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1、 应在对漫画主题准确理解的前提下，选择最佳角度切题立意。要集中一点，力求说透。最好不要就画论画，应抓住漫画所揭示的本质，广泛联系现实，写出深度来。行文过程中力求多照应画面、涉及画意。要扣紧实际生活来确定立意、选择论据，论证力求深刻透彻，脱离漫画寓意或不联系相应实际，都属于脱题、偏题。一、审题最为关键一、审题最为关键 审题审题立意立意议论议论开放思路开放思路应根据画面应根据画面联想生发联想生发，不能游离于漫画意旨，不能游离于漫画意旨之外找材料。之外找材料。用自己的语言对画面进行用自己的语言对画面进行简明、清楚简明、清楚叙述叙述 紧承叙述，引出观点（话题）紧承叙述，引出观点（话题）（力求（力求自然

2、、准确自然、准确）联系实际，摆事实，讲道理联系实际，摆事实，讲道理（力求（力求深度、力度深度、力度）综合上文，再申主旨（综合上文，再申主旨（力求力求完整、有力完整、有力）开放作文的四个步骤：开放作文的四个步骤：起起承承转转合合描描图图-解解图图-议议图图-圆圆图图 用第用第三三人称和人称和一般现在时一般现在时描述图片内描述图片内容，描图时做到内容容，描图时做到内容充实、具体、形象、充实、具体、形象、生动生动。描图时。描图时不加入个人观点不加入个人观点。描图是为下文对漫画的理解奠定基础，描图是为下文对漫画的理解奠定基础，要根据所要阐明的理解内容有的放矢、要根据所要阐明的理解内容有的放矢、中心突出

3、，而中心突出，而并非仅仅将漫画中的所有并非仅仅将漫画中的所有看到的内容都逐一罗列出来看到的内容都逐一罗列出来。描图篇幅一般不超过描图篇幅一般不超过1/31/3。描图描图 开放作文评分参考开放作文评分参考 文章扣题文章扣题 内容充实内容充实 思维活跃思维活跃 逻辑清晰逻辑清晰 语言规范语言规范例例1 2009 北京高考北京高考 根据下面提示根据下面提示,写一篇短文写一篇短文,字数不少于字数不少于50.In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe

4、 the picture and explain how you understand it.写作思路写作思路 1 1、图画中的要素是什么？、图画中的要素是什么？（人、桌子、面条、叉子）（人、桌子、面条、叉子）2 2、要素之间有何关系？、要素之间有何关系？（他在做什么）（他在做什么）3 3、如何理解这幅图？、如何理解这幅图？（把两只叉子当筷子用；模仿）（把两只叉子当筷子用；模仿）4 4、从中得到什么观点？、从中得到什么观点？（选择正确工具和方法；不能盲目模仿）（选择正确工具和方法；不能盲目模仿）篇章结构：篇章结构：描图描图-解图解图-议图议图-圆图圆图可接受的观点可接受的观点 做事要用正确合适

5、的方法（工具）。做事要用正确合适的方法（工具）。不要盲目模仿别人。不要盲目模仿别人。复杂不都是好事，在某些情况下，简单是复杂不都是好事，在某些情况下，简单是好的解决方法好的解决方法。随着环境的不同而改变思维和方法。随着环境的不同而改变思维和方法。入乡随俗（不同国家有不同的文化，要了入乡随俗（不同国家有不同的文化，要了解和尊重外国习俗。）解和尊重外国习俗。）中西文化虽然都很好，但是若结合不好，中西文化虽然都很好，但是若结合不好，后果则会更糟。后果则会更糟。不可接受的观点不可接受的观点 多实践，努力坚持到最后就能成功。多实践，努力坚持到最后就能成功。做事注意力要集中。做事注意力要集中。光学知识不行

6、，还要学会运用。光学知识不行，还要学会运用。父母太溺爱孩子，以至于孩子生活不能父母太溺爱孩子，以至于孩子生活不能自理。自理。要学会独立。要学会独立。加强中西文化的交流，多教外国人中国加强中西文化的交流，多教外国人中国的文化。的文化。呼吁保护中国的传统文化。呼吁保护中国的传统文化。What an interesting picture!A Western young man,sitting at a table,is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold cho

7、psticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance,I think its a bit funny,for we Chinese take it for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one

8、fork will do a better job.In my opinion,we dont need to copy others ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.考生的主要问题考生的主要问题 1 1、审题：、审题：看不懂图，造成立意错误。看不懂图，造成立意错误。只有描图，没有议论；或是只有议论，只有描图，没有议论；或是只有议论，没有描图。没有描图。2 2、写作技巧：、写作技巧：描图和议论脱节。描图和议论脱节。展开议论时，表述不清，逻辑混乱。展开议论时，表述不清，逻辑混

9、乱。议论空洞，缺乏内容。议论空洞，缺乏内容。3 3、思维能力：、思维能力：比较简单，不够活跃。比较简单，不够活跃。4 4、语言基本功：、语言基本功：时态、单词拼写错误多。时态、单词拼写错误多。例例 2 In an English speech competition,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.积极合理的立意：积极合理的立意：不能自私不能自私 互相帮助互相帮助 承担责任承担责任 团结就是力量团结就是力量 面对共同问题时不要推卸责任面

10、对共同问题时不要推卸责任 解决共同的问题，解决共同的问题，清楚共同的垃圾清楚共同的垃圾 老鼠是世界环境的破坏者，老鼠是世界环境的破坏者，各国国家之间不各国国家之间不要自私要自私 要合作，要合作，停止破坏环境，保护世界共同环境。停止破坏环境，保护世界共同环境。不可接受的立意不可接受的立意 中西方文化交流中西方文化交流 单方面帮助别人单方面帮助别人 自扫门前雪自扫门前雪 父子关系不合，老鼠做协调人父子关系不合，老鼠做协调人 父子对待问题和困难，父子对待问题和困难，有不同方法，有不同方法，缺乏沟通。（老鼠在同区域）缺乏沟通。（老鼠在同区域）As can be seen in the picture,

11、two men are holding sticks ready to kill the mouse.When they drive the mouse to the common area,both of them expect the other to catch it.If they work together,they will surely kill the mouse.The picture tells us that we should cooperate to overcome the difficulties.The two men are just like we stud

12、ents and the mouse is just like the difficulties shared by us.In face of difficulties,each of us should take on our own responsibility and work together to achieve success.Just as an old saying goes:unity is strength.Only when we work together will success come.One possible version-互助互助One possible

13、version-互助互助As can be seen in the picture,two men are holding sticks ready to kill the mouse.When they drive the mouse to the common area,both of them expect the other to catch it.If one helps the other kill the mouse,he will surely live a peaceful life without a mouse.The picture tells us that help

14、ing others means helping ourselves.The two men are just like we students and the mouse is just like the common difficult math problems in our studies.In face of the problems,discussion and helping each other may improve and benefit both of us.So in my opinion,those who are always ready to help other

15、s are those who improve themselves at the same time.实用模板实用模板1、As can be seen in the picture,there is a small spot on the table.The picture has a reflection in our daily life.The spot is just like a persons strong point or weak point.In my opinion,we should make it clear.2、From the picture I can see

16、a boy trapped by a heavy stone,on which“Laziness”was said.The picture really sends a message to us that .3、In the picture,we can see a man picking apples.But in order to pick the apples,he cuts down the tree.The picture wants to tell us that whatever we do,we shouldnt only focus on what we are doing

17、 at present.The picture reminds me of the environmental problems.If we pay no attention to the environment just in order to earn more money now,how can we live a happy life in the dirty surroundings?So try to think about our future when doing things.4、From the picture we can see that I think the pic

18、ture conveys the message that working together can bring people happiness Inmy opinion,we have to realize the importance ofteamwork and try to involve ourselves in theactivities as much as possible.5、In the picture,there is a cup,which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions.What

19、I see in this picture reminds me of peoplewho use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others.Only in this way can harmony beachieved and conflicts be avoided.6、What an interesting picture!A boy is sleeping ona large opened book with sheets of paper and a pair of glasses beside him.To my understa

20、nding,the picture intends to tellus the importance of doing some reading.Only inthis way can we improve ourselves greatly.7、As is shown in the picture,a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label of“full”on its body,feeling proud and confident.The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phe

21、nomenon.We might often meet some people who lookconfident,trying to impress others with their“rich”knowledge.However,just like the bottle in the picture,whatthey really know is just a little.What they actually have intheir head is far from enough.As an old saying goes,emptybottles make the loudest n

22、oise.Therefore,its wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full.开放作文教学建议开放作文教学建议 1 1、学会理解漫画。学会理解漫画。2 2、掌握漫画类开放作文的篇章结构。掌握漫画类开放作文的篇章结构。3 3、培养学生的逻辑思维意识。培养学生的逻辑思维意识。4 4、鼓励学生发散思维。鼓励学生发散思维。5 5、引导学生深层思维，形成正确的世界引导学生深层思维，形成正确的世界 观，升华文章主题。观，升华文章主题。6 6、落实语言基础知识。落实语言基础知识。良好的逻辑思维能力良好的逻辑思

23、维能力+扎实的语言基本功扎实的语言基本功字多字好字多字好压迫力压迫力切题点全切题点全硬道理硬道理无错无改无错无改装美丽装美丽虎头豹尾虎头豹尾震撼力震撼力按序分段按序分段领导力领导力靓词靓句靓词靓句最给力最给力 10年西城区一模开放作文年西城区一模开放作文 As is shown in the picture,a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label of“full”on its body,feeling proud and confident.The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social

24、 phenomenon.We might often meet some people who look confident,trying to impress others with their“rich”knowledge.However,just like the bottle in the picture,what they really know is just a little.What they actually have in their head is far from enough.As an old saying goes,empty bottles make the l

25、oudest noise.Therefore,its wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full.参考词汇：参考词汇：label 标签10年朝阳区一模开放作文年朝阳区一模开放作文提示词：放大镜：提示词：放大镜：magnifier As can he seen in the picture,there is a small spot on the table while a man is looking at it with a magnifier.Through the magnifier,the

26、spot seems bigger and clearer.The picture has a reflection in our daily life.The spot is just like a persons strong point or weak point.If we enlarge ones strong point,we may recognize it and can find something worth learning from the person.On the contrary,if his weak point is always focused on,he

27、will feel discouraged,which prevents him from making progress.In my opinion,we should make it clear where the magnifier is used and what can be enlarged.10年宣武区一模开放作文年宣武区一模开放作文 In the picture,we can see a man picking apples.But in order to pick the apples,he cuts down the tree.The picture wants to te

28、ll us that whatever we do,we shouldnt only focus on what we are doing at present.If we neglect our future,well end up in failure.Just like the man in the picture,although he can get apples this time,he will never get fruits from the tree again.The picture reminds me of the environmental problems.If

29、we pay no attention to the environment just in order to earn more money now,how can we live a happy life in the dirty surroundings?So try to think about our future when doing things.10年东城区一模开放作文年东城区一模开放作文参考词汇：参考词汇：play hopscotch 跳房子跳房子 In the picture we see a group of children playing hopscotch happ

30、ily while a boy is sitting in front of his computer，fully absorbed in a game This picture intends to show how children today and in the past spend their free timeIn the old days,there was no modern equipment such as TV sets or computers，so children killed time，playing games outdoorsWith the developm

31、ent of science and technology,children are so attracted by computer games that they become addicted and stay in front of the screen all day long.Unlike the kids playing hopscotch，a team game，the boy who tends to spend more time alone easily develops psychological problems such as a lack of a sense o

32、f cooperation and communication skills So in my opinion，modern science may not benefit people10年丰台区一模开放作文年丰台区一模开放作文What an interesting picture!A boy is sleeping on a large opened book with sheets of paper and a pair of glasses beside him.He must have done some reading before falling asleep.Besides,t

33、he sweet smile on his face shows that he is satisfied with what he has gained from the books.To my understanding,the picture intends to tell us the importance of doing some reading,We can increase our knowledge,broaden the mind,enrich our life and make ourselves relaxed by reading books.As a student

34、,I think we should read as many good books as possible.Only in this way,can we improve ourselves greatly.10年崇文区一模开放作文年崇文区一模开放作文 From the picture we can see that a bunch of sticks stay together and look happy,while one stick is alone and looks upset I think the picture conveys the message that workin

35、g together can bring people happinessEveryone dreams of living a happy life forever.However,it is impossible to enjoy life by oneself like the lonely stick in the pictureIf he or she works together with his or her teammates or peers,he or she will certainly be impressed and cheer up In my opinion,we

36、 have to realize the importance of teamwork and try to involve ourselves in the activities as much as possible.10年海淀区一模开放作文年海淀区一模开放作文 In the picture,there is a cup,which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions.The cup is definitely a symbol of great success.But what makes me puzzl

37、ed is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup,which is not at all obvious.What I see in this picture reminds me of people who use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others.Those people are usually very demanding and picky.They only see the“scratches”instead of the wh

38、ole cup.As we all know,everyone has both strengths and weaknesses.Therefore,we should be objective about others achievements rather than find faults with them on purpose.Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided.提示词：提示词：放大镜放大镜 magnifying glass10年石景山区一模开放作文年石景山区一模开放作文 From the

39、 picture I can see a boy trapped by a heavy stone,on which“Laziness”was said.One of the boys hands is holding a balloon,which resembles the“talent”.However,the balloon cant help him fly up because of the heave stone down below.The picture really sends a message to us.Even if you are gifted to some d

40、egree,you cant just rely on your talent.Talent does some support to your success,but cant guarantee unless you pay for that as well.Working hard is the base to make sure you can reach your goal.So,do you want your dream to come true?You should try hard even if you are quite bright.In the picture,two

41、 goats are tied to each other with a rope.They both see some grass in opposite directions,and try to pull to get their own food.They are unsuccessful,because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time.The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict

42、.Both of the goats want their food at the same time,which has formed a conflict between them.However,if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first,and then the grass on the right,they will both be able to get their food.Thus things will turn into a win-win situation.Therefore,remem

43、ber that sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing,but that all people get what they want.Cooperation will benefit everyone.In the picture,we can see a circle of bricks standing next to each other.The first brick on the right is falling down,causing the falling of th

44、e next one.In the end,the whole circle will be ruined.The picture conveys a message that the success of a project depends on each individual step.When each individual step is given full attention,it is quite likely that the whole project will be a success.In the same way,a mistake in one step may le

45、ad to a complete failure of the whole project,as is shown in the picture.So each individual step can make the difference between success and failure.We should try our best every step of the way.What an interesting picture!A Western young man,sitting at a table,is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is

46、 holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance,I think its a bit funny,for we Chinese take it for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.

47、Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job.In my opinion,we dont need to copy others ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.As can be seen in the picture,a tree is broken by the strong wind,while the grass still stays as it i

48、s.Weak and small as the grass is,it can stand the strong wind.It is the same with human beings.Some people look very strong,but they are easily defeated by difficulties.Weak as some people may seem,they are actually strong in mind,just like the grass in the picture.This kind of people can adapt easily to changing situations and achieve more.They are ready to face challenges and never give up in time of difficulty.So a persons inner strength is much more powerful than physical strength.