【写作公开课】英语建议信作文专项指导课件

建议信作文专项指导 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。说明写信目的。2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。文体概述文体概述 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法常用语块常用语块 1.给某人提建议给某人提建议 _ 2.如下如下 _ 3.在做某事时遇到困难在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4.利用利用 _ 5.向某人征求意见向某人征求意见_ask sb.for advicegive sb.some advice(on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make use of常用语块ask sb.for advicegive sb.6.制订计划制订计划 _7.认为认为有用有用 _8.参加参加 _9.听从某人的建议听从某人的建议 _10.把把考虑在内考虑在内 _take sth.into account/considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones advice6.制订计划 _11.得到改善得到改善 _12.有所好转有所好转 _13.依我看来依我看来 _14.我已收到你的来信，得知你我已收到你的来信，得知你 _15.我建议我建议 _ I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you,I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion thatget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewI have received your letter saying that you11.得到改善 _套用句式套用句式 1.你就你就向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。设性的建议。2.我觉得如果能够我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助的。将会很有帮助的。1.You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2.I feel that it would be beneficial if套用句式1.You have asked me for m3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5.如能看到如能看到我会非常开心的。我会非常开心的。3.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5.I would be more than happy to see4.I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。3.I hope yo 1 1写作步骤写作步骤 建议信的正文一般可采用“三段式”行文。首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由(如果不认识对方，必要的情况下可以先简单介绍自己)。主体段：针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告(有时可以先肯定对方的优点)。末段：希望对方采纳你的建议。1写作步骤 2常用时态常用时态 多用一般现在时或将来时，用第一人称，且多用will，should等情态动词和虚拟语气。如：you should,you will，if I were you 3常用表达常用表达 首句常用语：Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to You have asked for my advice aboutand I will try to make some suggestions.Im writing to express my views concerning 2常用时态表达“建议”常用语：I would like to suggest thatYoud better/Its better toAs far as I am concerned/In my opinion,If I were you,I wouldI think it would be more beneficial if you couldHave you considered doing？It should be a good idea to doI suggest that one important thing to remember isAnother thing I want to remind you is thatMy advice is that you should(not)do 表达“建议”常用语：结束常用语：I believe you will take my advice/suggestions into account/consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.Thank you for your attention.Please take good consideration of my advice.Thank you.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.Whatever you decide to do,good luck with your studies/work!结束常用语：习作修改习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文做短文改错，背经典范文)Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well.Here are few suggestions.First,this is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.asking on a it newspapers 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)asking on a Beside,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easier.You can also make more Chinese friends.He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li HuaBesides easily They and Beside,it should be a go1.ask asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系。主动关系。2.to onadvice后常搭配介词后常搭配介词on。3.在在few前加前加a根据句意，此处为提一些建议，根据句意，此处为提一些建议，表示肯定意义，用表示肯定意义，用a few。4.this it考查句型考查句型it is+adj.+to do sth.意意为为“做做是是的的”。5.newspaper newspapers因为因为newspaper为可数名词，而且与前后的为可数名词，而且与前后的books,magazines属于并列关系，故用复数形式。属于并列关系，故用复数形式。1.ask asking现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系6.Beside Besides此处表示补充说明关系此处表示补充说明关系“此外此外/而且而且”，beside意为意为“在在旁边旁边”。7.easier easily修饰谓语动词用副词形式。修饰谓语动词用副词形式。8.He They根据前一句话中的根据前一句话中的more Chinese friends可知用可知用They。9.or and此处两个动作为此处两个动作为“顺承顺承”关系，关系，而非而非“选择选择”关系。关系。10.去掉去掉next time前的前的the相对于现在的相对于现在的“下下一一”，next前不用前不用the。6.Beside Besides此处表示补充说明关系“此课堂练习课堂练习假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一封写一封回信。要点如下：回信。要点如下：1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。打算利用暑假打工。2.Lora父母不同意的理由。父母不同意的理由。3.你给你给Lora的具体建议。的具体建议。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。课堂练习Dear Lora,I have just read your letter in the magazine.I know that you want to work part-time this summer.But your parents dont allow you to do so.I understand your situation.I think your parents may have their reasons.They may regard learning as the most important task for you.Perhaps theyd like you to make use of this summer holiday to study.Besides,they may think you are too young to work.Dear Lora,I think you had better have a talk with your parents.If they agree,you should make a detailed plan for your study and work,ask your friends to work together with you,and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.Anyway,I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.Yours truly,Li HuaI think you had better have a 课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点写一封建议信，要点如下：如下：1.鼓励鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。2.就就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。的目前状况，提两到三个建议。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。课外作业Dear Jenny,I am so glad to have a talk with you.I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before.People often miss their parents the first time they leave home.Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment.I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.Dear Jenny,Try to make friends on your school campus,and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now.Maybe you will still miss your parents,but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life.Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school.You will get much pleasure from it.Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li HuaTry to make friends on your sc