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1、 主要相关课文八下Unit2 九上Unit4看看谁记的单词多看看谁记的单词多你能想出多少与你能想出多少与情感情感和和相关表情动作相关表情动作有关的有关的词？词？其他补充： disappointed 感到失望的 embarrassed 尴尬的 down 失落的 frustrated 沮丧的 uncomfortable 不舒服的JUST FOR FUN !SNAP YOUR FINGERS!Are you sleepy/nervous? No,we arent .Are you tired/relaxed? No, we arent .Are you lonely/worried? No, we
2、arent .Are you happy/excited? Yes, we are.Are you calm/proud? Yes, we are.Are you surprised/pleased?Yes, we are.headachesore backstomachachetoothacheI have a_ ,I feel _. What should I do ?Expressions of giving suggestions You should do/You shouldnt do You can do./You could do Why not do .? / Why don
3、t you do.? What / How about doing.? Youd better do / not do . You are supposed to do. If I were you, I would建议的建议的 表达表达go to see the doctor take some medicinelie down and have a restdrink more waterdo more exercisedrink hot tea with honey 表建议常用表达表建议常用表达 You should You can/could Youd better Why dont
4、you Why not You are supposed to If I were you ,I wouldgo to see the doctorlie down and have a restI failed in English again , I feel _. How can I improve my English?listen to tapesread aloudread English magazinesmake flash cardspractice conversations with your partnerask the teacher for helpstudy gr
5、ammarmake vocabulary lists表建议常用表达表建议常用表达You shouldYou can/couldYoud betterWhy dont youWhy notYou are supposed toIf I were you ,I wouldI argued with my best friend,I feel _. what should I do?unhappywrite him a lettertalk with himgive a small present to himsay sorry to himYou should/You can/couldYoud
6、better/Why dont youWhy not/You are supposed toIf I were you ,/I wouldWRITINGWRITING 中考英语书面表达中考英语书面表达复习复习专题专题WRITING Xiao Ming 刚转到一所新学校，在这里她感到一切都很陌生，很孤单；与老师同学的关系紧张；身体出了问题，功课也跟不上，他甚至迷上了电脑游戏。为此，她很沮丧。请你以Xiao Ming 的身份给她的好友Mary写一封80-100词左右的信，要求： 1.结构清晰，表达流畅。 2.书写整洁美观。 3.在表述清楚提示内容的情况下适当发挥。书面表达写作五步法书面表达写作五步
7、法列列连连加加美美第一步：第一步：都要都要认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作体裁体裁、人称人称、时态时态、提示要点提示要点和和要求要求具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画或写下或写下 1:体裁体裁 2:人称人称 3:时态时态 4:要点要点 5: 要求要求 Xiao Ming 刚转到一所新学校，在这里她感到一切都很陌生，没有朋友，与老师同学的关系紧张。身体出了问题，功课也跟不上，他甚至迷上了电脑游戏。为此，她很沮丧。请你以Xiao Ming 的身份给她的好友Mary写一封80词左右的信，要求： 1.结构清晰，表达流畅。2.书写整洁美观。 3.在表述清楚提示内容的情况下适当发挥。1:体裁体裁 2
8、:人称人称 3:时态时态 4：要点要点 5: 要求要求第二步：第二步：列出写作提纲（列出写作提纲（Outline）。）。具体做法：具体做法：1.分段落。分段落。2.列出写作要点（可只打列出写作要点（可只打腹稿）腹稿）列列1.Opening 开头: 书信的必要寒暄2.Body（正文）:说出自己的烦恼 a. no friends, lonely b. relationship with students c. healthy problem d. schoolwork is not good e. love computer games 3. Ending（结尾）: 提出愿望I FEEL VERY
9、 LONELY. Yours, Ling MingTheres something wrong with my health.My head teacher is angry with me .I do badly in English puter games.I am so interested incould you help me out? can you give me someadvice?列出主干句：列出主干句：加加丰富提纲。例如加上必要的主语、谓语和宾语，还有首尾。对提纲内容进行适当的发挥。必要时加上一些“废话”。写作第三步： 加首加首Dear Mary, Hows everyt
10、hing going? I miss you so much! These days ,my life is in a mess. Why? Please listen to me. 加尾加尾Mary, I have made up my mind to make my life a difference, could you help me out? can you give me some advice?I FEEL VERY LONELY. Theres something wrong with my health.My head teacher is angry with me .I
11、do badly in English exams.have a friend,since I am strange here, I dontreally frustrated.I cant give it up .often have a headache. I cant fall asleep easily I am uaually late for school .II feelcomputer games.I am so interested in丰富提纲连连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：常用表顺序的衔接词有表第一表第一：first / firstl
12、y /to begin with / to started with / first of all / first and that is the most important/ for one thing表第二或以上：表第二或以上：second /secondly / besides / furthermore / Whats more / after that / then / next / for another 表最后表最后/总结：总结：last /finally /last but not least /in a word / in general /in short I FEEL
13、VERY LONELY. For one thing,For another,Yours, Li MingTheres something wrong with my health.As a result ,My head teacher is angry with me .Whats evenBesides,I do badly in English exams.have a friend,since I am strange here, I dontreally frustrated.I cant give it up .made up my mind to makeoften have
14、a headache. I cant fall asleep easily I am uaually late for school .Iworse,I feelcomputer games.I am so interested inMary, I havemy life a difference,could you help me out? can you give me someadvice?美美 选好词句，适当运用亮点词，用上一两个谚语。美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：美小技巧点亮中考作文小技巧点亮中考作文 同义、近义替换避免重复。e.g. becauses
15、ince-for like-be fond of-be interested in very- extremely -quite 用短语代替单个的单词 terrible、awful-in a mess like-be interested in decide -make up ones mind to do 绕、闪绕、闪写句子时要注意灵活表达，不钻牛角尖。遇到不便直译的生词，可以绕着弯写。例如：你不会写勤奋，你可以写成not lazy。不会写特长，可以用be good at 或 do well in 来表达。 用上一两个谚语提亮你的作文。e.g. Where there is a will,
16、there is a way.有志者事竟成。 work while you work; Play while you play.工作时工作，玩时玩！ Life is not all roses.人生并不是康庄大道。make my life a difference, could you help me out? can you give me some advice?Firstly, since I am strange here, I dont have a friend, I feel very lonely. Secondly, Theres something wrong with m
17、y health. I often have a headache. I cant fall asleep easily .As a result ,I am usually late for school .My head teacher is angry with me .Whats even worse, I do badly in English exams. I feel really frustrated. Besides,I am so interested in computer games. I cant give it up . but I dont know howI b
18、elieve nothing is impossible as long as we put our heart into it,to do it. Mary, I have made up my mind to Yours,Li ming Please write your own composition .第四第四 步步:学以致用 请你给Li Ming 回一封信。针对他在信中的一个或两个困惑，提出你的建议。80-100字左右（开头已写好）请充分利用好刚刚学到的写作技巧。 Dear Li Ming, I am happy to hear from you,but I am sorry to
19、hear that you have so many problems.表建议You shouldYoucan/couldYoud betterWhy dont youWhy notYou are supposed toIf I wereyou ,I would身体/情感对策 go to see a doctortake some medicinedrink some waterdo more exerciselisten to soft musicsay sorry to himtalk with himwrite him a lettergive a small present to him学习对策ask teachers for helpwork harderspend more time remember more wordsdo more reading/listening/writingLets enjoy our own compositions!
江西省会昌实验学校中考英语 书面表达专题复习课件 牛津版
