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1、最新初中英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题一、英语书面表达1 . 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄 化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现状大约70%学生眼睛近视主要原因1 .睡眠不足2 .长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等预防方法1 .做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动2 .养成正确的用眼习惯你的观点.(至少一条)参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The survey shows that many students hav

2、e become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,【答案】 The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time re

3、ading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of

4、 us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【详解】这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三 人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足(not enough ) 2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等(for a long time )防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育 活动(eye exercises) 2.养成正确的用眼习惯(have the good habit of)个人观点：如：我认为，

5、我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（ I think ?; try ones best to do sth.）。常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth. , in order to do sth. , try to dosth., the importance of 等。2 .书面表达小手拉大手，同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来 ，淄博人民万众一心，众志成城，让 人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生，我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 给要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。1 .种植花草树木；2 .遵守交通规则；3 .公共

6、场合不大声喧哗；4 .公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥，至少两点）参考词汇：civilized文明的 make joint efforts共同努力 obey遵守【答案】 Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts （共同努力）.Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the

7、 civilized Zibo. For example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition （此夕卜），we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the peo

8、ple in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore （而且）,we are accustomed to （习惯于） queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized

9、【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 make joint efforts , as junior students , for example , obey the traffic rules , run red light, in addition , no longer , in public , and so on , whats more , on a bus, in need, be accustomed to , queue up , all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we pl

10、ant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized. 等插入语 的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意

11、思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3. 临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告.NameTommyCharacteristics聪明、大方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Stude

12、nt）Problems面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions（根据实际情况提2点建议）要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous tha

13、t he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on childr en s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On

14、the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It

15、s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇 作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作

16、文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如 He was rewarded by our school this year.o写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结 合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如 He is always ready to help others. He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He

17、 won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。4. Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以 Learn to Smiled”题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别 人误解等）。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。2、给别人带来快乐，自己也快乐。微笑是一种语言人

18、人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。1、参考词汇：对某人微笑 smile at sb.误解misunderstand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it issmile and the ra in isugbae. Doyou like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the

19、first sentence of it is“ Just a smile and the rain is gone.Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail anexam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smi

20、ling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.In a word, smile is a kind

21、 of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要 点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时 要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼 写，语法等

22、问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关 联。5. 中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网 站正在开展以 弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办 的饼中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。提示词语：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示问题： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn fro

23、m the activity? What do you think of it?【答案】 The activity of“Telling Chinese idioms story “ was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the act

24、ivity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had

25、 a good time on the activity.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了 要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2 .例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办， 所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。3 .局分凫点：短语：in order to , take part in , lots of, learn from , in the process of , What s more have a good time。句型：被动句

26、型。6.你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy,感谢她对你关 心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：(1) .虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要 多花工夫。(2) .你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。(举例说明，适当发挥23句)(3) .老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说(适当发挥2-3句)注意：(1) .要求语句通顺，意思连贯。(2) .第2要点和第3要点要用23句话作适当发挥。(3) .词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Hello!Dea

27、r Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good resu

28、lts in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped

29、 me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. Its important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.How about you? I am looking forwar

30、d to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学 习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可 适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb d

31、o, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one s best to, itesfuddjotb do sth 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意

32、句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。7 .假设彳是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to MyTeacher专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。短诗如下：My English Teac

33、her Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her.注意事项：1 .稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：2 .要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。3 .词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：4 .稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。【答案】Dear Editorial Offi

34、ce,I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher . She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind and helpful , too . She always helps us with our

35、 study . She loves jogging, so she looks healthy . To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001 . She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future . I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable

36、person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope that you agree with me .Yours sincerely, Beth, 【解析】 【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细， 考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要 点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心 突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符

37、合英语的表达习惯；尽量 使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确 保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正 确无误。【点睛】点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每 个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、 段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文 章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检 查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。8

38、 .书面表达假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根 据以下信息，给Angel写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好 处。写作要点：1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。2介绍活动的情况：(1)上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。(2)本周五的下午3点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。(3)同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。3说一说网上购书有什么好处。写作要求：1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确

39、、条理清晰。4至少80词。Dear Angel,How are you doing?Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy 。Last Friday, we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our read

40、ing room. Then we aregoing to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us arefond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper

41、than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn t goone bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思 连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别

42、使用一些亮点词句，如 bought sth for sb, be grateful to,be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand.on the other hand, from to 以及 we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中which引导非限制性定语从句。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子 通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起

43、：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确 性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正

44、确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。9 .书面表达为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以My Mother为主题的征文活动,1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐 述原因；2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。My MotherWe need love . We also need to show love . The person I love most is my mother . .【答案】My motherWe need love .

45、 We also need to show love . The person I love most is my mother . My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair . She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school . She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food .She did a lot for me when I was a child . She bought

46、 whatever I needed for my study , even though she didnt have much money . She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me .When I grow up , I will do what I can to make my mother happy . I will find a good job after I graduate from colle

47、ge . Ill save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young , Ill take her to wonderful sights around China . Most importantly , I will stay with her when I have free time . Thats what she wants most , I think .【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，要求以 My Mother为主题写一篇 短文介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事，参加某

48、英语网站正在举办的征文活动。在写作时，注 意文章文体、人称和时态；注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明， 中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯； 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单 词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点 中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段 之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡 平稳，自然流畅

49、；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心 复核检查，确保正确无误。10.目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行 分析并提出建议。要点：/、重视课外阅读的原因1 .作业太多2 .没有读书习惯3 .时间花在电脑或网络上课外阅读的好处1 .更多地了解世界2 .学会如何思考3 .生活更加丰富多彩对学校或同学的建议（至少一点）注意：1.词数：80个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）；2 .内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；3 .条理清楚、语句连贯；4 .文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。At present only a

50、 few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.AAAAAA【答案】 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.First of all, q uite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven formed a habit of reading. They would rat

51、her spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world.Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another , it s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】略