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1、会计学1英语作文英语作文(zu wn)指导指导第一页，共19页。第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示(tsh)要点具体做法：用笔(yn b)勾画第1页/共19页第二页，共19页。2008春节前，在我国的部分地区出现了百年罕见的特大暴风雪，给人民带来了重大损失，造成若干人伤亡，很多人深受失去家园之苦。获悉这一消息后，人们纷纷伸出了援助之手，你们班级也不甘落后。请以班委会的名义根据提示写一封100词左右的英文倡议书。要求语义连贯，中心突出，详略得当，可适当(shdng)发挥。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)提示： 1、暴风雪造成(zo chn)的重大损失； 2、大家纷纷献出爱心； 3、

2、作为学生我们应该做些什么？第2页/共19页第三页，共19页。第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落(dunlu)整理写作要点不要(byo)遗漏要点！第3页/共19页第四页，共19页。Write an Outline可以(ky)用英文或中文IntroductionMain bodyConclusionGreat trouble Show love all over the countryWhat should we students do?(看写作要求）(自拟）(自拟）（已给出）第4页/共19页第五页，共19页。写作(xizu)前：确定人称(rnchng)、时态写作(xizu

3、)后： 检查第5页/共19页第六页，共19页。词数足够、要点完整(wnzhng)，没有语法错误Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It brought us lots of trouble. Thousands of people were trapped in the stations, in the airports and on the highways. In such a heavy snowstorm, a lo

4、t of people suffered from the loss of their homes. What was worse, many people were hurt , even lost their lives. After the news was reported, people all over the country showed their great love in different ways. Some gave food, clothes, drinking water, medicine and everything necessary, and some e

5、ven gave money to them. As students, of course we should try our best to help those people in trouble. So offer your only pocket money, lets help to fill the world with love. class committee第6页/共19页第七页，共19页。Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring

6、 Festival. It brought lots of trouble to the people. Some people lost their lives.People all over the country donated food, drinking water, colthes to them. As we students , what should we do? We should donate our pocket money to them. We can also send them our old books. 扣分原因(yunyn)一词数不够！每少5词，扣1分，约

7、少40词，只得12分。第7页/共19页第八页，共19页。Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It was the most serious snowstorm during the centry. It brought people lots of trouble. Many people were hurt. Some people even lost their lives. A lot of people suffer

8、ed from the loss of their homes. After the news was reported, we are all sorry for them. We should try our best to help them out of trouble! We should save our pocket money to donate it to them. We can also send the books and clothes that we neednt use to them. Let the world be full of love!扣分原因二遗漏要

9、点(yodin)！少一要点(yodin)，约扣5分，只得15分。加入(jir)献爱心第8页/共19页第九页，共19页。 时态(sh ti)、语态、结构、短语搭配为大错，1处1分。拼写、大小写、标点符号为小错，3处1分。A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. it coursed us many problems. Many people hurt. Some even lost their life. They suffered from the lost of

10、 their homes. After hear this, people all over the country give food, drinking water, medicine and everything necessary to them, some even donated money for them. As we students, what should we do? We are have pocket money， We can donate it to them. We can also give the books or clothes that are use

11、less to them. Lets take action actively!Itcausedwere hurtlivesloss ofhearing gavetohaveuseful. 只得(zhd)13分第9页/共19页第十页，共19页。另外作文中书写不规范，卷面(jun min)不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面(jun min)整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用(byng)胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。第10页/共19页第十一页，共19页。写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲，根据段落(dunlu)整理写作

12、要点。写作(xizu)前：确定(qudng)人称、时态写作后： 检查第11页/共19页第十二页，共19页。提示：1、描述你认为最有意义的上月北京之行。2、谈谈北京今昔之比。3、第29届奥运会将于2008年在北京举行。北京是一个美丽的现代化城市。目前好多体育场馆(gymnasium)正在新建。很多人在忙着学英语。中国有志把它办成一届“绿色奥运，人文奥运，科技奥运”。参考词汇：“Green, Humanity and science”（绿色，奥运，科技奥运）全国人民都很高兴(goxng)。4、中国是一个具有悠久历史的国家，而且正在变得越来越强大。Example 1根据提示完成下面(xi mian)

13、你（Li Ming）给Jim一封100词左右的信。建议他有空一定去看看。第12页/共19页第十三页，共19页。Write an Outline.Introduction Main bodyconclusion姓名to JimHow are you?北京之行（自拟）今昔(jnx)之比（自拟）奥运会（看要求）悠久历史（看要 求）一般(ybn)过去时现在(xinzi)完成时一般将来时现在进行时一般现在时I hope you will come to Beijing soon.第13页/共19页第十四页，共19页。Lets practice!第14页/共19页第十五页，共19页。 Example 2近

14、来，国家启动了“阳光体育工程”，旨在提高青少年身体素质。你校为响应号召，开展了一系列体育活动，请根据图表提供的信息和汉语提示，写一篇不少于100个词的短文。内容必须包括提示中的三个要点：1、学校开展了哪些体育活动？最受欢迎的是什么？（见图）2、简述你参加的一次体育活动，如一场(y chn)体育比赛，一次体育锻炼的经历、一堂体育课3、体育活动对你学习、生活第15页/共19页第十六页，共19页。Lets enjoy our own compositions!第16页/共19页第十七页，共19页。I hope all of you can get full marks (20)in the composition item!第17页/共19页第十八页，共19页。Thank you !第18页/共19页第十九页，共19页。