读后续写语料积累：心理描写

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1、浙江省高考新题型解读：读后续写题型介绍提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。选材特点(1) 所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；(2) 多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。评分参考(1) 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；(2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；(3) 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；(4)上下文的连贯性。评分标准：档次描述第五档(2125)一与所给短文融治度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔

2、接合理。内容丰富，应用了 5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。- 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档(16-20)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。一内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。一所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。一与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语街接较为合理。第三档(11-15)一与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。一写出了若干有关内容，应用了 4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。一应用的语法结构和

3、词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义的表达。一应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第二档(6-10)与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。一写出了一些有关内容，应用了 3个以上短文中标出的关键词语。- 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档(1-5)一与所给短文和开头语的衔接较差。 产出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。一语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。0分白卷、内容

4、太少无法判断或所写内容与所提供内容无关。注意事项:(1)本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分，评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。(2) 所续写短文的词数应为150左右，词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。(3) 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。(4) 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；(5) 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。应试步骤：(一)怎么读？1、快速阅读把握文章大意；3、弄清文章的总体语言特点和风格;(-)

5、怎么写？1、对划线词汇进行分类删选3、对输出语言进行组织润色2、确定文章体裁和题材；4、抓住文中的关键词(时间，地点，人物，事件等)2、对段落开头进行情节推理4、对创新思维进行方向把握浙江省高考读后续写语料积累一：心理描写（-）快乐1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2. A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出 了一种理解的微笑。3. A ripple of excitement lan through them.一阵激动声穿过他4。4.

6、 Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。（liner v.逗留，徘徊）5. His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。6. A wild gaiety （快乐）took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。7. Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。8. I was wild with joy.我欣喜若

7、狂。The girl was wide with delight.那女孩欣喜若狂。9. I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容.10. She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。11. Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。12. She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。（shed v.流下；流出）13. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。14. Her e

8、yes sparkled/ twinkled with pleasure.她的眼里闪耀着喜悦的光芒。15. She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸:昂。16. Her flushed （激动的，涨红的）face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。17. Joy welled up inside her.她，L、中涌起喜悦。18. I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。*飘飘然的感觉*19. Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。gleam v.闪烁

9、;20. A delicious sweetness welled up in her heart. 一阵甜蜜知情涌上她的心头。21. During the camping trip, we were all in high spirits.野营途中，我们的情绪都很高。22. He was lighthearted at the thought of being photographed for Christmas.茜欢喜23. His face broadened out into a grin.他咧开嘴笑了起来。24. I am feeling on top of the world.我觉

10、得非常开心。25. I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得无法形容26. She is in seventh heaven （极为高兴）when she met him.她见到他时异常兴奋。27. When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile litup the room.当妈妈亲吻小宝宝时,他眉开眼笑，笑容照亮了房间。28. Her heart was glowing with a special happiness.她的心中洋溢着一种特

11、殊的快乐。29. She was overflowing with happiness.她觉得幸福满溢。30. A light of elation came into his eyes.他的眼中闪过一丝欣喜之光。31. All her heart went up in flemes of joy.她,匚、花怒放。32. Her heart leapt with joy.她的内心欢喜雀跃。33. He堕l眼wrmtliiurgi职Ihroi回他感到身体里涌动着_股暖流。34. Her face lit up/ brightened /glowed when I gave her the pre

12、sent.她的脸上焕发出光彩。35. A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face.他脸上露出 了灿烂的笑容。36. My heart is as sweet as honey.我的心情像吃了蜜一样甜。37. A thrill of joy filled her heart .她心中充满了 喜悦。38. He was grinning from ear to ear.他笑得合不拢嘴。39. Everyone rejoiced at the news of his safe return. 欣喜万分(-)激动1. Mary felt her

13、heart race.玛丽感到她的心跳加速.2. Her heart was thumping with excitement.她激动得心砰砰跳。3.1 was overjoyed and ran three steps at once.我欣喜若狂，三步并作两步跑过去。4. Her face is red, excitement in the heart, as a deer jumping with Joy.她激动地满脸通红,像有只小鹿在心里跳跃。5.1 was so excited inside, like a rough sea.我内心像汹涌的大海般激动。6. Her hands tre

14、mbled with eagerness as she opened the letter.她拆信时心情急切地手都发抖了。7. Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。8. Her heart was fluttering with anxiety as well as excitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦舌L跳。9. My heart stood still at the nearness of his happiness.即将到来的幸福使他的心都要停止跳动。10. My heart is in my mou

15、th whenever I hear the national anthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。11. She could hardly contain herself for excitement.他兴奋得难以自制。12. When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement took hold of her.当主持人宣布她获奖时，他兴奋得不能自己。13. When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excit

16、ement.当主持人宣布她获奖时，他激动得两眼放光。(三) 震惊1. We were all astonished at the unexpected news.听到这意外的消息，我们都震惊了。2. When I looked at the grade on my math paper my jaw dropped to thn ground.看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在地上。3. The little boy was speechless with shock、男孩惊得说不出话。4. Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as

17、if rooted on the ground.听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。5. The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.汽车在几秒钟内就开走了，让爱丽丝难以置信地摇着头。6.1 sensed a flash of surprise in his eyes.我看至U他眼中闪过一丝震惊。7. He was thrown into astonishment.他大吃一惊。8. Our mouth dropped open in surprise.我们，惊讶地张开了嘴。9. T

18、oms eyes flashed one look of surprise at her, and he turned pale.双眼闪出一种惊奇的神情10. Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the lase bend. 惊得倒吸一 口 气11. I was completely taken aback by his aggressive and unreasonable attitude. 让我大为吃惊12. It gave me a shock when I realized how close I had c

19、ome to being killed. 吓 了13. It was astounding that Sally managed to do two jobs as a mother. 叫人吃惊14. My fathers reaction astounded me. How could he be so calm! 令人吃惊15. She couldnt help feeling amazed at his stupidity.她不禁为他的愚蠢感至U吃惊。16. She rang me and told me that Tom had died. For once in my life I

20、was lost for words.她打电话来告诉我汤姆死了，我平生第一回不知道说什么话才好。17. They were startled by a sudden flash in the sky.天空中突然划过一道闪电，他们吃了一惊。18. To everyones astonishment, 100 people volunteered to help.令大家吃惊的是Ui（四）悲伤1. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。2. The loneliness snd grief comes in waves.孤独和悲伤不断

21、Y甬上心头。3. The last word went like a bullet to my heart.最后一句话像一颗子弹击中 了我的心。4. My heart seemed to btorn.我的心都要碎了。5. An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.人群中弥漫着悲伤和沮丧的气氛。6. It is heartbreaking for him that he cannot see his children.无法见到孩子，这使他很伤心7. The sorrow she felt at the death of her

22、husband was almost too much to bear.她丈夫去世时，她所经受的悲伤几乎是难以忍受的。8. She felt a deep pang of sorrow for the woman.她为那个女人感到深深的悲痛。9. She grieved the loss of her only son.她为失去独子而悲痛。10. He became severely depressed after her mothers death.她母亲死后,他变得非常压抑。11. The girl was crying and clearly in distress.那女孩哭了,显然很痛

23、苦。12. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。13. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。14. Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她快要哭了 verge 边缘15. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine. 借酒寸肖愁16. She burs

24、t into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了 起来，跑出了 房间。17. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。18. I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。19. A frown （皱眉）now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。20. They sat there with glum looks on their faces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。21.

25、 The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。22. He brimmed over with sorrow when.他满是悲伤brim 充满；充盈23. They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。24. These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落25. Every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces.每一个夜晚，她把头埋在枕

26、头里哭，肝肠寸断。26. Tears blurred her eyes.泪水模糊 了她的双眼。27.1 felt tears well up in my eyes.我的泪水涌 了 出来。28. She chocked and her eyes brimmed with tears.她哽咽着,眼里满是泪水。29. With tears streaming down her face, words failed her.眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，她说不出话来。30. A tear slid down her cheek. 一滴眼泪顺着她的脸颊流下来。slide, slid, slid31.1 sobbe

27、d bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face.我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。32. There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.显然，除了躺在破旧的小沙发上哭泣，她什么也做不了。33. The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上一片阴云。34. They sat there with

28、 glum looks on their faces.脸上带着忧郁的神情35. A shade of annoyance passed over his face.脸上掠过一丝不悦的神情36. He cried his heart out on hearing this tragic news.痛苦起来（五）愤怒1. Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave.她的愤怒像潮水_样席卷了她。2. He roared in his heart like a lion.彳也在里怒口孔着。3. So angry was she that she could

29、 feel the blood rush to her face.她太气愤，感到血液涌上了4. He walked into the camp office, slamming the door behind him.他走进办公室，砰地关上门5. She flushed with anger.她气得涨红了脸。6. Lisa was white and trembling with anger.丽萨气得脸色发白，身体颤抖。7. A furious clerk chased the children out of the store.气急败坏的店员追着把孩子赶出商店。8. The fierce,

30、buried anger surged叩into his throat.埋在心里的满腔怒火冲到喉咙里来。9. Anger saturated （渗透）his voice and his every movement.他的声音和每个动作充满愤怒。10. Boiling with rage, Jim shook his fist at me.怒火张绍，朝我挥舞拳头。11. Filled with fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word.满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。12. Gina was furious with him for leaving th

31、e baby alone in the house. 对某人大发雷霆13. He flared up at the word.听到这词，他勃然大怒。He grasped the thing in both hands, a tireof lage burning in his heart. 怒火中烧，独立主格14. He is beside himself with anger.怒不可遏 He was fuming with rage.他勃然大怒。15. He sprang up in a fury.勃然大怒跳了起来。Hwas purple with anger.气得脸色发紫。16. He t

32、rembled with anger from head to foot.他气得浑身发抖。17. He was breathing fire and fury.他连呼吸都喷着火焰和怒气。18. He glared at me, his face full of blue veins.愤怒地盯着我，脸上暴起_道道青筋。19. Her color came up, a heavy raga came over her like a dark cloud.脸色突变， 怒火像乌云笼罩20. Her face was distorted with rage.她气得脸都歪 了。21. His teeth

33、locked together in anger.他气得咬牙切齿。22. Jimmy felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.Jimmy感到非常生气，他冲出房间，狠狠地摔上门。23. The teacher was clearly irritated at having his class interrupted.老师显然很恼火24. He clenched his fist, his teeth rattling.紧握拳头，牙齿嘎嘎作响 独立主格（六）恐惧1.

34、I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.感至U强烈恐惧，手心出汗2. The fear made him dizzy.恐惧使他头晕眼花。3. He felt the scream explode inside him.他的内心在尖叫。4. Hearing the terrible news,people got into panic.听到这个可怕的消息，人们惊慌失措。5. A look of panic crossed his face.他脸上掠过惊恐的神情。6. She shrieked in f

35、right.她吓得尖叫起来。7. Fear clutched at his heart.他心中充满了 恐惧。8. The girl is as timid as a rabbit.那女孩胆小得像只兔子。9. He was terrihed at the thought of being lost in the woods.他一想到在树林里迷路就吓坏了。10. A flood of fear welled up in him.他心中涌起一阵恐惧11. At the sight of the ferocious （凶恶的）wolf, I froze with terror, too scared

36、to move an inch.12. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。13. Denver burst from the room, terror in her eyes.从屋子冲出来，严重充满恐惧 独立主格14. Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。15. Fear squeezed her heart.恐惧慑住了她的心。16. He was so frightened that his knees knocked together.他吓得两膝直哆嗦。17. His face was dead with fright.他吓得面无人色。1

37、8.1 got a creepy feeling on the way.路上我有一种毛骨悚然的感觉。19. I got a terrible fright when that dog jumped out at me.狗跳出来把我吓得半死。20. Tom dashed in, looking panic-stricken.汤姆冲了 进来，看上去惊慌失措。21. She nearly fainted from shock.她受了惊吓，差点晕了过去。22. She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身颤抖，如坐针毡

38、。23. Shots were fired, and the children fled in terror.枪声响起，孩子们都吓跑了。24. The little boy cowered behind the tree, terrified to make a sound.猥琐树后，不敢出声。25. The story was so terrible that it sent tremors down my spine.吓得我浑身战栗26. Wait until I tell you about the murder it will make your hair stand on end.

39、汗毛直立27. When you think of what happened in that house, it sends shivers down your spine.毛骨悚然28. Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated 心跳厉害,几乎窒息而死。（七）紧张1. She frowned at her anxiously.焦急地皱眉。She gives mr a worried look忧虑地看我_眼。2. Sh glanced worriedly at her friend.她忧心忡忡地瞥了 朋友一眼。3.

40、 Before exams, I always have butterflies in my stomach.考试前, 我总是紧张不安。4. He felt his heart go wild in his chest.他感到自己的心在胸中狂跳。5. His heart almost leaped into his mouth.他的心几乎要F兆出来了。6. His knees felt shaky; He felt they would bend and he would collapse to the floor.他的膝盖发抖，他觉得双膝弯曲，就要瘫倒在地上了。7. His nervousn

41、ess deprives him of the power of speech.他紧张得说不出话来。8. My stomach was full of butterflies and my hands were sweaty.心中直打鼓，手心都是汗9. He nervously moistened （使变得湿润）his lips with his tongue.紧张地用舌头润了 下嘴唇10. He could feel the thunderous beat of his heart.感到心脏雷鸣般的跳动11. Her heart pounded so loodly in her ears t

42、hat she though she might go deaf. 听至ll 心砰用平作口向12. Hk was pacing nervously up and down the room. 紧张地在房可踱来踱去13. Jerry had a hard day and his nerves were on edge.神经很紧张14. He waited in a state of the greatest anxiety. 焦急地等待15. She felt the uneasiness from being left alone. 焦虑不安16. She looked at the cloc

43、k with growing uneasieass. 看这钟越来越不安（八）羞愧1. He himg/dropped/lowed/bent/bowed his head in shame.*也羞愧地彳氐下了 头。2. So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.（侄V装）充血般发烫3. He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他羞得两颊发红 I dropped my eyes.我垂下 了双眼。4. So ashamed did she feel that she was

44、close to tears.（倒装） 她羞愧得几乎要哭 了。5. She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. 感至U羞愧至I脸上发烫。6. An expression of shame crossed his face. 脸上掠过一阵羞愧 的神情7. Her face was hot with shame. 脸上火辣辣的8. She remembered her angry words with a deep sense of shame. 深感羞愧9. He went home ashamed, chocking wi

45、th anger and confusion.哽咽着，内心充满困惑气愤10. He was consumed with guilt after the accident.心中充满愧疚（九）失望1. A look of disappointment passed over his face.他脸上掠过失望的神情。2. He felt very disappointed at his failure to pass the examination. 感至归E常失望3. She was completely overcome by disappointment. 被失望情绪所压侄M4. Words

46、cannot express how disappointed I was. 言语无法表达我的失望5. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.借酒消愁6. Tony was thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.7. He threw up his hands in despair （绝望）when he saw the damage. 感至U绝望8. He gazed at the confusion aroun

47、d him and was overwhelmed by a feeling of despair. 绝望9. He abandoned himself to despair. 陷于绝望10. Her heart was torn with despair.感至U绝望，心都碎 了11. He was dismayed to learn of their disloyalty.他得知他们对他的不忠，感到很失望12. His heart sank when he heard the news that he failed to win a prize.一沉（+）羞怯1. A blush sprea

48、d from his face to his neck.他从脸至U脖子全红了。2. A red glow came to her cheek. _片鸿运飞上她的脸颊。3. Her cheeks grew hot beneath the gaze of so many eyes.在众 目 睽睽下，她两颊发热。4. Her face blushed.她脸红 了 Her face mantled with blushes.满脸羞红。5. I was overwhelmed by a mixture of shyness and eagerness.羞涩与急切交织一起，不知所措6. She turne

49、d crimson with embarrassment.她的脸因难为情而变得通红。（十一）尴尬1. She put her hands to her cheeks in embarressment.她尴尬地把手放在脸颊上。2. So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily, feeling the blood rush to her face.（侄ij装）她很尴尬，笨拙地站在那里，感到血涌到脸上。3. She scratched her head, hoping to find a hole to hide herself.她搔 了

50、 搔头，想找个同藏起来。4. He bit his lips, not knowing where to rest his hands.他咬着嘴唇,不知道把手放在哪里。5. She lowered her body, wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment.如何掩饰内心尴尬6. She open her mouth, her face turning burning hot.她张开嘴,脸变得火辣辣的。7. A sudden flush spread over her cheeks.她脸上突然泛起红晕。8. His face flushed/b

51、urned with embarrassment.他因尴尬而脸红。8. All the air siemed to disappear ard she felt as if the whole world were watching her.所有白勺空气似乎都消失了，她觉得整个世界都在注视着她。9. My face flushed radish red and I stared at my feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed Iwas.脸红得跟萝卜一样，盯着脚，希望没人注意到我有多尴尬10. Guilt and shame flow

52、ing in her mind, she didnt even dare to watch her husband in the eye,weeping in regret.心中充满罪恶和羞耻，不敢直视丈夫，因后悔而哭泣（十二）困惑1. All the roads looked the same and he felt thoroughly confused.觉得彻底迷糊 了2. After my explanation, Mandy still had a puzzled expression on her face. 一脸困惑3. At times the old man seemed b

53、affled by his surroundings.感至U茫然4. He scratched his head, not understanding a word.他挠了挠头，一字没听懂5. He was bewildered to find three policemen at the front door. 感至0大惑不构用6. He sat there with a bemused （糊涂的、茫然的）expression on his face.7. Mr. Rice was staring at the report with a perplexed expression on hi

54、s face. 一脸茫然（十三）感动1. Touched dLply/immensely, we.被深深感动，我们2. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。3. With tears streaming down her face, she.泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，4. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈目匡，表达感谢。5. Touched deeply/ immensely, she hugged me tightly.非常感动，紧紧拥抱我。6. I thanked him with a lump in my throat.我哽咽地向他道谢。