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TEM4,WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Youhavegottoknowthatyourclassmate,Michael,isorganizingaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Andyouarethinkingofjoiningthetrip.Writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestintheexcursionandaskingforinformationontwodetailsrelatedtotheexcursion.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.,Note-writing,1格式(2分)其中日期与称呼共1分;结尾为1分,(不论大小错误都扣1分)。正确日期(Date):位置在右上角或左上角,如:April23rd,2006;April17th,2010;April17,2010;23/4/2006;4/23/2006;Apr.23;etc.正确称呼(Heading):位置在日期下一行左侧,如:DearMichael,(:)/Michael,(:),正确结尾(Ending):如:Yourssincerely,/Sincerelyyours,/Trulyyours,/Yours,etc.(若在一行,名字没写或人名等扣1分)格式需前后一致,如全左或全右,若不符合,则扣1分。凡不符合上述正确格式或要求均扣1分。,内容(3分):Organizing+interest+twodetails(少一点扣一分,最多扣3分,twodetails需要有所展开,若只是提到whenandwhere扣一分)3语言(4分):严重错误1分,一个句子或同类错误扣1分,拼写等小错误两个扣一分,最多扣4分。4语言得体性(1分):总分在8分及以上可考虑加此分。,评分总体要求:1)语言没有错误,格式对,内容完整,语言得体,字数符合要求(50,80);2)便条总字数(包括三部分格式)要求在5060字,不到50或多于80(9行或9行以上)扣1分;3)该部分总分为10分,6分为及格线,DearMichael,Doyourememberme?IamMary.IheardatripwhichIwanttojoinitverymuch.IamSointerestedinit.Andyouhavejoinedittoo.Sowouldyouhelpmetojointhetrip?Iamreallywanttojoinit.Thankyou!yoursturly_Mary_,score3format2language3content-2,April23rd,2006DearMichael,Iveheardfromthatyouareorganizingaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Iminterestedinitandwanttojointhetrip.CouldyoutellmewhereshallwegoandhowmuchshouldIpayforthisexcursion.IhopethatyoucangivemeananswerbeforethisThursday.Thanksalot.Sincerelyyours,Franny,3.score7format1language-1content0,Apr.23,2006DearMichael,Ivegottoknowthatyouareorganizingaweekendexcursionfortheclass.Iminterestedinit,andwanttotakepartinthetrip.IwanttoknowhowmuchtheexcursionwillcostandwhatIshoulddotoprepareforit.Ifyoucangivemesuchinformation,Illbeveryappreciative.Myphonenumberis1343324839.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Thanks.yours,score9format1language-0content0,妙语锦句,Makeanappointment:Idliketoseeyouifyouhavetime.Howaboutcomingto?Whatdoyousayifwetalkaboutitat?Iwonderifitwouldbepossibleforustomeetat,CouldIseeyousometimenextweek,asIdliketoIdliketomakeanappointmenttoseeyou.Woulditpossibleforustotalktoinpersonaboutthat?Whenisitconvenientforyou?Whattimewouldbeconvenientforyou?,Makeanapology:ImustapologizeforIdoapologizeforIamvery/really/extremely/awefully/terriblysorryaboutIcanassureyouthatwewill,Invitation:IampleasedtoinviteyoutoIwaswonderingifyoucouldcomeIwouldliketoinviteyoutoIwouldbeveryhappyifyoucouldcome,MakearequestIamsorrytotroubleyou,butnobodywouldcomeintomymindtohelpmeexceptyou.Iwouldliketoseekhelpfromyou.Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.,ExpressthanksManythanksforyourPleaseacceptmysincereappreciation/thanksforIamtrulygratefultoyoufor,CongratulationsCongratulationsonyoursuccess/achievements!Imsogladtohearofyourwinningtheprizeinthecontest.PleaseacceptmyheartiestcongratulationonyourgraduationfromIwanttocongratulateyouwithallmyheart.,PleaseallowmetocongratulateyouonPleaseallowmetoextendmyheartycongratulationstoyou.,SympathyOurdeepestsympathyiswithyou.Wewishtoexpressoursympathywithyouinyourlossandtoletyouknowthatourthoughtsarewithyou.Immostgrievedtolearnof,IwouldliketoexpressmysorrowatWewereshockedatthesadnewsthat,Exercises,Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversitysswimmingclub.Hehasinvitedyoutojointheclub,butyoulikesomeothersport.Writehimanote,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.,Suggestedanswer,April22nd,2007DearJimmy,Itsverykindofyoutoinvitemetojointheuniversitysswimmingclub.Iammostgratefultobeasked.However,Ivealreadyjoinedabasketballclub.YouknowIlikeplayingbasketballverymuch.ImafraidIdonothaveenoughtimetotakepartintwosports.IamverysorryforthatandreallyregretthatIwouldmisssuchanexcellentchanceofenjoyingswimmingwithyou.Yours,Mike,Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWang.Writehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeeting.Youshouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting.,Suggestedanswer,May15,2010DearProfessorWang,IamterriblysorrythatImissedtheappointmentwithyou.Yesterday,mygrandmasuddenlywentill,andmyparentswerenotathome,soIhadtotakehertohospital.WhenIgottoyouroffice,itwastoolate,andyouhadalreadyleft.Pleaseforgiveme.,Iknowyourebusythesedays,butIwonderifyoucouldagreetomeetmeat2oclockonFridayafternoon.Imlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourtruly,LiPing,MarkingsysteminTEM4composition,marksaregivenaccordingtooverallimpression.Basically,fourelementsaretakenintoconsideration.Firstly,contentshouldbetothepoint.Allideasanddetailsshouldbecloselyrelatedtothetopicandthemainthemewhichisoftenclearlystatedalready.,Secondly,allideasanddetailsshouldbelogicallyandsmoothlyconnectedbycarefularrangement,byusingconnectorsorothertransitionaldevices.,Thirdly,thecompositionshowsnomistakesingrammarandusage.Lastly,thepaperexhibitsalucidandneatlayout,whichincludesappropriatetitle,identifiablehandwriting,propercapitalization,indentionofeachparagraph,properpunctuation,correctspelling.,TEM4作文评分标准(2009),说明:该项目满分15分。根据考生的思想与表达、语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分。分项可以打0.5分。“思想与表达”满分为7分,按考生的表现赋分:1234567较差一般良好优秀,“语言运用能力”满分为6分,按考生的表现赋分:123456较差一般良好优秀“写作规范”满分为2分,按考生的表现赋分:0.511.52较差一般良好优秀,(I)思想与表达(ideasandarguments)(满分:7分),思想内容(ideacontent)内容切题内容充实观点明确论据支持论点有独到见解,表达效果(effectiveness)表达清晰流畅有说服力,篇章组织结构(rhetoricalorganization)每段有主题句句间衔接自然段间过度自然第一部分明确提出观点最后一部分自然得出结论段落排列自然合理,(II)语言运用能力(Languageuse)(满分:6分),准确性(correctness)语法正确句子结构正确固定搭配正确习语正确用词准确,丰富性(richness)词汇丰富句子形式多样得体性(appropriateness)语气恰当语言地道流利度(fluency)完成规定词数,(III)写作规范(Mechanics)(满分:2分),单词拼写正确标点符号正确大小写正确书写美观卷面整洁,PatternofaTypicalMiniatureTEM4Writing,TheintroductoryparagraphWithaviewtopiquingthereaderscuriosity,arousingthereaderinterestanddrawingtheirattentiontothetopic,youshouldusuallyincludeintheintroductoryparagraphthefollowing:,1)offeringsomebasicbackgroundinformationaboutthetopic;2)referringtothetopic;3)statingyourpointofviewonthetopic,thebodyThebodyisthemainpartofanassay,whichclearlyandlogicallypresentsyourfacts,ideasandexamples.Inthispart,youshouldfullydiscusswhatisintroducedintheopening,andyourdiscussionshouldbeanaturalandlogicalfollow-upofthebeginning.,theconcludingparagraphTheconclusionofanessayshouldbeconcise,emphaticandforceful.Itisoftenmadeupofasummaryofthemainpointsdiscussed,arestatementofyourviewpoint,and,ifpossible,anaturallyextendedproposal.Remembertoleaveadeepimpressiononyourreaders.,Awell-organizedessayshouldbeproperly-proportioned.Itisadvisablethatthelargestportionshouldbedevotedtothebody(70%),forthediscussionofthetopicisthemostinformativeandimportantpart.Theintroductionandconclusioninanessayarenormallybrief(15%each).,TurningoffTV:AQuietHourItisreportedthatAmericanswatchTValmostformorethantenhoursonaverageeveryday(事实陈述作引言).Iwouldliketoproposethatforsixtyminuteseachevening,alltelevisionbroadcastingintheUnitedStatesbeprohibitedbylaw(引出中心思想作者的观点).,Letustakeaserious,reasonablelookatwhattheresultsmightbeifsuchaproposalwereaccepted(段落主题句与全文中心思想紧密相关).Familiesmightusethetimeforarealfamilyhour(层次1).(举例说明)WithoutthedistractionofTV,theymightsitaroundtogetherafterdinnerandactuallytalktooneanotherabouttheirproblemsfromthegenerationgaptothehighdivorceratetosomeformsofmentalillness.Byusingthequietfamilyhourtodiscusstheirproblems,theymightgettoknoweachotherbetter,andtolikeeachotherbetter.FreefromTV,familiescouldrediscovermoreactivepastimes(层次2).(举例说明)Theymighttakearidetogethertowatchthesunset.Ortheymighttakeawalktogetherandseetheneighborhoodwithfresh,neweyes.WithfreetimeandnoTV,childrenandadultsmightrediscoverreading(层次3).,(进一步解释)ThereismoreentertainmentinagoodbookthaninamonthoftypicalTVprogramming.Manythingsareoftenlearnedfromreading.Amoreliteratenewgenerationcouldbeaproductofthequiethour.,TheideaofanhourwithoutTVisnotradical.Duringthequiethour,Americanscantalk,read,playgamesandinventnewactivities(总结).WhynothaveatryTurnoffTVforaquiethour(提出倡议),TelevisionasaBetterSourceofNewsAmongthethreemassmediatelevision,newspaperandradio,Iregardtelevisionasabettersourceofnews(表明自己的观点).,Mystatementthattelevisionisabettersourceofnews(段首句用同位语从句与首段中心思想衔接)isbasedonthefollowingtworeasons(对全段内容加以限定).Thefirstreasonisthattelevisioncanreportnewsmorequickly(层次1).Wecangetthenewsatthesametimewhensomethingishappeningorimmediatelyaftersomethinghappened(拓展句).,However(转折,引出其它媒体的缺点),newspaperscanonlyofferthenewsthathappenedadayortwodaysago.Thesecondreasonisthattelevisioncanreportnewsmorevividlyandimpressively(层次2).WithsoundsandpicturesonTV,wecanbedeeplyimpressedbythenewsasifwewerepersonallyonthespot(拓展句).But(转折,指出其它媒体的不足)whenwetrytogetnewsfromthenewspaperorradio,wehavetomakeeffortstoformaconcreteimage,whichisalwaystiresomeandtime-consuming.,Accordingtotheabovementionedreasons,wecaneasilydrawaconclusionthattelevisionisreallysuperiortoothermediaforobtainingnews.,TheMaindifferenceBetweenMyCollegeLifeandMyMiddleSchoolLife,Everycollegestudentwouldagreethatcampuslifeincollegeisdifferentfromthatinmiddleschool.Butwhatisthemaindifferencebetweencollegelifeandmiddleschoollifeafterall?(提问式作引言句)Myanswerisalwaysthesame:incollegeIenjoyagreaterdegreeofindependence(表明观点).,IprefercollegelifetomiddleschoollifemainlybecauseIamindependentbothindailylifeandinmyacademicstudies(段首句表原因,随后作比较).IncollegeIwillarrangemydailylifebymyselfandmakedecisionsofmyownwill.Asforacademicstudy,Ihaveaplentyoffreetimeafterclassforself-studyandlearnwhateverIaminterestedin.TobesuccessfulinallthecoursesIhavetolearn,Ievencanhaveaworkableplanofmyown.Incontrast,Ilivedadependentlifein,middleschool.Mydailylifewasarrangedallbymyparents.Ievencouldnotdecidewhattoeatandwhattowear,formyparentsusuallyhadthefinalsay.AndIwasjammedwithwhattheteacherswantedtofeedme,withoutconsideringwhetherIreallylikedtolearnornot.,Inshort,mycollegelifeisquitedifferentfrommymiddleschoollife.Incollege,Iammuchmoreindependentinmydailylifeandstudy.Tothosenewcomers,Iwouldsuggestthattheyrelyonthemselvesandbeanindependentman(通过比较得出结论,并提建议).,WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?,Withtheimprovementofourlifestandard,peoplehavemoremoneytospendontourism.Now,tourismisaboomingbusinessinChina.But,somepeopleworrythattoomanytouristscouldbringharmtotheenvironment,whileothersoppose.Formypart,Iagreewiththefirstopinion.,Thereareseveralreasonsformyopinion.Firstly,itisdifficulttotelltoomanytouriststoobeytherulesoftheplacetheyvisit.And,althoughtheylearnedthisrules,mostofthemdontwanttoobeytherules.Theywanttodoeverythingatwill.Moreover,morepeopleinoneplacewillcausemoreargues.Whentheyhaveaarguewitheachother,thearguealwayswillconvertintofight.,And,theymaydamagethepublicresource.Finally,toomanypeoplehaveatravelwillleadtoacrowedinbus,transandplanes.Thissistuationisveryobiousinthegoldernweek.,Formanypeople,theydontvisitforatruepurpose.So,Ithinkweshouldhaveourownactivities,notalwayshaveatour.Evenifwehaveatour,weshouldobeytherules,andprotectourenvironment.,得分:4评语:部分跑题,论据荒唐,语言差。,WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?,Currently,theresmuchtalkaboutwhethertourismbringharmtotheenvironment.Somepeoplethinktourismdoesntdamagetheenvironmentseriously,whileothersholdthedifferentopinions.Theythinktourismbringusmoredamagethanitsbenefits.AsfarasIamconcerned,Isidewiththeformer,inthebeliefthattourismsbenefitsarelargerthanitsshortages.,Admittedly,tourismbringharmtotheenvironment,asadvocatedbymany,hasitsimportantroletoplayinprotectingtheenvironment.Asisknowntoall,moretourismmeansmoredamagetotheenvironment.However,therearenumerousmeritsfortourismthatgivingus.Firstthingsfirst,tourismbringsusalotofadvantagesineconomy.,Thatistosay,thebetterthetourismis,themoremoneywewillmake.Take2008OlympicGamesasanexample,theGamesattractsoundsoftouristsallovertheworldtoBeijing,whichgiveapushtoBeijingsshopsandplacesofinterests.Asaresult,Beijingdevelopsitsmarketslargely.,Second,tourismcontributsalottoenvironmentprotecting.Allofusknowthatweshouldpaymuchattentiontoenvironmentprotectingastomakeaprogressintourism.Itsnecessarytohavealastingdevelopment.Forinstance,BeijinghadmadealotofpreparationtoprotecttheenvironmentduringtheOlympicGames.Obviously,therewasnotmuchdamageinBeijingbecauseoftourismbooming.,Takingalltheseconsiderationsintoaccount,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthattourismcannotbringmuchdamagetoourenvironment.Andtomakesureofit,ourgovernmentsshouldtakekindsofmeasurestoprotecttheenvironment.,得分:7评语:观点混乱,论据不够充分,表达较生硬,词汇,语法,和拼写错误多,WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?,Astherapiddevelopmentofmarketeconomyandincreasingincome,itisnaturalforpeopleinChinatoseekformaterialenjoyments.Andmanyofthemchoosetotravel,whichcanbothrelaxthemselvesandbroadentheirminds.However,asfarasImconcerned,astourismbringsalotofgoodtomodernpeople,itcanalsobringharmtoourenvironment.,Tobeginwith,whenwetraveltoafamousplace,weoftenbuythosefoodthatareespeciallyproducedonlyinthatarea.Itisoftenthecasethatwedropwastedfoodaroundafterfinishingeatingit.Forexample,wecanoftenfindfoodthatisusedtofeedanimalsthrownonthegroundinazoo.Inaddition,manysymbolicbuildingsofplacesofinterestareeasytobedamagedbypeopleoflowawareness.,Theymaywriteonthemtorecollecthisorhertrip.Whatsmore,manypeopleareinbadhabitssuchasspitingonthegroundwhiletheyaretravelling,whichcanalsobecountedasapollutiontotheenvironment.,Tocometoaconclusion,thoughtourismcanpleasepeople,itmayalsobringharmtotheenvironment.Itisimportantforustoreducetheharmtoitsminimumdegreeandprotectourenvironmentforourowngood.,得分:9.5评语:观点尚明确,内容欠充实,表达不够流畅,语法和用词不准,有少数拼写错误,WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?,Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomyandadvancementoftransportation,peoplenowadaysareprovidedwithmorepossibilitiesandchoicestospendtheirholidays.Tourism,therefore,enjoysincreasingpopularityamongChinesepeople.However,theboomingindustryhasbroughtaseriesofproblemstotheenviroment,whichinmyopinion,severelydamagethenaturalbalance.,Firstofall,asthenumberoftouristsgrowquickly,naturalspotscannolongeraccommodatethosevisitors.Forexample,lastyearwhenIvisitedYuLongMountaininLiJiang,Ifoundthatthegrasslandwasnearlyoccupiedbytouristssittingonit,chattingandhavingpicnic.Andmanyofthemleftgabbagebehindwhentheyleft.Thiswasdefinitelyaterribledamagetotheoriginallyweakenviroment.,Secondly,thegrowingnoisescausedbythetouristsmaylargelydisturbthepeacefulnessofthenatureandthelivesofwildanimals.Itwasreportedbyanewspaperthat,duetotheincreasingtourists,someswansinQingHaiLakecannotgivebirthtotheirchildren.,Tosumup,theboomingtourismmaybringalotofnegativeeffectstotheenviroment.Andweneedtodoasmuchaswecantoavoidthem.,得分:10.5评语:内容切题,观点明确,能够用具体事例说明主题,语法,用词和拼写有少量错误,TourismHarmsOurEnvironment,Haveyoueverbeenawareoftheslightdamageyoudototheenvironmentwhenyoutravel?Mosttouristsfailtorealizetheir“contribution”topollutingourenvironment.Inmyopinion,whiletourismboostseconomy,itdoesbringharmtotheenvironment.,First,numeroustouristspollutetheenvironmentbyleavingallkindsofgarbagebehind.Forexample,itissaidthatcleanersonNanjingRoadhavetospendhourscleaningoutthosegumsproducedbytourists.Second,touristsalsodamagetheenvironmentbycravingontreesandsteppingongrass.Sometouristsarereallyfondofcravingtheirnamesonthoseplantswhenevertheytravel.Othersneverhesitatetostepongrasseventhoughthereisusuallyasignsaying“keepoff”.,Third,tourismdevelopersharmtheenvironmentbyover-exploitingournature.Eagertocreatemoretouristsattractionsites,theycutoftreesandbuilduphotelsfromtimetotime.Itneveroccurredtothemthattheconsequencesofdoingthisisdisastrous.,Inconclusion,althoughsomepeoplemightarguethattourismisbeneficialtotheeconomy,itisinevitablethattourismhasbeendamagingandwillcontinuetodamageourenvironment.Unlesswetakeimmediateactionstopreventtouristsanddevelopersfromfurtherpollutingtheenvironment,wewillbefacedwithseriousenvironmentproblems.,得分:13.5评语:内容切题,观点明确,论据充分,有独到见解;语言准确得体,词汇丰富,有个别拼写错误。,- 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