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重庆第十八中学重庆第十八中学 梁颖梁颖How to Write Letters of Comfort(安慰信)BrainstormingHow do they feel/look?Look at the pictures and guess their feelingsWords about feelings Good feelings: Bad feelings: happy, excited, fun sad, disappointed Nobody can be happy all the time.Pre-writingBe afraid of the coming exam.No close friends to talk with.Be nervous when answering questions in class.Have difficulty talking with her parents.Step1 Lead-inJackYetaChanningMonaHow to deal with their problems? Why?Make a review plan.Get ready for the exam carefully.Go to bed early.Keep calm.Have good breakfast.Have enough sleep and feel good.Give enough energy.Do well in the exam . whoStep 2 What to writeNo close friends to talk with.Be nervous when answering questions in class.Have difficulty talking with her parents.YetaChanningMonaHow to deal with the problems? Why?Who?Have difficulty talking with his parents. (Yeta)No close friends to talk with. (Channing)Be nervous when answering questions in class. (Mona)suggestionsreasonsCorrect and beautiful languageu1. Basic Sentence Structure (简单句的基本句型)u2. Variety Sentence Patterns（各种句式）u3. Connected Components（连接成分）u4. Proverbs or Idioms（谚语或习语）4 Secrets(秘诀秘诀)Step 3 How to write1. Basic Sentence Structure(简单句的基本句型) 你应早点上床睡觉。 你应该制定一个计划。 我将给你一些建议。 这会让你更自信。 你对即将到来的考试紧张。 每年有许多考试。You should go to bed early.You should make a plan.Ill give you some suggestions.This makes you more confident.You feel nervous about the coming exam.Therere many exams every year.S + VS + V + OS + V + IO + DOS + V + +O + OCS + V + PThere be2. Variety of Sentence Patterns(各种句式) You should go to bed early.You had better .Why dont you/ Why not？How about ？ Keep calm and you will do well in the exam.If you keep calm , youll do well in the exam.Its important for you to keep calm when youre having the exams.Useful Sentences structures1. Its +adj. +for sb. + to do sth.2. sothat3. so that/in order that4. not onlybut also5. Even though6. What/How！u3. Connected Components（连接成分）1.表先后顺序：firstly/first，first of all, then, finally，in the end，at last 2.表转折对比关系的：but, however，even though, on the other hand 3.表因果关系的：because，because of, since, as, so, therefore(因此) 4.表举例：for example，such as 5. 表递进的：what is more，whats worse 6.表总结：in short，in a word，all in all Who has a superbrain? 1.表先后顺序：2.表转折对比关系的：3.表因果关系的：4.表举例：5. 表递进的：6.表总结： u4. Proverbs or Idioms（谚语或习语） Every dog has his day.谁都有得意的时候。 No pains, no gains.不劳则无获 A faithful friend is hard to find.知音难觅。 A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 A mothers love never changes. 母爱永恒。 Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. 自信是走向成功的第一步。 Creep before you walk. 循序渐进。 Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。As the saying goes，“.”As we know, “”Step 4 Layout(结构结构)Dear Jack, How are you these days？ Im sorry to hear that you feel nervous about the coming exam. So I send this letter to cheer you up. Heres my advice. First, you should make a review plan so that you can get ready for your exam carefully. Second, youd better go to bed early to have enough sleep. You can feel good next morning. Also, its important to have a good breakfast because it can give you enough energy. Finally, keep calm when you re having the exam. As we all know, Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. I hope my advice can help you . Good luck! Yours, Miss Liang Conclusion（总结）closingSignature(签名)receiverAim(目的) of the letterBody(suggestions)Dear Jack： how are you these days. Im sorry to hear that your feel nervous about the coming exam. So I send this letter to cheer up you. Heres my advice. You should make a review plan ，so you can get ready for your exam careful. You should go to bed early to have enough sleep. You can feel good next morning. You should have a good brekfast because it can give you enough energy. You should keep calm when you re having the exam. I hope my advice can help you . As we all know, Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. Good luck! Yours XX Find some mistakes(错误错误)in the letter.Dear Jack： how are you these days. Im sorry to hear that your feel nervous about the coming exam. So I send this letter to cheer up you. Heres my advice. You should make a review plan ，so you can get ready for your exam careful. You should go to bed early to have enough sleep. You can feel good next morning. You should have a good brekfast because it can give you enough energy. You should keep calm when you re having the exam. I hope my advice can help you . As we all know, Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. Good luck! Yours, XX Attention!1. punctuation and capitalization(标点和大小写);2. spelling(单词拼写); 3. language structures(多种语言结构);4. using connected components(使用连词)While-writingChoose one of the following students problems. Write a letter to him/her and give your suggestions.Have difficulty talking with his parents. (Yeta)No close friends to talk with. (Channing)Be nervous when answering questions in class.(Mona)Post-writingWriting self-assessment form (作文自评表)ItemsGradesTotal Score(总分总分)1. Letters in the correct format（书信格式正确）2102. Clear ideas （内容清楚）4323. Good layout(结构好)3214. Nice language（语言好）4325. Clear handwriting(书写清楚)210亮点（不限）最该改进的一点Post-writingWriting Companion assessment form (作文同伴评价表)ItemsGrades评价人评价人1. Letters in the correct format（书信格式正确）2102. Clear ideas （内容清楚）4323. Good layout(结构好)3214. Nice language（语言好）4325. Clear handwriting(书写清楚)210Total Score(总分)亮点4 Secrets:1. Basic Sentence Structure (简单句的基本句型) 2. Variety Sentence Patterns （各种句式） 3. Connected Components (连接成分） 4. Proverbs or Idioms （谚语或习语）Pre-writing1.What to write2. How to write well3. LayoutPractice makes perfect! (熟能生巧！)Be healthy, happy and confident every day !1.1.Copy the composition in Copy the composition in your exercise books.your exercise books.2.2.Collect the important Collect the important sentences in the unit and sentences in the unit and learn them by heart. learn them by heart. The End.Thanks!