扬州市中考英语写作研讨会专题复习课.ppt

扬州市中考研讨会专题复习课,Writing,扬中树人常松,House,Shoppingmall,检查口语,Hometown,Changes,7B2WelcometoSunshineTownTherearelotsofthingstodoinSunshineTown.Wewanttotellyouaboutlifeinthisgreatnewtown.Wouldyouliketoliveinamoderntown?liveinflats?goshopping?eatChinesefood?enjoyBeijingOpera?,分析结构,Introduction,Mainbody,Location,Housing,Shopping,Eating,Amusement,SunshineTownhaschangedalot.Thegovernmenthasturnedtheplaceintoapark.Wehavealargeshoppingmallandatheatre.Wehaveopenspaceandprettygardenstoo.However,itisdifficulttoseesomeofmyoldfriends.TheyhavemovedtoBeijingorotherplaces,andIfeelabitlonelyfromtimetotime.Sometimestheycomebacktoseeme,andthatmakesmeveryhappy.,Changes,Problems,分析结构,SunshineTownhaschangedalot.,However,itisdifficulttoseesomeofmyoldfriends.,主题句,8B1ChangestoSunshineTownReading,Suggestions,Mainbody,Learningaims:,学会作文审题，模仿教材中相关话题构建文章结构。,2.能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3.通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,如何写作,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(NationalCivilizedCity)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2)必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3)100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）；4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,审清题意,弄清写作主题弄清写作体裁弄清写作对象弄清写作人称弄清写作字数弄清写作结构弄清写作时态弄清写作信息弄清写作补充,弄清写作要求,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(NationalCivilizedCity)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2)必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3)100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）；4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,字数,未知信息,结构,体裁,对象,人称,主题,时态,以一般现在时、现在完成时和一般将来时为主,Listsomekeywordsaboutchanges.Phrases:_2.Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.Phrases:_3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Phrases:_,抓住要点，列关键词,environment,cleanandtidy,toomuchtraffic,trafficaccidents,8A1StudyskillsMainpointsandkeywords,Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutchanges.Sentences:_2.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutproblems.Sentences:_3.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutsuggestions.Sentences:_,连词成句，变换句式,Theenvironmenthasbecomecleanerandtidierthanbefore.,8A1StudyskillsMainpointsandkeywords,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(NationalCivilizedCity)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2)必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3)100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）；4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,Changescleanandtidy,plantmoretrees(7B5),activelytakeactionstoprotectwildlife(8A5)anewairport,inservice,in2012,moretallbuildings,anewlibrary,borrowbooksforfree,protectancientbuildings,giveseatstopeopleinneed(7B5)helptheold/disabledcrosstheroad(7B5)visitthehomefortheelderly(7B5),beready/willingtohelpothers(8A1),Problemstoomuchtraffic,toomuchnoise,droplittercarelessly(8A5),notwaitinlineatthebusstop,smokeinpublicplacessomebrokenroads,needtoberepairedtheelderly,feelabitlonely(8B1),fewhomesfortheelderlyfewyouthcenters(7B2),lessopenspaceforpeopletorelax(8B1),抓住要点，列关键词,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(NationalCivilizedCity)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2)必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3)100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）；4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,Imamazedthatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcityinthepastfewyears.Thegovernmentisdevotingitselftoimprovingpeopleslives.Moretreeshavebeenplantedtheseyears.Anditssaidthatanairportwillbeinservicein2012.Nextyear,gettingintooroutofthecitywillbecomemucheasier.Manycitizensknowthatitsimportanttokeepourcitycleanandtidy.Whatsmore,theyarealwaysreadytohelppeopleinneed.However,therearelotsofthingsthatweneedtoimprove.Thestreetsnearschoolsarealwayscrowdedwhenwecometoschoolandsomepeopledontwaitinlinewhentheygetonthebus.Besides,therewillbemoreandmoreoldpeoplewhoneedcaringfor.Ithinkwecantrytodosomethingtomakethembetter.Inmyopinion,firstly,weshouldencouragestudentstoridetoschoolinsteadofgoingtoschoolbycar.Secondly,somevolunteersareneededtokeeporderatthebusstop.Thirdly,morehomesfortheelderlyneedtobebuiltinthenextfewyears.Ofcourse,itwillbemuchbetterifwethinkmoreofothers.,范文展示,ThestructureofthearticleIntroductionMainbodyConclusion,Summary,组段成篇，加主题句,审清题意，构建框架,连词成句，变换句式,抓住要点，列关键词,Summary,集句成段，添连接词,抄写规范，避免错误,Homework,Afterclass,self-edityourfirstdraftaccordingtothetableoftheself-editingassessment.,ThankYou!,购物中心我的学校附近有一个新的购物中心；它于去年建成；购物中心内有很多服装店，这对女孩们来说是太好了；但是，为男孩们服务的商店不多；3.在顶楼有很多餐厅，在那里你可以品尝来自不同国家的不同风味的食物；这个购物中心真是个有趣的去处。,检查口语,7A5GoingshoppingMaintask,住房我与父母一起住在繁华街道的一座公寓里；公寓在城市的南部；2.在我们的公寓里有一个大的客厅；晚上，我们在那里看电视；3.我喜欢烹饪，经常在厨房帮妈妈做饭；4.我的卧室有一个阳台，我喜欢坐在那儿听音乐。,检查口语,7B1DreamhomesReading,我的家乡我住在一个小城市的附近；我的房子外便是公共汽车站；乘公交车到市中心约需10分钟；2.在市中心有许多建筑，包括一个大型购物中心、一个青年中心和一个博物馆，还有一个公园；3.青年中心是我最喜欢的地方，周末我经常和朋友们去那里。,检查口语,7B2WelcometoSunshineTownMaintask,变迁阳光镇变化很大；政府已经将这个地方变成了一个公园；我们有了一个大卖场和一个剧院，也有了开阔的空地和美丽的花园；2.然而，要看到一些老朋友就有些困难了；他们已经搬到了北京或其他地方，我时而感到有点寂寞；3.有时，他们会回来看我，那使我很高兴。,检查口语,8B1PastandpresentReading,IntroductionworryaboutexamsMainbodybelaughedatConclusion,类似结构,9A3TeenageproblemsMaintask,havealotofhomework,WaystodealwithstressManyteenagerssufferfromstress.Thoughtheirproblemscanmakethemworry,therearesomewaystohelpthemdealwithstress.Firstly,ahealthydiet,enoughsleepandexerciseareveryimportant.Howcanwebehappyifwearenotfit?Forschoolwork,itishelpfulforstudentstomakealistofthethingstheyneedtodoandplanwhentodothem.Inthisway,theycanorganizetheirtimebetter.Iftheyhaveproblemsintheirstudy,theycanaskateacherforadvice.Studentsshouldpaynoattentiontopeoplewholaughatthem.Instead,theyshouldthinkaboutthethingstheyaregood.Finally,studentsshouldalsomadeenoughtimefortheirhobbies.Playingsport,readingandwatchingfilmscanhelpthemrelax.,9A3TeenageproblemsStudyskills,Introduction,Mainbody,(Suggestions),(Problems),Changescleanandtidy,plantmoretrees(7B5),activelytakeactionstoprotectwildlife(8A5)anewairport,inservice,in2012,moretallbuildings,anewlibrary,borrowbooksforfree,protectancientbuildings,giveseatstopeopleinneed(7B5)helptheold/disabledcrosstheroad(7B5)visitthehomefortheelderly(7B5),beready/willingtohelpothers(8A1),Problemstoomuchtraffic,toomuchnoise,droplittercarelessly(8A5),notwaitinlineatthebusstop,smokeinpublicplacessomebrokenroads,needtoberepairedtheelderly,feelabitlonely(8B1),fewhomesfortheelderlyfewyouthcenters(7B2),lessopenspaceforpeopletorelax(8B1),抓住要点，列关键词,变换句式,Somepeopledroplittercarelessly.Wecanseeeverywhereonabusystreet.,it,thelitter,Somepeopledroplittercarelesslyandwecanseeiteverywhereonabusystreet.,Somepeopledroplittersocarelesslythatwecanseeiteverywhereonabusystreet.,并列句,复合句结果状语从句,butnow,Somepeopledroplittersocarelesslythatwecanseeiteverywhereonabusystreet.Thereistoomuchtrafficontheroadsandtrafficaccidentsoftenhappen.Therearefewhomesfortheelderly.Thenumberoftheelderlyisgettinglargerandlarger.,集句成段，组段成篇,However,therearestillmanyproblems.,asaresult,Whatsworse,also,段落的结构段落的要求,主题句+扩展句+连接成分,切合主题+语意连贯+内容完整,环境：plantmoretrees(7B5),cleanupthepark(7B5)activelytakeactionstoprotectwildlife(8A5)educatecitizensnottodroplittercarelessly交通：repairthebrokenroadscontrolthenumberofprivatecarsnottocrosstheroadcarelesslyencouragepeopletorideinsteadofdriving市民:giveseatstopeopleinneed(7B5)helptheold/disabledcrosstheroad(7B5)visitthehomefortheelderly(7B5)beready/willingtohelpothers(8A1),bevolunteerskeepquiet/nottosmokeinthepublicplacescareforthedisabled,improvethelivesofthepoor文化：buildmoreyouthcentersprotectmoreancientbuildingsmakeallthechildrengotoschool,具体建议,