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1、高中英语掌握写作技巧，增添表高中英语掌握写作技巧，增添表达亮点达亮点 山东省高考英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求山东省高考英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求第一档（优秀）第一档（优秀）26分分-29分分 紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，有效使用连接成分，显示出较强的语言运用表达能力；语丰富，有效使用连接成分，显示出较强的语言运用表达能力；语言小错不超过言小错不超过4个，不能有一处大错。个，不能有一处大错。第二档（良好）第二档（良好）22分分-25分分 紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，紧扣主题，覆盖所有要

2、点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达；大错不超过但基本不影响意思表达；大错不超过3个。个。第三档（一般）第三档（一般）18分分-21分分 紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。Dear Tom , It has been a long time since I met you last time . I miss you very much . How are you ? Im very grateful to you f

3、or your help with my English when I studied in your country . I wouldnt speak English so fluently now without you . So now I cant thank you enough . By the way , do you keep in touch with Mr. Smith ? Is he fit ? Im very concerned about him . If you could visit him , please remember me to him . Furth

4、ermore , would you mind making me know how to contact him ? Eventually, Im glad to tell you our Spring Festival , the most important one in China , is coming . And I remember you once told me you like China . Would you like to come here and enjoy the Chinese traditional customs and culture ? I will

5、expect your coming . Best wishes ! Yours, Li HuaGroup I like reading while my brother likes watching television.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Group There will be an increase in the number of peoples jobs There will be an increase in the number of jobs for people in Beiji

6、ng.availableGroup It will have an important effect on the development of Beijing.It will have a(n) effect on the development of Beijing.Group It is very useful to practise English every day .It is to practise English every day .of great value /of great help /of great importancesignificant /far-reach

7、ing /profound / vitalof great/vital useGroup 5 He told me that the question was now being discussed.He told me that the question was now .Group 6Suddenly I had a good idea.Suddenly I a good idea. A good idea me.came up withoccurred tounder discussion. under repair / control /consideration/constructi

8、onGroup 7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. He has to be a teacher when he grows up.Group 8 Last Sunday we had a good time in the parkLast Sunday we in the parkenjoyed ourselves / had funmade up his mind /determinedAt noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest

9、. Then we sang and danced. We played happily. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.have fun doing2.他站在那儿，什么也不干。他站在那儿，什么也不干。 He stood there doing nothing .He stood there and (he) did nothing .3.人们说人们说中国每年有中国每年有成千上万成千上万的人的人死于吸烟死于吸烟. Pe

10、ople say that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China .（宾语从句）（宾语从句）Tens of thousands of people are said to die from smoking every year in China .（被动语态）（被动语态）Its said that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China . （主语从句）（主语从句）4.4.青岛是一个美丽的城市青岛是一个美丽的城市,

11、 , 它它有百年的历史有百年的历史. .Qingdao is a beautiful city and it has a history of one hundred years. （并列句）（并列句） Qingdao is a beautiful city, which has a history of one hundred years.（非限制性定语从句）（非限制性定语从句）Qingdao is a beautiful city with a history of one hundred years. （with +宾语）宾语）Qingdao is a beautiful city （d

12、ating back to/dating from) one hundred years ago.（非谓语）非谓语） Voices from experts 阅卷老师在评阅时最注重的是文章中的阅卷老师在评阅时最注重的是文章中的亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生在书面表达上的亮点是取出档次，所以考生在书面表达上的亮点是取得优秀的关键，亮点主要包括：一、语言地得优秀的关键，亮点主要包括：一、语言地道、词汇丰富；二、语法结构多样；三、文道、词汇丰富；二、语法结构多样；三、文章连贯自然。章连贯自然。* *不要刻意追求高级词汇和复杂结构。不要刻意

13、追求高级词汇和复杂结构。注意注意Experts:Experts:个别考生片面追求花哨文字，结果造个别考生片面追求花哨文字，结果造出一些错误百出的句子，这是写作的一大忌。高考出一些错误百出的句子，这是写作的一大忌。高考写作时应尽可能运用自己熟悉的词汇和句式，尽量写作时应尽可能运用自己熟悉的词汇和句式，尽量避免错误的出现。一篇文章即便用的词汇再高级、避免错误的出现。一篇文章即便用的词汇再高级、语法结构再复杂，若是满篇小错，阅卷老师也不会语法结构再复杂，若是满篇小错，阅卷老师也不会给文章一个较高档次的分值的。给文章一个较高档次的分值的。the China Pavilion 2010 2010年世博会

14、将于年世博会将于5 5月月1 1日日-10-10月月3131日上海召开，请根据以下要日上海召开，请根据以下要点描述上海有关情况。（请用一句话描述每一个要点）点描述上海有关情况。（请用一句话描述每一个要点）1 1、上海是一座有着、上海是一座有着700700多年历史的城市，多年历史的城市，占地面积占地面积为为63406340平方公里，平方公里，是我国最大的城市。是我国最大的城市。2 2、上海位于黄埔江畔、上海位于黄埔江畔 ，交通便利。，交通便利。3 3、中国馆由中国国家馆、中国地区馆、港澳台馆三部分组成，是、中国馆由中国国家馆、中国地区馆、港澳台馆三部分组成，是世博园中世博园中最引人注目最引人注目

15、的建筑。的建筑。4 4、上海、上海市民市民正正积极准备迎接积极准备迎接全世界人民的到来。全世界人民的到来。参考词汇：参考词汇：世博园：世博园：the Expo Site 中国馆中国馆 ： the China Pavilion 中国国家馆中国国家馆: theChineseNationalPavilion 中国地区馆中国地区馆: the ChineseProvincesPavilion 港澳台馆港澳台馆: the Pavilion0fHongKong、MacaoandTaiwan市民：市民：citizen 1 1、上海是一座、上海是一座有着有着700700多年历史多年历史的城市，的城市，占地面占地

16、面积积为为63406340平方公里，是我国平方公里，是我国最大的最大的城市。城市。Shanghai , the largest city of China , which covers an area of 6,340 square kilometers , has a history of more than 700 years . 2 2 、 上 海、 上 海 位 于位 于 黄 埔 江 畔黄 埔 江 畔 ， 交 通 便 利 。， 交 通 便 利 。 Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River , making /which makes it convenient

17、for people to arrive .Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River with a convenient transportation.3 3、中国馆、中国馆由由中国国家馆、中国地区馆、港澳台馆中国国家馆、中国地区馆、港澳台馆三部分三部分组成组成, , 是世博园中最引人注目的建筑是世博园中最引人注目的建筑 。The China Pavilion, the most attractive building in the Expo Site ,is made up of / consists of / comprises the Chinese Nati

18、onal Pavilion、the Chinese Provinces Pavilion and Hongkong,Macao andTaiwan.4 4、上海市民正、上海市民正积极准备迎接积极准备迎接全世界人民的到来。全世界人民的到来。Shanghai citizens are doing what they can to welcome the people from all over the world .Shanghai citizens are doing all / everything they can to welcome the people from all over th

19、e world . 陕西卷陕西卷 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫叫Grown-up 中学生发帖（中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助。请根据帖子内容、）寻求帮助。请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求回帖。写作要点和要求回帖。Grown-up Post at 18-5- 20:08 1Hi , everyone, Im 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn . But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year old

20、kid .What should I do ? TOP(last topic / next topic) + Reply + New 写作要点：写作要点：1、告诉、告诉Grown-up要理解父母；要理解父母；2、给、给Grown-up 提出解提出解决问题的具体建议。决问题的具体建议。 Version 1Hello , Grown-up, Im sorry to know that you have difficulty in getting along with your mother . But I can understand you just because the problem yo

21、u are facing is very common among our teenagers Version 2Hello , Grown-up, After reading your post , I understand your trouble because Im also a boy of your age . Its necessary to do something to solve the problem between you and your mother . Here are some suggestions for you .范文开头句范文开头句 范文结尾句范文结尾句

22、Version 1I believe you will send us the good news that you are expecting before long if you follow my advice .Version 2Good luck to you !Version 3Try your best and Im sure you will get on well with your parents . 好的开头和好的结尾会首先吸引阅卷好的开头和好的结尾会首先吸引阅卷老师的注意。老师的注意。 1.开头要紧扣主题，开门见山。开头要紧扣主题，开门见山。 2. 尽量用一到两句话引出

23、主体部分。尽量用一到两句话引出主体部分。 3.结尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激励或建设性。结尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激励或建设性。 如果中间内容抓住要点表述正确，再恰如果中间内容抓住要点表述正确，再恰当地使用一些过渡性词语，使文章结构严当地使用一些过渡性词语，使文章结构严谨、自然流畅，文章的总体档次就上去了。谨、自然流畅，文章的总体档次就上去了。Voices from experts09年全国各地高考范文开头句统计年全国各地高考范文开头句统计09江西江西Everyone knows that a good mood is very important for us whoever we are or wh

24、erever we are .09湖南湖南1How eager Im to share my experience of my first class in the middle school .09湖南湖南2I cant wait to tell you my experience of my first class as a teacher .09福建福建Im very glad to receive our letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well .09湖北湖北Im writing to you for the m

25、obile phone I bought on 20th April ,2008 at Tele Mall .09全国全国Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street . Here is something about it . 09重庆重庆Im a Chinese student from Xin Hua Middle School , and I have learnt your website is collecting topics .09年全国各地高考范文结尾句统计年全国各地高考范文结尾句统计 09

26、全国全国1Try your best ,and Im looking forward to your outstanding performance .09江苏江苏To make matter even worse ,it might also have a bad influence on our health . 09北京北京Are you happy for me ?Im looking forward to hearing from you .09安徽安徽1Boys and girls ,lets communicate with our parents right now and c

27、reate a harmonious family . 09安徽安徽2As for me ,we children should communicate with our parents more frequently to let them know that we have grown up and need more respect . Im sure they will understand us .09湖北湖北Take into account all these factors above , I require the company should have a change o

28、f it for me as soon as possible . What have you got from the lesson ? Practice makes perfect 1.Finish the passage above paying attention to the skills in writing .2.Try to sum up many more skills in writing in different ways and share them with your classmates .Thanks for your kind attendance! 中国每年都

29、会有中国每年都会有几十万几十万起交通事故，许多起交通事故，许多人都人都因此因此而丧生。而丧生。据有关部门统计据有关部门统计，中国的交，中国的交通事故还在成倍地通事故还在成倍地上升上升。请针对这一社会问题。请针对这一社会问题谈谈谈谈造成造成这种状况的这种状况的主要原因主要原因并提出并提出解决的方解决的方法法。 注意：注意： 1、词数、词数120-150； 2、可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；、可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3、参考词汇：、参考词汇：drunk driving醉酒驾驶；醉酒驾驶；the speed limit限速限速 ？Extended No one could have failed t

30、o notice the fact that thousands of people lost their lives annually in China, owing to several hundred thousand traffic accidents. A survey conducted in showed that the car accident are still on the rise at a very high rate. A number of factors account for the high increase of the traffic accidents

31、. Firstly, the fast growing number of private cars contribute to severe traffic jams, making it more likely for car accidents to happen. Secondly, drunk driving may be a deadly killer. Thirdly, some drivers ignore the speed limit and drive too fast.version Faced with this severe problem, the governm

32、ent should take firm/urgent action to decrease the traffic accidents. In my personal opinion, it would be a good idea to develop adequate public transportation which is effective and punctual.Meanwhile, we should appeal to people to follow traffic rules, and get tough with drunk drivers. Last but not least, drivers should stick to the speed limit and drive safely. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world and enjoy a happier life.