九年级英语全册 Unit 5 What are the s hirts made of同步作文指导课件 新人教版.ppt

Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?,写作题目： Chinese paper cutting,Learning aim,Introduce Chinese paper cutting,What are some special things that your hometown or city is famous for? These can be food, artwork or any other products.(请介绍家乡的特色产品，如某种食物、艺术品或玩具等)，假设你要推销一件特产，你将如何将产品介绍给其他人，介绍的内容会包哪些信息？,Group work presentation,1、雷州特产：菠萝罐头（Canned pineapple）产地：雷州英利镇 特点：水果类产品，香甜美味，可口佳肴，远近闻名畅销东南亚。,Group work presentation,2、湛江特产：茗皇茶（Minghuang tea）产地：廉江 特点：人工采摘闻名的优质茶叶，喝后回味无穷。,Group work presentation,3、湛江特产：廉江红橙（Red orange）产地：廉江 特点：水果类，香甜可口，深受大众喜爱。,Group work presentation,How to introduce a product ?,你能想到的其他信息,Where/how is it made?,The name,What is it made of/from ? (wood/paper),history / usages,Why is it so good?,What do you think of it?,Chinese paper cutting,How to make it?,How to introduce Chinese paper cutting ?,Turn to your book P38,Where/how is it made?,The name,What is it made of/from ? (wood/paper),History / usages,Why is it so good?,What do you think of it?,Now discuss with your partner and write down the answers in your worksheet: 1、What is the product?_ 2、What is it made of/from?_ 3、How is it made?_ 4、What is its history and usages? _ 5、Why is it special_,单元主题写作五,假设你是王明，你的外国网友Tony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese paper cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。,要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2内容可以适当扩充，字数80词左右。,本习作要求写一封电子邮件，书信格式要正确。因为是回复的邮件，首先要谈一谈对方邮件的内容。 因为是介绍中国剪纸艺术，所以主要时态是一般现在时或一般现在时的被动语态。 可以从剪纸的历史、流行状况、图案和用途等方面来介绍。,习作指导,思路点拨,have a long history of over 1500 years,can be seen in different parts of China,Lots of people are fond of them,cut paper into different shapes, like animals, flowers and so on,usually put them on doors or windows,l like Chinese paper cuttings very much.,not only beautiful but also very useful,称呼及回应对方邮件内容,Dear Tony, You wanted to know Im glad to ,祝语及落款,I hope Best wishes, Wang Ming,单元主题写作五,假设你是王明，你的外国网友Tony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese paper cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。,要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2内容可以适当扩充，字数80词左右。,开声朗读自己的文章，并 从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。,Task 1,自我欣赏与修正,同伴互赏,欣赏角度： 写作基本要求:人称, 时态； 2. 要点齐全； 3. 结构: 开头，正文，结尾； 4. 好词好句。,Task 2,欣赏与修正 请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句 , 并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。 评分 以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。 点评 由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构 分析-细 节点评),集体赏析，共同进步,Task 3,Thanks for listening!,Dear Tony, You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting. Im glad to tell you something about it. Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1500 years. It can be seen in different parts of China. Many people, no matter young or old, are fond of it. People in northern part of China especially do well in making paper cuttings. People cut paper into different pictures, like birds, animals, flowers and so on. I think Chinese paper cuttings are usually put on doors or windows when people celebrate something happy, especially for the Spring Festival. More and more people are interested in it. I hope youll come to China to see more Chinese cuttings one day. Best wishes, Wang Ming,例文,习作资料,