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1、 浅谈初中英语写作浅谈初中英语写作 -桂电中学桂电中学 李媚李媚 自从自从2000年新的英语教学大纲规定年新的英语教学大纲规定新增加英语写作，英语写作的形式从最新增加英语写作，英语写作的形式从最初的看图写话一直到现在的整篇小作文，初的看图写话一直到现在的整篇小作文，从原来的从原来的5分分值到现在的分分值到现在的15分分值，分分值，它成为中考英语中一个重要的组成部分。它成为中考英语中一个重要的组成部分。而许多学生在此方面丢分甚多，以致影而许多学生在此方面丢分甚多，以致影响最后总分。因此，提高学生写作能力响最后总分。因此，提高学生写作能力势在必行。势在必行。 英语写作要求学生有扎实的语言功英语写作

2、要求学生有扎实的语言功底，具备一定的底，具备一定的审题审题能力、能力、表达表达能力和能力和评评价价能力。本人在平时的教学中，纵观学生能力。本人在平时的教学中，纵观学生们的写作结果，发现学生们在写作时，有们的写作结果，发现学生们在写作时，有许多思想要表达，但英语水平有限，力不许多思想要表达，但英语水平有限，力不从心，常常从心，常常因词害篇、词不达意因词害篇、词不达意。那么，。那么，如何加强英语启始阶段的英语写作训练呢？如何加强英语启始阶段的英语写作训练呢？本人在初中英语教学中，采用了下列几种本人在初中英语教学中，采用了下列几种训练英语写作的方法：训练英语写作的方法：一、听说领先，加强语感一、听说

3、领先，加强语感1.听的输入：听的输入：初一的学生首先要注意听说的初一的学生首先要注意听说的模仿，多读、多模仿，多读、多背背课文。只有一定量的知识输入、一定量的知课文。只有一定量的知识输入、一定量的知识积累识积累,才能厚积薄发的输出。所以我要求初一才能厚积薄发的输出。所以我要求初一新生每课必听，重复模仿语音语调，然后背诵。新生每课必听，重复模仿语音语调，然后背诵。经过一个学期的训练，初一的学生语音、语调经过一个学期的训练，初一的学生语音、语调有了很大改进，为以后说的输出做好了准备。有了很大改进，为以后说的输出做好了准备。如：学生们经常会惟妙惟肖的模仿如：学生们经常会惟妙惟肖的模仿3LBook I

4、的的L47说说:“One is for you and one is for me.”就像俗话说的那样就像俗话说的那样“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟。诗也会吟。” 2.说的输出：说的输出：让学生们在每节课的前让学生们在每节课的前3分钟或课后分钟或课后5分钟进行分钟进行扮演各种角色的扮演各种角色的“performance”（表演），以（表演），以便他们能够把之前学的知识复习、当堂学的知便他们能够把之前学的知识复习、当堂学的知识巩固记牢。坚持每节课识巩固记牢。坚持每节课“performance”时不时不断地说练，即锻炼了学生们在众人面前的断地说练，即锻炼了学生们在众人面前的

5、胆量胆量、不断树立了他们的不断树立了他们的自信自信心，又逐渐培养了学生心，又逐渐培养了学生们的团队们的团队合作合作精神。久而久之，学生们锻炼了精神。久而久之，学生们锻炼了语篇能力，提高了语言的精炼度。学生们的英语篇能力，提高了语言的精炼度。学生们的英语孰能生巧，英语语孰能生巧，英语语感语感就能突显，为以后的写就能突显，为以后的写句子做好铺垫。因为口语是第一性的，文字是句子做好铺垫。因为口语是第一性的，文字是第二性的。就人们掌握母语的过程来看，总是第二性的。就人们掌握母语的过程来看，总是先掌握其口头形式，然后再掌握其书面形式。先掌握其口头形式，然后再掌握其书面形式。 初一学生经过一两个学期的模仿

6、学习，初一学生经过一两个学期的模仿学习，经过人人不断的上台表演，他们的胆经过人人不断的上台表演，他们的胆量越来越大，他们的量越来越大，他们的自信心自信心越来越足，越来越足，他们表演得越来越有他们表演得越来越有创造性创造性。 如我在上每节课时，很多学生都要求如我在上每节课时，很多学生都要求把表演的时间延长；如原来不敢说话把表演的时间延长；如原来不敢说话的陈丽晴、余才元同学敢于举手了；的陈丽晴、余才元同学敢于举手了；杨光仪同学创造性的把围领当蛋糕、杨光仪同学创造性的把围领当蛋糕、铅笔当蜡烛来做道具进行表演；铅笔当蜡烛来做道具进行表演；二、造句跟上，打好基础二、造句跟上，打好基础1.抓住点：抓住点：

7、背诵单词，灵活运用背诵单词，灵活运用 教师们在学生们学英语的启始阶段就要培养教师们在学生们学英语的启始阶段就要培养 他们良好的学习习惯，从每节课的生词和基他们良好的学习习惯，从每节课的生词和基 本句型着手，开展造句教学。让学生们在背本句型着手，开展造句教学。让学生们在背 诵好单词、词组和句子的前提下，进行经常诵好单词、词组和句子的前提下，进行经常 性地模仿造句练习，教师们要及时地批阅并性地模仿造句练习，教师们要及时地批阅并 讲评以便让他们及时改正、不断进步。众所讲评以便让他们及时改正、不断进步。众所 周知，一篇作文由若干个句子组成、句子由周知，一篇作文由若干个句子组成、句子由 若干个单词组成。

8、因此，写从若干个单词组成。因此，写从抓词抓词开始，只开始，只 有保证了每个词、句的表达正确，才能保证有保证了每个词、句的表达正确，才能保证 作文的水平度和有效度。作文的水平度和有效度。 1）背诵单词，分类记忆）背诵单词，分类记忆: 1.colours: （颜色）（颜色） red yellow brown褐色褐色 black white gray 灰色灰色 green pink 粉红色粉红色 purple 紫色紫色2.seasons:（季节）（季节） spring summer autumn / fall winterWhat colour /season do you like best? 3

9、. animals (动物动物) dogs cows rabbits ducks cats monkeys tigers lions . 4. days of the week: Sunday 周日周日 Saturday周六周六 Friday周五周五 Thursday周四周四 Tuesday周二周二 Monday周一周一 W1.What animal do you like best?2.How many days are there in a week?3. What day is today?5.Months:月份月份 January 一月一月 February March April M

10、ay June 六月六月 1. When is your birthday? 2. How many months are there in a year?July August 八月八月September October November December6.Weather:(天气）天气） 形容词：形容词： sunny windy cloudy rainy snowy wet dry cold / hot cool / warm 动词：动词：rain 雨；下雨雨；下雨 snow 雪花；下雪雪花；下雪1.It will rain tomorrow.2.There will be rain to

11、morrow.3.It will be rainy tomorrow.7.school things(文具）文具）: desk chair backboard rubber/eraser ruler pen pencil books bag8.描述人描述人 fat-thin tall-short good/nice-bad 2）熟记单词，灵活运用）熟记单词，灵活运用:如学生们在做词型变换如学生们在做词型变换”There are lots of _ (visit) coming to Guilin.”时，告诉他们时，告诉他们visit 的变换的变换应有两部应有两部:第一要第一要+or把它变为名把

12、它变为名词、第二要在名词词、第二要在名词visitor的词尾的词尾+s变为复数形式。变为复数形式。visitors 2. 抓住线，以点带线：抓住线，以点带线：背诵句子，模仿运用背诵句子，模仿运用 教师们在学生们学英语的启始阶段时，还要培教师们在学生们学英语的启始阶段时，还要培养学生们背诵一些养学生们背诵一些优秀短语、段落优秀短语、段落能力。英语能力。英语语言中有许多的语言中有许多的动词短语动词短语、介词短语介词短语、名词短名词短语和习惯用语语和习惯用语，因此，教师们在教学过程中，因此，教师们在教学过程中，要善于提炼一些好词好句，让学生们每天用一要善于提炼一些好词好句，让学生们每天用一些短语造句

13、并及时讲评订正，这样反复造句、些短语造句并及时讲评订正，这样反复造句、日积月累的操练，久而久之学生们不但巩固了日积月累的操练，久而久之学生们不但巩固了词汇，而且学会了用英语进行正确句子表达。词汇，而且学会了用英语进行正确句子表达。 如我要求学生们每个如我要求学生们每个Module的的unit1和和3L的课的课文都要背诵；每个文都要背诵；每个Module的的U2及典范英语选及典范英语选一些好的段落背诵。又如用一些好的段落背诵。又如用look forward to造造句时要强调句时要强调+名词或动词名词或动词ing形式；区别形式；区别used to 和和be used to的中文译意及用法。的中文

14、译意及用法。 1）每日）每日5句：句：(Everyday sentences) 1.他人很好。跟大家相处得很不错。他人很好。跟大家相处得很不错。 2.我的家乡桂林。是一个小而美丽的城市。我的家乡桂林。是一个小而美丽的城市。3.时间过得可真快。不知不觉来校有时间过得可真快。不知不觉来校有3年了。年了。 4.我们会记住我们在一起的快乐时光与曾我们会记住我们在一起的快乐时光与曾有过不愉快。有过不愉快。 5.别紧张，尽可能好好利用有限的时间。别紧张，尽可能好好利用有限的时间。一切顺其自然（一切顺其自然（Let all things let it go!） 每日每日5句：句：(Everyday sent

15、ences)1.在我的家乡桂林你可以吃到香喷喷的米粉。在我的家乡桂林你可以吃到香喷喷的米粉。2.象鼻山是桂林风景点的象征之一。象鼻山是桂林风景点的象征之一。 不要错过了。不要错过了。3.欢迎到桂林来，祝你玩得开心！欢迎到桂林来，祝你玩得开心！4.5 You can eat delicious rice noodles in my hometown, Guilin. The Elephant-trunk Hill is one of the symbol scenic spots in Guilin.Welcome to Guilin. Wish you to have a good time.

16、2）在冲刺阶段每天必背的英语好句子：）在冲刺阶段每天必背的英语好句子： The more you remember, the better result you get! 越记得多，你就越有成就感！越记得多，你就越有成就感！ 1.What day is it today? 2.Whats the date today? 3.Where are you from ? I am from Guilin, China. 4.Whats the weather like today? =How is the weather today? 5.Whats your hobby? I like readi

17、ng very much.6.Can I help you ? =What can I do for you ?7. There are three people in my family .8. Swimming is my favourite sport.9. Lily is my best friend. She is a lovely girl with long hair and big eyes.10. Every day we spend lots of time on study. 11. This MP4 cost me 400 yuan. Its a bit expensi

18、ve. 12. It takes me an hour to do my English homework every day. 13.The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. 14.Dont lend this new camera to anyone else, please. 15. Either you or I will be on duty tomorrow.明天要么你值日要么就是我值日。明天要么你值日要么就是我值日。 16.Lily is the best girl(that I have ever seen). Lily是我所见过

19、的最好的女孩。是我所见过的最好的女孩。 17.We have done lots of exercises since last week. 18.He has made friends with other students since he came to our school. 19.I have kept this book for a week. 我已经我已经借借这本书有一周了。这本书有一周了。 20.The film has been on for half an hour. 电影已经放映了半个小时了电影已经放映了半个小时了 21.If it doesnt rain tomorro

20、w, we will hold the New Year gala. 22. Lily works very hard at all the subjects. 23. Spiderman does well in flying. 24.Lao Shes novel named Teahouse is well worth reading. 25.Youd better not talk in class. 26.He doesnt like travelling, neither do I. 27Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。有

21、志者，事竟成。 28. Every coin has its two sides. 事物都有正反面。事物都有正反面。 29.I had to go home early yesterday. 30. Its not easy to get on well with that shy boy. 31.To say is easy ,to do is difficult. 说来容易做来难。说来容易做来难。 32.David is too young to join the army. 太小了不能参军。太小了不能参军。 34.He is a hard-working/diligent student

22、 so is Mr Li. 35. I want to have a word with the students (who have been to America). 36.This is the girl (whose sister is a popular singer). 37.I have a good piece of news to tell you. 38.We often hear Miss Zhang sing folk songs in the next room. 39. I saw him playing the flute just now. 40.He was

23、made to tell the truth. 他被迫讲了实话。他被迫讲了实话。 41.He stopped to talk with us. 42.When the teachers come in, we have to stop talking. 43.Many trees are planted by people every year. 44. Mr. Hou cant run as fast as me 45.Liu Hulan would rather die than give in. 46.A friend of mine dropped in on me last nigh

24、t. 47.There are some sheep and deer on the hills. 48. Look, here come the women doctors. 49.Today is Childrens Day, not Teachers Day. 50.We are busy (in) doing our homework. 51. We must keep the classroom clean every day. 52.What fine weather it is ! =How fine the weather is! 53.We should try our be

25、st to make our campus more beautiful. 54.Please stand up so that we can see you clearly. 55. He is so rude that no one likes him. 56. Who is it? It may be Mr Zhang. 57.He is an eight-year-old boy. 58. This is a useful dictionary. 59.We go to the library twice a week. 60.What an exciting trip it is!

26、61. We felt excited when we heard the news. 62.One third of the water is wasted. 63. The number of the students in our school is about 800. 64.Three fourths of our class are boys . 65. Its time for Tom ( those age is over 30 ) to get married. 66.He has tried twice. He wants to try a third time. 67.W

27、e were born in the 1990s. 68.They went to Merryland on Friday morning and enjoyed themselves. 69.Teachers should be strict with us. 70.We will go to the airport to pick my uncle up this Sunday. 71.We will have a leavers party on the evening of June20th. 72.Of the two boys, the one in blue is shorter

28、. 73.We can use fewer people and less money to solve the problem. 74.On Saturday we want to go home as soon /quickly as possible. 75.How often do you go home ? once a week. 76.The bus is filled with (=full of ) people. 77.He is the worst of the three children . 78.I am used to(习惯习惯) telling the trut

29、h because I am honest. 79. The knife is used for cutting things. 80.His brother left home with tears in his eyes. 81. Ann dreams of being a singing star in the future. 82.The man looked at him with interest. 83.Our classroom is not as big as theirs. 84.The meeting will last two weeks. 85.Doves stand

30、 for peace. (鸽子是和平的象征。鸽子是和平的象征。) 86. Failure is the mother of success. (失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。) 87. A good beginning is half done. （好的开始时成功的一半。）好的开始时成功的一半。） 88.A friend in need is a friend indeed. （患难见真情。）（患难见真情。） 89. I am in a hurry, so get to the point. 90.I know it wont cost very much but thats not the

31、 point. 91. Dont worry . Nothing serious. 92.The accident had a huge effect on her life. 93. Love me , love my dog. (爱屋及乌爱屋及乌) 94.When I said I thank you, I meant it from the bottom of my heart. 95.Lily intends to go abroad next year if all goes well. 96.There is a saying, “When in Rome, do as the R

32、omans do.” 97. Guilin is one of the most beautiful cities in China. 98.I will give him a message as soon as I see him. 99. When time is gone , it will never return (=come back). （时光不会倒流。）（时光不会倒流。） 100.We should make our dream come true through our own efforts.三、模仿写作，以线连面三、模仿写作，以线连面1.范例引路，初学写作：范例引路，初

33、学写作：学生们乍一开始写英学生们乍一开始写英语作文，多多少少有一点儿急躁感和盲目感，语作文，多多少少有一点儿急躁感和盲目感，不知该如何入手，以至于出现语序混乱、条理不知该如何入手，以至于出现语序混乱、条理不清等诸多错误。因此，首先利用所学的课不清等诸多错误。因此，首先利用所学的课文，文，改写、缩写、改写、缩写、和和扩写扩写课文。学生们在学完课文。学生们在学完课文后，可写出课文的中心思想、段落大意，课文后，可写出课文的中心思想、段落大意，也可把课文中的姓名、性别、年龄、相貌、爱也可把课文中的姓名、性别、年龄、相貌、爱好、时间、地点等等进行改编，形成一篇自己好、时间、地点等等进行改编，形成一篇自己

34、所知的人和事的英语作文，这种方法的写作既所知的人和事的英语作文，这种方法的写作既强化强化了学生们对课文的记忆，又了学生们对课文的记忆，又灵活运用灵活运用了课了课文知识，重要的是同时达到了提高学生们书面文知识，重要的是同时达到了提高学生们书面表达能力的目的。表达能力的目的。 如：如： 在上完在上完Book II 的的Module 5 My hometown and country时，及时叫学生写作时，及时叫学生写作My hometown-Guilin.学生们因为是写自己学生们因为是写自己熟悉的事情，都写得非常棒，并且都把才学熟悉的事情，都写得非常棒，并且都把才学过的过的in the south

35、of, on the Li River, be famous for, kilometers long, a region of等重点词组用上，同学们活学活用，把等重点词组用上，同学们活学活用，把the Elephant-trunk Hill the seven-star park / GuiLi rice noodles 都用上了，都用上了， 提提 高了书面表达能力。高了书面表达能力。2.套用公式，学会写作：套用公式，学会写作： 初中英语写作考查的内容多为初中英语写作考查的内容多为提示性提示性作文作文和看图作文，试题要求学生们在规定词数内和看图作文，试题要求学生们在规定词数内性息提示完成一篇

36、正确的文章。文章体裁以性息提示完成一篇正确的文章。文章体裁以记叙文记叙文为主，也有说明文、议论文和应用文。为主，也有说明文、议论文和应用文。在给学生们进行短文训练时，教师应提供各在给学生们进行短文训练时，教师应提供各种文体的范文，讲明各种文体的要求。但初种文体的范文，讲明各种文体的要求。但初中英语写作基本上为中英语写作基本上为“三段式三段式”，即：，即： 1).开头：点题句（开头：点题句（1-3句）句） 2).要点要点:有实例，信息词、词组；有实例，信息词、词组；(5-8句句) 3).总结总结:提出美好的希望；（提出美好的希望；（1-2句）句）Hi, Jim,How are you? Toda

37、y I will introduce something interesting to you. Do you know the world water day? Have you even taken part in it? Please read it following passage. We often have some activities with the whole school students and teachers on the 12th April.For example, we put on short plays and have a Speech competi

38、tion, make posters. But our main meaning is to tell everyone not to waste water.At last, we give some suggestions saving water. We enjoyed ourselves very well. I wish you were here! Yours Li Ming 优秀例文优秀例文1： - 王一鸣王一鸣 优秀例文2：-周亦君周亦君Dear Peter， How are you? I have been in Beijing for two months. I havem

39、ade a lot of friends here and everyone is very friendly and kind. I have learned more than one hundred words and some beautiful Chinese songs.Im so happy to learn these things! Whats more, I have visited the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and many Museums. You cant imagine how exc

40、ited I was when I saw these! Beijing is a wonderful city. I hope you can visit here too. From David 结构：结构：“观点观点要点要点总结总结” 。 中考最流行的结构就是中考最流行的结构就是三段式三段式,其结构其结构十分清晰让人一目了然。十分清晰让人一目了然。第一段：第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，句话，如，如， How are you? I have been in Beijing for two months.第二段：第二段：分分5-8句句. I have m

41、ade a lot of friends here and everyone is very friendly and kind. I have learned more than one hundred words and some beautiful chinese songs.Im so happy to learn these things!Whats more, I have visited the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and many Museums. You cant imagine how exci

42、ted I was when I saw these!第三段：第三段：经过第二段说明做了什么，可以经过第二段说明做了什么，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如：如： Beijing is a wonderful city. I hope you can visit here too.3.优美词句，写好作文：优美词句，写好作文： 当我们将当我们将 “三段式三段式”做得很完美的时候也只做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个能得到一个二等二等文。要想得到一等文，亮点至文。要想得到一等文，亮点

43、至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误都没有语法错误,但是得分不高。这些但是得分不高。这些高级一点高级一点的词汇，词组，句型的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，写英语作文要养成一般词有力的绝招。所以，写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用、汇限量用、经典句型经典句型一、两句的好习惯。一、两句的好习惯。 中考英语作文必备经典句型中考英语作文必

44、备经典句型1.主语主语+is+the+最高级最高级+名词名词+(that)+ I have ever seen (known/heard/had/read) Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Li is the kindest teacher that I have ever had。 李老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。李老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I hav

45、e ever seen。Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen。2.Nothing is more important+than+to do sth. 没什么比没什么比做某事做某事更重要的事更重要的事。 eg： Nothing is more important than to keep fit。 没有比保持健康更重要的事。没有比保持健康更重要的事。 Nothing is more important than to protect our environment。 没有什么比环保更重要的事。没有什么比

46、环保更重要的事。 Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge。 没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。3.There is no denying that + S + V (不可否认的不可否认的)eg：There is no denying that Nothing is more important than to protect our environment.不可否认的不可否认的,没有什么比环保更重要的事。没有什么比环保更重要的事。There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is t

47、he most charming actress that I have ever seen.不可否认不可否认,林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。4.An advantage of doing sth. is that + 句子句子 (干某事的优点是干某事的优点是)eg：An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy. 锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。5.The reason why + 句子句子 is that + 句子句

48、子 (的原因是的原因是)Eg:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们 新鲜的空气。新鲜的空气。6.The + 比较级比较级 + S + V, the + 比较级比较级 + S + V (愈愈愈愈) The harder you work, the more progress you make。 The more books we read, the more learned we become。7.By

49、+ Ving, xx can xx (通过通过;能够能够) By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。 By reading, we can get more knowladge. 你愈努力，你愈努力，你愈进步。你愈进步。我们书读愈多，我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。我们愈有学问。通过做运动通过做运动,我们我们能够始终保持健康。能够始终保持健康。通过阅读，我们可通过阅读，我们可以获得更多的知识。以获得更多的知识。8.Those who xxx + V. (那些那些的人的人)eg：Those who break the law should be

50、punished。 违法的人应该受处罚。违法的人应该受处罚。9.That is the reason why xxx (那就是那就是的原因的原因)eg： Summer is hot. That is the reason why I dont like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。10.be closely related to xxx (与与息息相关息息相关)Eg:Taking exercise is closely related to health。 做运动与健康息息相关。做运动与健康息息相关。11.get into the habit

51、of + Ving (养成做养成做的习惯的习惯)Eg:We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。12.Thanks to + N/Ving, xxx(因为，由于因为，由于) Thank sb. for (doing) sth. 因为因为感谢某人感谢某人Eg：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thank you for

52、helping me a lot. 谢谢你帮了我那么多。谢谢你帮了我那么多。Thanks to Miss Qins help, I passed the examination。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。13have a great influence on xx (对对有很大的影响有很大的影响)Eg：Smoking has a great influence on our health。 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。14.In my opinion，就我的看法，就我的看法Eg：In my opinion, playing

53、computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。15. As we all known 众所周知众所周知Eg：As we all known that Hangzhou is a beautiful city. 众所周知杭州是座美丽的城市。众所周知杭州是座美丽的城市。 优秀例文：优秀例文：-申淇元申淇元 Harry Potter is an interesting book whichattracts me a lot.

54、 Im glad to introduce it today. Harry Potter was written by J.k Rowling, anEnglish writer, in 1990s for the first time. Ittells a story of a smart boys strange and exitingexperiences in an unbelievable “magic world” withhis friends. They fight with devils by using magical power. The book has been po

55、pular since it first came out. Because of that, Harry Potter Was made into films, too. People from all over the world,especially teenagers are crazy about it. All in all, Harry Potter is an attractive book which is worth you reading. I believe that youll be a huge fan of it after reading it. 97 班优秀作

56、文班优秀作文(13-15分分)：25人人15分：胡晓倩，李思晴，分：胡晓倩，李思晴， 申淇元，盘鑫，申淇元，盘鑫， 14分：刘文珺，胡庭松，刘书杉，分：刘文珺，胡庭松，刘书杉， 周亦君，王晓妮，经孝之，周亦君，王晓妮，经孝之， 和志杰，许向嵘，易岚，和志杰，许向嵘，易岚，13分：王志超，廖浩宇，卿帅，王一鸣，分：王志超，廖浩宇，卿帅，王一鸣， 曾张文杰，邹建辉，陈锡林，周芷彦，曾张文杰，邹建辉，陈锡林，周芷彦， 蒋杰，白宇星，秦红鸾，于函汐蒋杰，白宇星，秦红鸾，于函汐四、命题写作，即时讲评四、命题写作，即时讲评学生们经过一段时间、一定量的知识积累学生们经过一段时间、一定量的知识积累后，教师要经

57、常地命题一些作文给学生进后，教师要经常地命题一些作文给学生进行写作思路点拨，并及时点评，让学生们行写作思路点拨，并及时点评，让学生们在以后提笔写时知道如何去写。在以后提笔写时知道如何去写。规定时间让学生估写，之后教师马上读正规定时间让学生估写，之后教师马上读正确的范文，让学生们及时比较一下自己的确的范文，让学生们及时比较一下自己的作文，衡量出自己的答题的准确度，找出作文，衡量出自己的答题的准确度，找出差距，及时纠错。通过多写多练，掌握多差距，及时纠错。通过多写多练，掌握多种表达方式，提高语言的运用能力。种表达方式，提高语言的运用能力。 1.多做鼓励，增强自性：多做鼓励，增强自性： 将每次作文写

58、得较好的学生习作张贴将每次作文写得较好的学生习作张贴出来或读给全班学生听，让学生们增出来或读给全班学生听，让学生们增加荣誉感和自信心。加荣誉感和自信心。 优秀例文优秀例文1：-胡晓倩胡晓倩 My favourite book is Harry Potter. It was written by J.K Rowling whose Nationality is England in 1990s.It tells a story about a boy called Harry Potter who can use magic. He is very smart, helpful and stra

59、nge, and I think he is a hero. Whats more, its very interesting and exciting although its not true to life.In a word, its my favourite book and I like it very much. And if you read it, you will like it, too. 优秀例文优秀例文2：-钟婧钟婧 I enjoy reading all kinds of books, but Harry Potter is my favourite (book).

60、 The book is written by J.K Rowling in 1990s. The story is about a strange boy called Harry Potter who studied in a magical school. He experienced many exciting things. The story is very long but very interesting. Harry Potter was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful e

61、nemies. The book brought me into a magical world.In fact, the story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. 2.改正错误，不断进步：改正错误，不断进步： 及时讲评一些普遍性和典型性的错误，把错误及时讲评一些普遍性和典型性的错误，把错误杀死在萌芽状态之中，让学生们在真正考试写杀死在萌芽状态之中，让学生们在真正考试写作时具有安全感，获得成就感。作时具有安全感，获得成就感。 规定时间让学生估写，之后教师马上读正确的规定时间让学生估写，之后教师马上读正确的范文，让学生们及时比较

62、一下自己的作文，衡范文，让学生们及时比较一下自己的作文，衡量出自己的答题的准确度，找出差距，及时纠量出自己的答题的准确度，找出差距，及时纠错。通过多写多练，掌握多种表达方式，提高错。通过多写多练，掌握多种表达方式，提高语言的运用能力。语言的运用能力。2010-2011作文诊断作文错句作文诊断作文错句：1. The book writer called J.K Rowling.2. If you doesnt read it, I advise you to enjoy it.3. She was wrote the book in 1990s.4.This book is main talk

63、about a boy who study in a magic school.The book was written by J.K Rowling.If you read it, Im sure you will enjoy it.She wrote the book in 1990s.This book mainly talks about a boywho is studying in a magic school 2011-2012作文诊断作文错句作文诊断作文错句：1. I have arrived in Beijing two months.2. Beijing has lots

64、of interest of places, for example, the Great.3. I have been in Beijing for two months.There are lots of places of interest in Beijing, such as. 2013桂林适应一写作桂林适应一写作(小结小结)： 小结：句子小结：句子准确性与正确准确性与正确不够；不够； 1.人称与动词时态搭配不当；人称与动词时态搭配不当； 2.主谓不一致；主谓不一致； 3.细节错误较多细节错误较多 (标点，大小写，标点，大小写，a/an; the; 名词单复数名词单复数; 人称、时态

65、人称、时态)； 4.中式英语；中式英语； 3.良性良性PK, 共同进步：共同进步： 相同题型或内容的作文同时让两、三相同题型或内容的作文同时让两、三个学生上黑板限时写，即时点评，画个学生上黑板限时写，即时点评，画出并表扬用得好的优美词句，商榷有出并表扬用得好的优美词句，商榷有争议的词句，使各学生都有所收获。争议的词句，使各学生都有所收获。 Getting to know you new camera Its easy to use cameras if you read this instruction. Green button is used to turn on the camera.I

66、f you want to turn it off, press the red button.If you take some beautiful photos which you want to keep them, press the blue button so that you can save them. There is a small button on the top which is used for takingphotos. If you want to send photos by email, connect the camera to the computer. If the red light doesnt come, wait for 10 seconds. I hope that you can have a good time with this camera and help you to become a famousphotographer one day. -易岚易岚 Getting to know you new camera Pleas