江苏省2020年高考英语总复习 专题十六 书面表达学案（含解析）.docx

专题十六书面表达挖命题【考情探究】考点内容20182017201620152014合计预测热度读写类作文读写类作文分成两部分。第一部分要求考生阅读短文或图表内容后,用大约30个单词概括短文或图表要点;第二部分用大约120个单词就与短文或图表内容的某一主题发表自己的看法。111115图画、图表类作文利用图画或图表给考生提供一个特定的写作情景,要求考生在细心观察图或表、正确理解图或表的基础上,确定文章的主题和细节,然后组织语言进行表达。000000提纲类作文通常把材料分割成信息块,用独立的文字信息表示出来。常用的形式有:短文提示、要点提示或表格提示。要求考生根据给出的提示性文字,确定文章中心,然后围绕中心展开论述,表达主旨。000000分析解读从近几年江苏高考英语的试题来看,读写类作文仍是考查的重点,其他类型的试题已很少涉及。该写作题型对学生读图能力、获取信息能力、语言概括及组织能力、逻辑思维能力、实际运用语言能力和表达思想能力有很高的要求。过专题【五年高考】A组自主命题江苏卷题组Writing 1(2018江苏)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Li Jiang 6 July, SunnyOur family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.Su Hua 6 July, SunnyThis morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?写作内容1.用约30 个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案One possible version:As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product,or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge quantities of reference books about which I am often confused. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.Writing 2(2017江苏)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang:Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua:Whatever. Weve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West.Each sounds great!Li Jiang:Yeah!And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua:And the high-tech!.Li Jiang:Perfect!Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua:No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016. At Home.Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother:Why bother?We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster network.Son:But it feels good in a cinema.Mother:And the price.We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son:Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother:But still we cannot get the moneys worth. Some films are just boring.写作内容1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案Possible version 1:The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.Possible version 2:As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the Internet plays an important part. On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.Writing 3(2016江苏)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。In recent years, Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast online votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher”and the “Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer”competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer”competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.写作内容1.用约30 个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用23 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案Possible version 1:Online voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.In my opinion,online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.Possible version 2:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.Writing 4(2015江苏)请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。写作内容1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案One possible version:The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peoples lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.Whats worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone dont secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybodys duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. Writing 5(2014江苏)请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。When we read newspapers,we often come across such English words as “AIDS”and“PK”.When we watch TV,we frequently hear words like “NBA”or “PM2.5”.When we speak,we automatically use words like “OUT” or “Bye-bye”.English words and expressions like these are getting popular.They have already become part of our daily language.And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.The inclusion has started a heated discussion.A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words,which,they think,goes against Chinese language policies.They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language.However,others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language.They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.写作内容1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点。写作要求1.可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;4.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。答案Possible versions:支持:Today,more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language.Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words.Some people support it while others do not.Generally,I am in favour of the inclusion.As the number of English learners is on the rise,its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.Besides,it is,on some occasions,more convenient to use English words.Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of its translation “xinxi jishu”.In our global village,we can see that its not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages.In English,there are many words borrowed from Latin,French,or even Chinese.So,its safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.反对:With English words getting popular in both media and daily life,a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them,leaving the public divided into two opposing groups:“For”and“Against”.I tend to take the “Against”side for two reasons.Firstly,this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue.Sooner or later,many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones.And,rules dont tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “WiFi”and“Out”in a Chinese way!Secondly,such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English.Just for one illustration,while college students take “Bye-bye”for granted when parting from each other,it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “zaijian”.In short,not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese,it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.B组统一命题、省(区、市)卷题组考点一图画、图表类作文Writing 1(2018北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。答案One possible version:Last week, a group of international students visited our school. To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on. All the international students were quite interested in my introduction.Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea. All of them were amazed. They couldnt wait to have a try for themselves.Soon the tea room became lively with every international student trying to make their own tea. We had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea.In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable experience.Writing 2(2017北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:视频 video答案One possible version:Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.Writing 3(2016北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:地球日Earth Day答案One possible version:A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world. Writing 4(2015北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中,向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程,并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:一个面团a piece of dough面人dough figurine答案One possible version:Last Tuesday,our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.When the craftsman came into the classroom,we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.First,he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally,we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.Looking at the figurines,we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!Writing 5(2015福建)请阅读下面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。内容要求:1.描述画面;2.概述其含义;3.谈谈个人感想。注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、行文连贯;3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:凿,钻boreIn the picture,答案One possible version:In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy,being poor,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course,things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.Writing 6(2014北京)假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意:1.词数不少于60。2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.答案One possible version:There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards,a second entrance was opened to the parking place.Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there. Writing 7(2014辽宁)假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prize-givingNoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.Student Union答案One possible version:NoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.Note that your innovations must be school things.Along with your wonderful innovation,you need to hand in a report,explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony?Sure!Itll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18.So dont miss the chance of being the winner.Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.For any questions,call Li Hua at 44876655.Come on,everybody!Its your show time.Student Union Writing 8(2014课标全国)假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:住宿accommodationDear Sir/Madam,Yours faithfully,Li Hua答案One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be a host family or a university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua考点二提纲类作文Writing 1(2018课标全国)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友