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1、书面表达突破 ( 一)图表类图表类基础写作是以图表的形式呈现内容要点的,要点明确 ,范围具体。写作时要结合写作内容中的提示确定需要表达的内容要点,有时还要留意前面的文字说明部分。此类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,弄清信息点之间的关系,提炼出中心思想,然后进行分析、概括和归纳。写作时要注意：(1)图表和数据内容不必全部描述；善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率；过去特定的时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时；(2) 切忌写成“填表题”,“一对一直译”,“句式单一”,遗漏“间接要点” ,应巧妙组合信息。原题再现右图的饼状图(pie chart)

2、显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly 写一篇短文 ,报道你的调查结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。词数120 左右。写作模板学生习作A recent survey shows 图表的内容 . As is shown in the pie chart, 表中的内容 1,这一现象说明的问题表中的内容 2.表中内容 3 and表中内容4.In my point of view, 自己的观点如何解决问题A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare

3、 time. As is shown in the pie chart, 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. Surfing the Internet is the second popular activity among the students and about 36% of the students have interest in it. Only 8% of the students take reading as a hobby

4、and even fewer,about 3%, are fond of playing musical instruments.In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students interests in reading a

5、nd music.本文虽没有使用较复杂的句子,但句子结构准确,信息内容完整 ,篇章结构连贯,读来琅琅上口,主动语态、被名师点评动语态的灵活运用,使全文成为一个严密的整体,极好的完成了写作任务。仿写训练(2010宁德第一次月考)北京市政府发出限行通告,规定每辆私家车每周停驶一天(公休日除外 )。下面是某网站就此事进行的问卷调查的结果。请根据下列图表提示 ,描述被调查者的不同看法 ,并简单谈谈你自己的观点。注意： 1.文章的开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数；2.词数 120 左右。Beijing government has announced a car restriction that priv

6、ate cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays._【参考范文】Beijing government has announced a car restriction that private cars shall take turns off the roads one out of five workdays.A survey has been conducted about this issue on the Internet and the findings are as follows.Many peopl

7、e support the restriction.60% of them believe that it relieves the present traffic pressure.And 30% think it helps improve the air quality.The rest of them,about 10%,consider it saves energy.However,there are still many people who are against the new rule.About 75% among them think it inconvenient t

8、hat they can t drive their own cars on a certain workday.25% are worried that more people will buy their second cars,which may cause heavier traffic.In my opinion,the new traffic rule is really an effective measure to reduce traffic jams and air pollution.补偿练习1 完形填空(2009长沙第一次质检)After thinking thorou

9、ghly about it,I found that life is worth everything.For me,life is not justabout having good friends,money or a job that I like.Some people will be1with things likethese because2them,they re by far the best they can get.For me,they re not all I can3from this world.I believe in harps( 竖琴 ) and violin

10、s and4and lightning.I believe in being in love andnot just trying my best to make others5.I believe in “6in love ” with my partner,notjust “ loving ” him.Life is worth so much.Life is more than spending7hours in the gym and eating carrotjust to8praise from9 .The praise of others10 makes me feel happ

11、y,but it is notthe main11 of my life.My life is not about living to fulfill someone else s12but myown.Lifeis more than13 pursuingthe norms(规范 ) of 14but tryingtobe a goodperson by my own15.It is not about16chasing dreams to be superior to others.It smore about long walks in the quiet green parks17in

12、 my own thoughts.It s more aboutfeeling the18 in my face,as I go through the19on my bicycle.Life is about passion,freedom and love.I will only walk this road20；I might as wellmake the most of it.1 A.disappointedB excitedC satisfiedD worried答案C解析前文说 ,对我来说 ,生活不只是拥有朋友,财富或自己喜欢的工作。这里承接上文说 ,而有些人拥有这些就很满足了。

13、disappointed 失望的； excited 兴奋的； satisfied满意的； worried 担心的。故选 C 项。2 A.forB ofCwithD in答案A解析这里说 ,因为对于他们来说 ,这些就是他们所能得到的最好的东西,故选 for 。与前面的 for me 相对比。3 A.likeB getCsearchD have答案B解析这句话的意思是：这些却不是我想从世界上得到的全部,故选 get。 search 寻找；have 拥有； like喜欢 ,均不符合文意。4 A.lovingB rainingCwindD thunder答案D解析这句话中 harps 和 violin

14、s 都是乐器 ,属于美好的东西；这里要填thunder“ 雷声 ”和 lightning “闪电 ” 对应 ,指生活中的挑战。5 A.sadB comfortableCunsatisfiedD unpleasant答案B解析这句话的意思是：我相信真爱,但我不会只是尽力让别人舒服。后文说我相信彼此相爱而不只是我爱他。sad 伤心的；comfortable 舒服的；unsatisfied 不满意的；unpleasant讨厌的,不合意的。故选B 项。6 A.fallingB givingC beingD lost答案C解析be in love爱 ,相爱；fall in love爱上 ,坠入爱河。这里

15、指彼此相爱。故选C 项。7 A.endlessB severalC valuableD regular答案A解析前面说生活中有很多值得做的事情,这里指生活并不只是花费很多时间在体操馆里锻炼身体并且吃胡萝卜来减肥让自己漂亮。endless 无休止的 ,无止境的； valuable 有价值的； regular 有规律的 ,固定的。选 endless 表达了一种没完没了的意思。8 A.seekB receiveC admireD keep答案A解析seek寻求 ,追求； receive 收到 ,接受； admire 羡慕 ,钦佩； keep 保持。这里指寻求别人的表扬。也就是说 ,自己锻炼身体和吃胡

16、萝卜来减肥是为了寻求别人的赞美。故选A项。9 A.doctorsB othersC partnersD parents答案B解析句意为：这类人是为别人活着,故选 others。 partners 伙伴 ,配偶。10 A.indeedB wouldC ought toD mainly答案A解析从后面的 but 可知 ,这句话的意思是：别人的表扬确实能让我高兴。11 A.reasonB chanceC challengeD meaning答案D解析全文都在讨论生活的意义。这里的意思是：这不是我生活的主要意义。故选meaning 意思 ,意义。12 A.wishesB dreamsC burdens

17、D purposes答案B解析这里承接上文说 ,我不是为了实现别人的梦想而活着,我会追求我自己的梦想。wish 愿望； dream 梦想； burden 负担； purpose 目的 ,目标。故选 B 项。13 A.naturallyB entirelyC merelyD particularly答案C解析前面作者发表了自己的观点,生活不是为了别人而是为了自己。所以这里说,生活不仅仅是遵守社会规范。故选merely 仅仅 ,只是。 entirely 完全地 ,完整地； naturally自然地； particularly特别 ,尤其 ,均不符合文意。14 A.societyB worldC o

18、thersD country答案A解析这里指的是社会的规范,故选 society。15 A.conditionB standardC situationD decision答案B解析生活不仅仅是遵守社会规范而是按照我自己的标准去做个好人。选 standard 和前面的 norms 对应。16 A.normallyB speciallyC reallyD wildly答案D解析这里是说 ,我的标准不是疯狂地追求梦想以超越别人。normally正常地； specially专门地； really 真正地； wildly失控地 ,故选 D 项。17 A.builtB existingC setting

19、D appearing答案B解析它更多的是存在于我思想中的绿色公园里的长长的漫步。故选existing 。appear出现； set 以为背景 ,均不符合文意。18 A.breezeB sandC leavesD drops答案A解析见下题解析。19 A.cityB worldC countryD dream答案C解析这里说 ,当我骑着自行车在乡村穿过的时候,享受着微风拂在脸上的感觉。作者想表达一种美好的感觉,一种自然平淡的生活。20 A.quietlyB againC upD once答案D解析生活中充满了激情、自由和爱。生活的道路我只能走一次,我要充分享受它。故选 once 一次。 qui

20、etly 安静地； again 再,又 ,均不符合文意。补偿练习2 短文填词(2010泉州一中第一次月考)Human beings must solve many problems so that they can continue to live _(成功地) Most problems can be solved ， but some are1.successfullyimpossible to solve.The way in which people solve problems _( 影响 )2.affectshow land how well they can live.Befor

21、e， people could go to wild3.longareas to see nature， and they also could h，camp and fish.And4.huntgovernments also encouraged its people to enjoy _ ，paying no5.themselvesattention to the _( 环境 ) As a result， people are faced with a6.environmentserious problem pof the wildlife.Just because some species7.protectionhave died out and many never live with us and some are really in _ ，8.dangergovernments have taken mquickly to protect the wildlife and created9.measuresnature _(保护区 )But there is a long way to go ，in order to survive ，let s all go in for the war. 10.reserves