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1、 The Beauty of Writing 高三（三）班高三（三）班 2014.3.21Why is writing so tough?InputOutput高考作文高分卷的特点高考作文高分卷的特点n外在美外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。卷面整洁。n结构美结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。主题。n词汇美词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。也是衡量英语水平的一个

2、重要标志。likebe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor n句式美句式美：运用得当的运用得当的高级句式结构高级句式结构可以可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉而生辉 。n衔接美衔接美：使用恰当的使用恰当的连接词连接词，对写一篇，对写一篇有有“英语味英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。上下衔接自然、条理清晰。 你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛， 就就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时小时”这一论题进行辩论，

3、请你作为正方代表，写这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡保证充足睡眠眠 2. 提高学习效率提高学习效率 3. 增加自主学习时间增加自主学习时间 注意：注意： 1.词数词数100左右左右2.可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯以使行文连贯 3. 辩论稿的开头已为你写好辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。（不计入总词数）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that 语法篇语法篇这第一句写的这第一句写的 I strongly recommend that

4、This is right we as a senior high student. I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.你再看这开头你再看这开头 I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows. 这动词错的这动词错

5、的Short students time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for students study xiaolu, and increase students own time. 原来改书面表达就是原来改书面表达就是改错改错 In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. B

6、ecause of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life. 这词汇这词汇你再看这词汇你再看这词汇欣赏一下这篇文欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构章的句式结构 If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study efficiently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover

7、, extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule. That is to say, chances are we can make a better use of our time. 卷面篇卷面篇养眼的养眼的当批到下午两点看当批到下午两点看到了它们到了它们太挤了太挤了太乱了太乱了太空了太空了太潦草了太潦草了太花了太花了太没谱了太没谱了老师最恨的作文老师最恨的作文大锅，标点呢？段呢？大锅，标点呢？段呢？姐，你长发及腰的字体姐，你长发及腰的字体难掩你每句都错的事实难掩你每句都错的事实啊！啊！神，你别抄阅读理解行不？

8、神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看试卷的！俺们也会看试卷的！老师最喜欢的作文老师最喜欢的作文一点提示一点提示Great minds think alike!好练的字好练的字笔笔笔笔过长过长答题不可越界答题不可越界作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷印象角度划分）n漂漂亮亮 （2125分）n有模有样 （1620分）n马马虎虎 （1115分）n稀里糊涂 （610分）n一塌糊涂 （05分）Three Rules:n1.You learn to write by writing.n2. There is no good writing; only good rewriting.n3. When in dout,

9、refer to Rule No. 1 and 2.Five Steps:nAnalyze the writing task.nOrganize it.nDraft.nRevise.nEdit.高考英语写作中高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构怎样使用复杂结构1.1.适当的语态适当的语态2.2.使用不定式使用不定式 3.3.使用过去分词使用过去分词4.4.使用使用V.+ingV.+ing形式形式 5.5.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句 6.6.使用定语从句使用定语从句7.7.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气8.8.使用倒装句使用倒装句, ,感叹句感叹句 怎样运用复杂结构：怎样运用复杂结构：怎样运用复杂结构：怎

10、样运用复杂结构：1.1.主动转被动主动转被动 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般一般) that the conference be put off.that the conference be put off. (高级高级)The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week . We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week . It is suggested2. 2. 使用不定式使用不定式3. 3. 使用过去分词使用过去分词In order

11、to earn money by myself and broaden my horizonsShe walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般一般) , she walked out of the room . . (高级高级) ，I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman. （为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）（为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）Followed by many students4. 4. 使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式2 2） , , Ill Ill vi

12、sit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（天气允许的话）（天气允许的话）1）Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般一般)Now our School has three teachersNow our School has three teachers，Weather permittingteaching 48 pupils. 伴随状语伴随状语What is the most important is that5. 5.

13、 使用名词性从句使用名词性从句2. I can I can help children improve their English.(help children improve their English.(最为重最为重要的是要的是) )1.I am sorry. I didnt reply without delay. I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay.6. 6. 使用定语从句使用定语从句1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般一般)The

14、girlThe girl was was highly spoken of.spoken of. (高级高级)2)maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant_.(这将丰富我这将丰富我的生活的生活)which is able to enrich my life.which will make my life colorful.whose composition was well writtenenriching my life7. 7. 使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气我相信如果你是我，你也会做出同样的我相信

15、如果你是我，你也会做出同样的选择。选择。 I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice. 8. 8. 使用倒装句、感叹句使用倒装句、感叹句 earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)1. I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. (我多么希望)2. not only but also引起的倒装How I wish Not only can I高

16、考英语写作中高考英语写作中要要学会使用恰当的关联词学会使用恰当的关联词 III.常用的常用的连接词连接词1. 表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有另外，还有：whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示转折关系表示转折关系 但是，但是， 然而，然而， 相反相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of )

17、; so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系表示条件关系 如果，只要如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非除非: unless 否则否则: or else 5. 表示时间关系表示时间关系 当当 的时候的时候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until 直到直到才才: notuntil 一一就就 : as soon as 后来，后来， 然后然后: later; afterwards 不久不久: soon 近来近来: lately

18、; recently 自从自从 :since 从那时起从那时起: from then on6. 表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系 首先首先:firstly 最主要的最主要的: above all 其次其次: secondly 然后然后: then; next 最后最后: finally; in the end7. 换一种方法表述换一种方法表述 换句话说换句话说: in other words; that is to say; 8. 进行举例说明进行举例说明 例如，比如例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say

19、, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason 9. 用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact跟你说实话跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth10. 对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in c

20、onclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end ,11. 其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词 therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally; 12. 表示结果：表示结果： thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately 13. 表示强调：表示强调： above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most , most important, undoubtedly背诵一些题材的常识性语句背诵一些题材的常识性语句复习开学初所发的个短句讲复习开学初所发的个短句讲义！义！