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1、初中英语写作技巧指导（一）方法一:善用高级词汇Which is better?1 我喜欢轻音乐，它可以使我放松。A I like quiet music. It can make me relaxed.B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.2 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.3 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is v

2、ery young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box. 4 我们必须采取措施来拯救地球，这样才能过上更好的生活。 A We must do something to help save the earth. Then we will have a better life.B The more we do to help save our planet, the better life we will have.1. The weather was good, and our journ

3、ey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.We all think he is such a great man that3.The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free for the students there.方法二:活用多种句型（一）审（二）列（List）根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲

4、A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.（三）加(add) 加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. So

5、me people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）（四）连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According t

6、o it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.（五）美(beautify)We interviewed people about the ways to spend the v

7、acation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few p

8、eople have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people h

9、ave to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.图表类作文常用语：1. 如图所示或从图表中我们可以清楚的看到It can be seen from the table/chart/diagramthatAs is shown in the chart/table/diagramIts clear from the table/chart/diagram thatF

10、rom the above table, we can see clearly2. Many students, about 42%, like to study English in Australia.3. 40% of the students like/have interest in/are fond of .4. a small number of students./ a small percentage of students5. As the saying goes, “.”方法三:妙用关联词书面表达的衔接与连贯合理使用表示各种逻辑关系的过渡语 使用过渡语是实现书面表达语言连

11、贯性最常用的方法之一。过渡语 (也称衔接语)是连接句子或段落的媒介。合理地使用过渡语,可以使整篇文章结构紧凑 ，行文流畅，从而增强表达效果。现将中学阶段常用的过渡语总结如下 :I 表示起始的过渡语: At first, first of all, to begin with, according to,as for 等 .如 : To begin with，we should remember, I think，that most people cannot choose their careers.II 表示时间关系的过渡语: At first, then, later, finally,

12、since then, as soon as, meanwhile, the next moment, now, before, after, soon, first, next, one day等 。 如 : 1)After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing. 2) As for myself, I will study hard to improve myself and serve the society. Meanwhile, I shall learn from others and give a hand once

13、 there is a need for help.III 表示空间关系的过渡语 on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of. on the other side of., at the foot/top/end of , in the middle/center of, at the back of, close to, near by, next to, opposite to 等 。 如 : On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the

14、 other side, where the playground used to be now stands a new building -our library .IV 表 示 因 果 的 过渡语 for，because of, thanks to, for one reason; for another reason, One reason is that another reason is that so, therefore, as a result (of.) 等 。 如 : 1)One(suggestion)is to give our dear teacher an albu

15、m, for every students picture is contained in it.V 表示对照的过渡语 but, still, however, otherwise, while, after all 等。如： However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. VI 表示解释列举的过渡语 According to, for example/instance. Take as an example, such as, like, and so on, that is (to say), in o

16、ther words等 。 如 : 1) However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. 2) For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day.VII 表示递进的过渡语 Whats more, whats better, whats worse/worse besides, as well, still,

17、 also, not onlybut also, and then, 等 。 如 : 1)They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can save money for other purposes. 2)Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.VIII表示总结的过渡语 in short, in general, in a word, as you know, generally speaking等。

18、如 : 1) In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. 2) In short, things began to improve since schools are called on to reduce the learning load. IX 表示顺序关系的过渡语 First (firstly), second (secondly, next, lastly, oneanother, in the end, 等。如：As high school students, fi

19、rstly, we are expected to be neatly dressed at school. Secondly, it must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over. Lastly, when you are walking on the road, please remember to keep to the right. 方法四:妙用引文和例子加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处It is good for us students t

20、o take exerciseAs the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加例子青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we

21、 can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash

22、and so on.Dear Mr Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lo

23、ts of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions a

24、bout them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, MaryDear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. He

25、re is some advice for you._, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It

26、can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you. 常用于开头的句子： I hope you are very well我希望你身体健康。 How are you getting onalong with your new joblessons? 你的新工作/学习进展如何？ I was very gladpleased to get/ receive your letter. 很高兴收到你的来信。 Thank y

27、ou for your letterThank you for writing to me. 感谢你的来信。 Thank you very much for.you sent me. 非常感谢你送给我。常用于结尾的句子： I hopeHope to hear from you soon 希望能很快收到你的来信。 Looking forward to hearing from you 渴望你的来信。 Looking forward to your reply渴望你的来信。 Please write back soon渴望你的来信。 Please give my loveregardsbest w

28、ishes to. 请代我向问好！ I hope youll like itthem希望你喜欢它/它们。 With best wishes! 最好的祝福！ Good Luck to you! 祝你好运！ Give my regards to your family! 请代我向你的家人问好！ Wishing you success/good luck! 祝成功/好运！常用于谦称或结束语的句子： Yours sincerely, /Sincerely yours, / Yours, 真诚地/诚恳地 Yours truly, /Yours faithfully, 忠实地 Yours respectf

29、ully, 恭敬地/尊敬地 Yours affectionately,/ Yours loving son,/ Yours,专题三. 英语作文常用句子图画作文 2000年2月8日清晨7：15。我正沿着公园路向东走，这是一位长者从街对面的公园出来。It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the eastwhen an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.2 6月2日下午，我正

30、乘火车从上海到沈阳回家的途中。On the afternoon of July 2nd, I was traveling from Shanghai back to Shenyang by train.3 一大早，我们就出发了。Early in the morning, we set out.4 明天上午8：00我们在学校门口集中。We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 tomorrow morning.5 前几天，我和同学骑车进城。The other day my classmates and I went to town together by bi

31、ke.6 过去，我的家乡是个美丽的地方。In the past / Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place.7 上学期，我参加了地理小组的研究性学习。我们研究的课题是：环境污染与环境保护。Last term I took part in a geography research study group.Our topic was environmental pollution and protection.8 今天下午，在我去看电影的路上，我看见一个箱子从一辆自行车上掉下来。This afternoon, on my w

32、ay to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.9 两星期前，我正在街上行走，当时我看见了你们的诱人的广告，于是我停下脚步走进了你们的商店。Two weeks ago, I was walking along the streetwhen I saw your attractive advertisement and I stopped into your shop.10. 昨天晚上大约九点钟，我正在忙于准备明天的测验，这是忽然吵闹声传进我的房间。About 9 oclock yesterday evening, I was busy p

33、reparing for my tomorrows testwhen suddenly loud noises came into my room.11. 昨天下午我去越秀公园，碰巧我看见一件动人的事。Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park . It happened that I saw a touching event.12. 当我听到北京申办2008年奥运会竞标成功时我非常激动。I was very excited when I heard that Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games.

34、13. 吵闹声如此大事我无法继续学习。The noise was so loud that I couldnt go on studying.14. 我将在农村度过这个暑假。在农村，我可以享受舒适和宁静的生活。I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside.I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life there.15我认为该是我们认识到保护环境的重要性和采取行动的时候了。I think it is time for us to realize the importance ofprotecting t

35、he environment and to do something about it.16. 我希望政府应该尽快采取措施解决这个问题。I hope the government should take measuresto solve this problem as soon as possible.17. 我认为学校应该鼓励学生课余多参加体育活动。这样，学生可以更健康，更有活力。I think the school should encourage the studentsto do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.18. 现在越来越多的家庭拥有自己的小汽车。对于有私家车的家庭来说上班或带小孩上学都十分方便。Now more and more families have their own cars.Its very convenient for the people who have their own carsto go to work or to take their children to school.Exercises: 8