托福作文2写作错误ppt课件

Academic Writing7类常见错误类常见错误1.省略省略Wealthy parents shouldnt spoil their children.Shouldnt Im Cant Hes Shouldnt should not Im I am Cant cannot Hes he is/he has he was2.Informal languageToday,newspapers report lots of crimes in horrible details.lots of a host of a vast number of numerous a great deal of a great amount of 可数可数不可数不可数 3.Spelling英美词汇差异英美词汇差异The impact of tourism on these traditional neighbourhoods must be analysed.The impact of tourism on these traditional neighborhoods must be analyzed.英式英式 美式美式 se ze/ce analyse analyze civilise civilize practise practice globalise globalizev.英式英式 美式美式 our or colour color neighbour neighbor favourite favoriten.英式英式 美式美式 长长 短短 storey story dialogue dialog archaeology archeology jewellry jewelry traveller traveler词汇长短词汇长短4.词汇没有特色词汇没有特色例句例句1Serious crimes harm peoples lives.severe offense/criminal act damage/destroy undermine/jeopardize individuals/man/mankindseriouscrimeharmpeople例句例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.例句例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.be more than outweigh例句例句3Our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern Technology.more and more increasingly+adj on a rise5.句子无衔接句子无衔接1.The environment is becoming worse.We must work together to deal with this situation.分析句间关系分析句间关系 加衔接词加衔接词The environment is becoming worse;therefore,we must work together to deal with this situation.2.Opinions from different people will help us finish our work better and faster,their opinions can serve as a sound information channel,which leads to a better solution to a problem.2.Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster,because their opinions can serve as a sound information channel,which leads to a better solution to a problem.6.感情色彩过于强烈感情色彩过于强烈 love letter 式写作式写作So,we should make sure that globalization does not harm our own traditional culture!改。So不要和should 连用，感情强烈。therefore7.宗教作为引言宗教作为引言We must be friendly to others because the Bible says,“treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”引言引言：名人名言名人名言/公认的观点公认的观点Bible 圣经圣经：信仰，非逻辑推理：信仰，非逻辑推理