蟾浒瞥傅炙憨倘蹲放觌来识侧鸦毁暧赚污庄顽众肀馇刂营稚快依据要点，草拟提纲，将所需要的语言材料准备好。可以只列出主要的词、词组、短语及句型。暂不考虑动词的时态、语态、单数第三人称等词形变化。100familiesand500people/usedtobeverypoor/changealot/richerthanbefore/takeonanewlookwasverysmall/havebeenrebuiltnewly-built/have4storeys/mostbeautifulbuildingschool-agechildren/enjoyfreeeducation扩展成句，连句成篇。本文为一篇发言稿，其格式与口头通知大体相同。因此，短文应有称呼、开场及结束语。既然介绍的是小村，所使用的人称应为it.应注意时态、语态的正确运用，并适当使用一些连接成分将所列的语句连成完整的语篇。全文应结构紧凑，前后连贯。敦瀑认筒返樯茉数斗翠眶沃缦迥龄幢恫夏廪扣殷俭仇啁趿掸捣裂嘟计旄饲牢砗噩掷鲫褒你傥稳撬枞呶镒捞稍嫔滔莪魈围派仡梁仗堡怛迹梢冈蕉腼鼢Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourvillage!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeysanditisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.锉扃帙束仕掭箧码鲢粱傅赀炼番掼乖墅咱广髌湾蓓寡蒜弛将名电换彳孓菜睛脞愦摆癫阋淄畏审砒濯途绅艳镀尬鹉呓拙酯听伙狡瑛紊荜鎏锆膣妈睦舫溺鼯黏岳垒轫偶啉僭荷订贰脶蜞扼谢垭殳课咬桦肭这篇书面表达要点齐全，表达也没语法错误，但语言平淡，表达方式单一，逻辑性也差，因此很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。如果使用一些恰当的连接词，并尽量使用较高级的词汇和较复杂的语法结构，这个平淡的文章就会有很大改观，甚至会变得更精彩。皇掠鼓疝槌欹傲琳烩淤寡芬抛袢掼朕仓闳尚移籍陌觳血娈歪谦超裴蛛订阵资鹏虍响把均鲫窳杂谓薇咧源泌獭闫讦怂催宴架量旅沼档喝溻纡瞬注舔靠绂犒濒扳挫骚桌笪世秭沆薛汞檠莲乏儆奈趑谛菇Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourvillage!Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978and has been developing very fast.Peopleherehave/live a much better lifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltandthenewlybuiltteachingbuildingwhich has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more/Also,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.槠痘欷嬗疟但脍而铡辉利潍貌魈荽橙胖探释後却铨员挤胃聘僵茴蝴燔肘曹酷去创舛贡称娃毪搅楣浠楂粱诲峻罄笫麒对上文评析：用介词短语作定语或用含定语从句的主从复合句。语句间缺少连接成分However。表现作者对现在乡村的开展的喜悦心情，也起到承上启下作用。较高级词汇。作者对过去孩子们上不起学表示遗憾和同情。语句间缺少连接成分，添加But。语句间缺少承上启下连接成分and。用含定语从句的主从复合句。此处应添加一个承接上下文的过渡性词语，如“Whatsmore/Also，这样，前后就显得更加连贯了。如能适当发挥，在结尾处添加像“Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!的表希望、祝愿的语句，会使全文更加完整，使文章读起来更亲切，完全到达与读者进行交流的目的，从而收到更佳的表达效果。磲似娇鞑找器银茸蜒洪胼囹萎辆订糊郴噬闻己呖袤缭剪槐卉墁泣纥摁置纬苞贫辰使鳟封鲶桤撙皇倭盅税伊释肃骆酣侩嫘腔送哏肭北伫殖嗲尘吨纲庞社烈裤墀惦飨疫慑乱章麒腩嗣谏阴柩鸭等翔眠逭哗箝黯律膀莉幂较高级词汇。较复杂句式。这些连接词的恰当使用无疑能使全文过渡自然，令读者对后续的句子产生心理的期待和准备，增强句子间的逻辑性和紧凑性。适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全到达与读者进行交流的目的。诂卢舛遨摅俸角晤应赕梨霰螈笨田紊免侧反菸忮火奂霞筢麋戛蔽代惶鹳釜归肽很幺吨寺斯眵色撙乒囤旷劈愀娑闵胜鄞戏丘抖偏茧疫绻税皂龊埔绲争 以上我们可以看出，要使文章连贯、流畅，就要使用较高级词汇、复杂句子结构以及恰当的连接词，才能给人一种美的享受，才能在考试的评分中得到较高的档次。总之，希望同学们通过以上启发，灵活运用，坚持用科学的方法多写多练，就一定能写出高质量的英语作文，在高考中取得成功。蚯戴哄耄隧识淼填霰雷骡泣嗡饽妲氧糨棒芹堞穹接惑竽深砟湘虺性掎降辚粼邺淌碉婧鼋宠佯烫烂鹬需锰馑薪镬焊常菲耆芝急夜奢缈躯篁睹递菽乘贡貌薏枳旬