2023年中考英语书面表达满分作文模板+范文 专题07 便条.docx

07便条1. 体裁解读便条是非正式的书信或通知，主要用于尽快把最新的信息、通知、要求或活动的时间、地点转告给对 方。常用的便条主要有请假条、留言条等。2. 写作攻略便条一般内容简短，格式简单，语言通俗。通常包括日期、称呼、正文和署名。日期：一般不需要写年份，只需要写出日期或星期几。有时甚至只写上午或具体几点即可。如果请假 或借物，则需要写上几月几日。称呼：要从低于日期的左边顶格写起。正文要另起一行，内容要通俗易懂。如果写的是请假条，语气 应委婉。署名：要写在右下角。便条写作时可以遵循以下步骤：第一步：明确便条的格式，写明接收人；第二步：阐明便条内容，并对内容进行具体扩展；第三步：告知其他相关内容，表达愿望。英文的便条包括以下几部分：1 .日期日期写在右上角，只要写出月、日或星期几，有时只需写明上、下午的具体几点。2. 称呼称呼写在第二行，要左起顶格写。语气可随便一些。如Dear Tom, Tom, Xiao Wang等。3.正文正文应 再起一行，用词要通俗简明，只要把事情说清楚就行。4.署名要写在正文的右下角。一般的留言条只写留条人的姓名，姓或名均可。请假条、借条的署名要正式些, 在姓名前写.上Yours, Your student, Your friend等。遗失、启事、招领启事，有时不署名，只留下联系单位 的电话号码。二、两种最常见的便条1 .电话留言条英语电话留言条包括五部分:发话者(From);收话者(To);日期(Date);时间(Time);留言内容(Message)o有时，最 后可以出现记录人签名。电话留言条最根本的特点就是内容必须言简意赅，切忌冗长。即写电话留言条时, 行文要简明扼要，通俗易懂，将发话者的意思清楚明白地表达出来。2 .请假条请假条(written request for leave)是中学生必须掌握的常用应用文之一，它包括请病假(note for sick leave)和请Henry例文:Dear Mr. Read,I'm sorry I can't go to school today. I hurt my left leg when I played/was playing basketball at school yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to stay in bed fbr two days. So I want to ask for two days off. /two day's leave. Thank you.Henry【详解】这篇作文要求我们给老师写一张请假条。请假条属于应用文的一种，在日常生活中比较常见，比较贴近学 生们的实际生活。写作时，应向老师说明请假的具体原因，因为是写给老师的，且是向老师表示请求，故 应注意语气要委婉。审题可知，这篇短文中应使用一般过去时和一般现在时两种时态，注意谓语动词的适 当形式，分清动词原形和动词的过去式，尤其不规则动词的过去式形式。语句要通顺，句式结构应完整， 符合英语的表达习惯。可以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。可以使用一些平时积累的好的短语和句型，提 高作文档次。必' 背范文Writing 1根据要求完成小作文。词数：30词左右。假如你是Tom,和Alex约好这周六去科学博物馆。你去他家提醒他时他不在家，请你给他写一张留言 条，提醒他明天早上9点在博物馆门口集合，并记得带上学生证和手机。开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数。Dear Alex,Tom例文Dear Alex,We are going to the science museum together this Saturday. We are supposed to meet at 9:00 a.m. at the gate of the museum tomorrow. Remember to take your student ID card and mobile phone.Tom【详解】1. 题干解读：写一个便条，告知Alex这周六要去科学博物馆，提醒他明天早上九点在博物馆门前见面，并 且提醒他要带学生证和手机。开头结尾已经给出。2. 写作指导：应该用第一人称为主来写，时态为一般将来时为主，可以适当使用祈使句。分一段来写，主 要写见面的时间和地点以及提醒对方不要忘记带学生证和手机。注意格式和语句连贯，不要有语法错误。Writing 2根据要求完成小作文假如你是Kate,今天患了重感冒不能上学，需在家休息一天。请给你的班主任Smith先生写一张请假 条。要求：30词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Mr. Smith,KateDear Mr. Smith,I'm sorry I can't go to school today, I get a terrible cold. The doctor asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.So I ask for leave for one day.Kate【详解】1 .题干解读：该题属于便条写作。写作时要注意文章的书信格式，承接开头，注意请假条结尾称呼语和格式。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；请假条开头要开门见山，直接提出请 假的原因，内容要简洁，要表述清楚请假几天。Writing 3假如你是李琦，在英国伦敦某学校做交换生学习，住在史密斯夫妇家。今天史密斯夫妇不在家，而你 准备外出，请你给Mrs. Smith写一张留言条，内容包括：1. 外出参加同学Jane的生日派对；2. 帮助Mrs. Smith去市图书馆还书；3. Mrs. Brown来电留言： 取消下周三在Blue Coffee的会面； 邀请史密斯夫妇参加下周六晚的慈善晚宴； .（自由发挥）。要求：1.语句通顺、语法正确，可适当发挥；2. 80词左右；3. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点清楚、书写工整。【范文】Dear Mrs. Smith,Tm out. I will go to my classmate Jane's birthday party which she invited me to attend last week. I will help you return your books to the city library. I got a message from Mrs. Brown today. She cancelled her meeting with you at Blue Coffee next Wednesday and invited you to a charity dinner next Saturday night. I think I will tell you again. Don't worry about me. If the party finishes early, I'll be back at 7 p.m.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求包含外出参加同学Jane的生日派对，帮助Mrs. Smith去市图书馆还书,Mrs. Brown 来电留言内容等。注意前面两件事是一般将来时，接到电话内容是一般过去时。2. 例文点评：例文通过对外出参加同学Jane的生日派对，帮助Mrs. Smith去市图书馆还书，Mrs. Brown来 电留言内容等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。3. 高分亮点： 词组：Jane*s birthday party； last week； return your books； the city library； next Saturday night 等；句型： I will go to my classmate Jane's birthday party which she invited me to attend last week ./I will help you return your books to the city library./1 think I will tell you again./If the party finishes early, Fll be back at 7 p.m.Writing 4（202b辽宁顺城一模）根据要求完成小作文，词数：约30词。音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐。4月3日晚6： 00,在抚顺雷锋大剧院有一场音乐会。假设你是Tom想 邀请好朋友Bruce -起去欣赏。请给他写个邀请函，表达你想与他同去的愿望并期待他的回复。参考词：抚顺雷锋大剧院Fushun Lei Feng TheatreDear Bruce,Yours,Tom 例文Dear Bruce,There will be a concert in Fushun Lei Feng Theatre. It is at 6:00 p.m, on April 3rd. I really want you to go with me. Would you like to go? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Tom 【解析】1 .题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时按留言格式写。在写作时根据汉语提示的要点，邀请好朋友 Bruce 起去欣赏音乐会。内容要写全。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第二人称来写内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；写邀请函时力求语 言准确，音乐会的时间和地点等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。(2019-辽宁中考模拟)(A)根据要求完成小作文，词数约30词左右.明天四月八日是Peter的生日，她准备在上午九点举行一个生日聚会并邀请Mike参加，但Mike不得不在家里 照顾生病的妈妈，假如你是Mike,请写张便条，让人带给Peter.Dear Peter,YoursMikeDear Peter,Thank you for inviting me to take part in your birthday party . I'd like to come , but my mother is ill. I have to stay at home to look after her . So I can't come. Happy birthday to you!Yours,Mike【解析】本写作是要给朋友写一张便条，告知朋友因家中有事参加不了生日晚会，所以要用第一人称，一般现在时 来写。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，因为是应用文，所以内容要简洁，不需 做过多修饰，例如本文用到的一些亮点词句,如thank you for, rd like to.but., have to, so等,简单扼要, 直截了当。事假(leave of absence)请假条是用于向老师或上级领导等因身体状况不好或因某事请求准假的场合。 英文请假条写作需注意三点：1) 英文中请假条的写法和汉语请假条相同，它一般般由四部分组成，即时间、称呼、正文和签名。2) 一般而言，可认定请假条是一种简单的书信文体。请假条一般写在纸上，不用信封。其书写格式与书信有 很多相似之处，是书信的大大简化。典例赏析：假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。请用英文给 你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。 提示词语：traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help提示问题：1. What will you do tomorrow afternoon?2. Why will you take this activity?3. How will you finish your homework?Dear John,I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.Your loving studentLi Hua范文：Dear John,I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson. I'm going to attend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow afternoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.【详解】题干解读：这是一篇应用文。根据提示可知用第一人称和一般将来时来叙述要去做什么，为什么要参加这 项活动及你将怎么保证按时完成作业。注意使用所给的提示词。写作中注意使用适当的连词使上下文联系 紧密。例文点评：短文语言简练，叙述完整，结构思路清晰，符合逻辑关系，能正确运用一般将来时。文章中使 用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色。高分亮点：短语：traditional talent show, In order to, help sb with sth, promise to do sth, on time句子：动词不定式作宾语补足语：I will ask my classmates to help me with my English； And I promise to finish my homework on time.模板请假条DateDear,I am sorry that I shall be unable to（做某事）,because点明便条性质及原因 （原因）.So I beg to apply for （几天）daysVweeks9 leave fromto（从哪天到哪天）.扩展说明具体请假时间/1 would like to ask for （几天）days' leave. I hope you canapprove. /1 shall be very grateful if you can grant my leave. Thanks.表达请求Yours faithfully,（落款）【模板范文】March 24th, 2018Dear Miss Li,I am sorry that I shall be unable to come to school today, because I fell ill. I went swimming yesterday and now I have a fever. I am feeling terrible now. The doctor said I had to stay in bed for several days. So I beg to apply fbr 2 days9 leave from today to tomorrow. I hope you can approve. Thanks.典例赏析：假如你是李华，今天下午你应邀参加演讲比赛，因此无法参加外教的口语课。请用英语向外教Mr Green 写一张请假条，说明你缺课的原因，以及你将如何补上这节课。提示词语：speech competition, borrow, notebook, homework提示问题: Why will you miss the class? What w川 you do to make up fbr it?Dear Mr Green,I'm writing to you to ask for a leave this afternoon.Thank you for your understanding.Yours,Li Hua 例文Dear Mr Green,I'm writing to you to ask fbr a leave this afternoon. I'm invited to take part in a speech competition. So I am very sorry that I will have to miss your English speaking class. I'll be sure to make up fbr it when I am back. I'll borrow the notebooks from my classmates to learn by myself. I promise that I will hand in my homework on time.Thank you for your understanding.Yours, Li Hua【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于应用文写作，开头和结尾已给出，要求根据材料内容写一张请假条。写作时要紧扣 提示问题并用上所给提示词语，可进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍,减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣开篇点题，写出请假的原因及如何补课，最后保证自己 会按时上交家庭作业。用上了所给提示词语。例文中简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。3. 高分亮点：短语：ask for a leave； take part in； speech competition； have to； be sure to； make up for； learn by oneself； hand in； on time。句型：that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；祈使句。模板留言条Dear,留言原因留言内容表达期望You were out when I visited just now.So I had to leave you a message. （人物）visited/called you at about 10:00 in the morning, sayingthat （事件）,Please call her/him when you come back.（落款）【模板范文】Dear Li Ming,You were out when I visited just now.So I had to leave you a message.Miss Han called you at about 10:00 in the morning, saying that we'll go for a picnic this Sunday in park. We will meet at the school gate at 9:30 tomorrow morning and go there on foot. Take some food and drinks. And don't forget your camera. Please call her when you come back.Wang Xin常用表关，亮点词汇搭配1. 表示邀请had better. 最好forget v.忘十己ring. up打电话grant v.准予，准许stay in bed 卧床be in hospital 住院feel terrible感觉很糟糕invite v.邀请2. 表示叮嘱remember v.记住make sure 确定3. 表示请求approve v.同意4. 表示请假事由fall ill 病了have a fever 发烧look after 照顾be unable to do sth.不能做某事经典句子背诵：开头句1. T am sorry that I shall be unable to come to school, because.很抱歉我不能去学校了，因为.2. I'm afraid I can't come to school today.今天我恐怕不能去上学了。3. You were out when I visited just now.我刚才去找你时你不在。4.1 am writing to leave a message for you. 我在给你留言。5.1 am leaving this note to tell you that.我给你留言是要告诉你.中间句1. T would like to ask for. days' leave.我想请天的假。2.1 have a high fever and the doctor asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest. 我发高烧了，医生要求我躺在床上好好休息。3.1 beg to apply for. days'/weeks' leave from. to.我申请从到请天/周假。4. Please give me a leave of three days.请准予我三天的假期。5. You9d better.你最好6. Do not forget to.别忘了结尾句1.1 shall be very grateful if you can grant my leave.如果您能准假，我将不胜感激。2.1 hope you can approve.希望您能批准。3. Please favor me with an early reply.请尽早回复我。4. Many thanks!多谢！5. Hope I can get well and return to school soon.我希望我能尽快恢复回到学校。真题疑接（一）（2020-江苏泰州中考真题）假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语 给Mike留言：1 .回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；2. 你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；3. 你对Mike的祝福和期待。要求：1 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；3. 词数100左右。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,How time flies! It's time to say goodbye.Yours sincerely,Li hua例文Dear Mike,How time flies! It's time to say goodbye.We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, Fve become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I've learned a lot from you.It's important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.Yours sincerely,Li hua【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈 你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。2. 例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最 值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分 讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝 福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。3 .高分亮点： 短语：say goodbye； do well in； do well in； Since then； as soon as； have a talk with sb； learn a lot from； keep healthy； take part in； in order to； look forward to。句型： 让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. 时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. 宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.（二）（2019-辽宁铁岭市中考真题）根据要求完成小作文，词数：30词左右。假如你是李平，毕业在即，过去三年的美好时光历历在目。请你给最难忘的人杨阳写几句毕业留言。（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Yang Yang,Li Ping例文：Dear Yang Yang,How time flies! I'll never forget you even when I leave our school. Thank you so much for helping me. You told me to practice more and never gave up. Wish you healthy and pretty!Li Ping【详解】本题是应用文写作，要求写一个毕业留言。动笔前考生需要看清题目要求，围绕关键词“最难忘的”组织语言。 例文的层次清晰、内容饱满、表达流畅，符合留言的格式。短短几句话，运用了感叹句How time flies!,状 语从句 Ill never forget you even when I leave our school.和多种非谓语动词结构 Thank you so much for helping me./You told me to practice more and never gave up.,亮点突出，是篇优秀的习作。（三）（2019-黑龙江中考真题）假如你是Henry,昨天下午在学校打篮球时伤了左脚，医生让你卧床休息两天，因此向老师（Mr.Read）请 假。Dear Mr. Read,