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1、动 作 细 节 描 写by Kevin Soy读 后 续 写 专 项 训 练 1 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that sh

2、e said to Tom. “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcappe

3、d mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!” she cried. Help!No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop

4、for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴 落 ) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to

5、a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard

6、 a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. (2016.10浙 江 ) 小 结1.动

7、 作 细 节 的 描 写 应 该 围 绕 着 一 个 中 心 展 开 ， 否 则会 导 致 叙 述 散 乱 ， 内 容 混 杂 ；2.动 作 细 节 的 描 写 应 该 组 织 一 系 列 的 动 词 ， 以 动 作的 次 第 发 生 来 叙 述 整 个 过 程 ；3.动 作 细 节 的 描 写 应 该 有 相 应 信 息 的 支 撑 ， 以 丰 富细 节 内 容 ， 增 强 可 读 性 。 1. 上 周 日 李 华 坐 公 交 车 去 新 华 书 店 买 书 ， 过 程 却 不 太顺 利 。 请 设 计 一 个 情 节 ， 描 述 具 体 经 过 ， 词 数 80左 右 。Last Sund

8、ay, Li Hua went to Xinhua Bookstore to buy a book. _ 1. 上 周 日 李 华 坐 公 交 车 去 新 华 书 店 买 书 ， 过 程 却 不 太顺 利 。 请 设 计 一 个 情 节 ， 描 述 具 体 经 过 ， 词 数 80左 右 。 去 书 店 的 路 上 不 顺 利 在 书 店 买 书 不 顺 利 出 门 公 交 车 没 来 发 现 公 交 车 停 开 换 车 车 子故 障 很 晚 到 达 书 店 喜 欢 的 书 只 剩 一 本 其 他 顾 客 拿 到 那 本 询 问 售 货员 售 货 员 又 找 到 一 本 书 本 破 损 买 到

9、 后 发 现 对面 商 店 有 同 款 Last Sunday, Li Hua went to Xinhua Bookstore to buy a book. After breakfast, he came to the bus stop near his home. As was scheduled, the bus should arrive in 5 minutes. However, he waited for about 1 0 minutes but no bus came. A few minutes later, he and other passengers were to

10、ld to get on another bus which went on a different route. Halfway, the bus broke down. As a result, he had to change the bus again. Finally, he got to the bookstore at the lunch time, almost two hours later than expected. 2. Jeff 是 一 位 非 常 关 心 学 生 的 老 师 ， 昨 天 午 饭 后 班 里同 学 Kate突 然 鼻 子 流 血 不 止 。 请 设 计

11、 一 个 情 节 详 细 描述 Jeff采 取 的 行 动 重 点 体 现 他 对 学 生 的 关 爱 。 约 80词 。Yesterday Jeff was in the classroom talking to a student after lunch. _ 2. Jeff 是 一 位 非 常 关 心 学 生 的 老 师 ， 昨 天 午 饭 后 班 里同 学 Kate突 然 鼻 子 流 血 不 止 。 请 设 计 一 个 情 节 详 细 描述 Jeff才 去 的 行 动 重 点 体 现 他 对 学 生 的 关 爱 。 约 80词 。 Jeff在 教 室 里 解 决 了 问 题 Jeff未

12、 能 解 决 问 题 ， 因 而 求 助 医 生体 现 出 Jeff的 急 切 和 关 爱 。 Yesterday Jeff was in the classroom talking to a student after lunch. Suddenly Kates nose started to bleed. Jeff rushed to Kate in no time. He told Kate to lean her head backwards. After that, he got some tissue from a student and tried to clean Kates

13、mouth and cheeks. Finding her bleeding impossible to stop, Jeff phoned the doctor to ask what to do. The doctor advised Kate to be sent to him as soon as possible. Immediately, Jeff went to the doctor with Kate. He stayed there with her until she was fine two hours later. 实 战 演 练 3. 王 涛 即 将 大 学 毕 业

14、， 正 在 寻 找 工 作 ， 上 周 他 参 加 了一 次 面 试 。 请 设 计 一 个 情 节 详 细 描 述 他 进 入 面 试 房 间后 的 动 作 ， 突 出 当 时 相 对 压 抑 的 氛 围 。 80词 左 右Hearing his name called, Wang Tao opened the door and stepped in. _ Hearing his name called, Wang Tao opened the door and stepped in. He immediately felt stared at. Three judges, seated b

15、ehind the desk, examined him from head to feet. Wang Tao checked his suit, finding nothing improper and then relaxed a bit. After he was allowed to take a seat, Wang Tao glanced at the judges and quickly moved his sight back to his fingers as if he had done something wrong. The judges wore no smile, still looking at him. He sat straight up, trying to keep up his courage, and waited to be asked questions.