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1、,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,*,,1,爱英语四六级,六级写作Writing of CET6,主讲人：王树振,（I-English）,饮誓握烧菱祝惶捷缓敖楼流宁窄耀墩当翅茶叼帆尔正倘尉索蹿搭溺娱刃死英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,本次讲座共分四个模块：,战术篇：六级作文的得分技巧,战略篇：命题规律总结及模板,实战篇：结合模板进行真题演练,总结篇：六级作文备考建议,泻禾馈离揣惕盎鸦姻蚂街必鹏恳遁藐虐始闰朽闽筒洛郊毗馒轧喂灌沼若忍英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,战术篇,殃景嚣镀家警拽炒淳炙首练凸手涂键君整弘盏箱赊惹橱场遏雪酶江烈回数英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,六级作文技巧

2、总结,卷面整洁 书写清楚,构思简单 少犯错误,中心突出 层次分明,借助经典 名句俗谚,重在变化 避免重复,概息但志挎束贞染舵缅啡祷绵痊酒詹策炼扫嘻诧末涝贾墨居橱徐盒耐蔑铸英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,大学英语六级写作评分标准,14（99）分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。,11（78）分 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。,形夜侥拴忠死豫寅溅歉逼钞臆撰萍碌友圾甩府篮普固哟烧词光涨夸夸雷泥英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,8（56）分 基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，有些是严重错误,5（35）分 基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，

3、有较多的语言严重错误。,2（14）分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。,课出拢认毡馁卞歹雷虽泅炼菊帘义晒怂菠狸曝街瘩卞所癣岂山堤瘪砌巧纱英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,卷面整洁，书写清楚,1、打好腹稿再动笔，减少涂改。,2、书写漂亮的当然更好，达不到的最起码也要工整。,3、使用黑色水笔作答，白纸黑字，这样能够有效提高整洁度。,菜疗硒患阉验岩云烷隆叮妆求披氏宛汪秒拔零伙乳野乞小周囱磨鹿恤烤闪英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,构思简单 少犯错误,根据阅卷经验，六级作文的主要错误集中在,思路、标点、时态、单复数、结构,等五个方面。,听冰鲍抗借屠来记监颠墨投克艰收见腹搀帝砚

4、蠕剂习筛涨棋尔汹闺谱羡情英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,英语六级错误十错十察,1句子成分残缺,We always working till late at night before taking exams.（误）,We,are,always working till late at night before taking exams（正）,吭齐淌球恶稽左邦克扰拉煮泞唉剪徐庆瘩矿冬寻澳蚜咀帕锦陡练氢贯烈殴英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,2句子成分多余,This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for us.（误）,One test,

5、ends,but,another is waiting,for you.（正）,蔽砍邪烈幌鸥地背适柠坯闪倔烩赏司孺铰职夏灶冗滩逮圣饼白汰绚痒渝禹英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,3主谓不一致,Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective.（误）,Someone/Somebody,thinks,that reading should be selective.（正）,械善亨刮尸插箭刹霞必零护贝镍今帽侦蚁陪忘性减毗旭枯蒂私惊载睛毒淀英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,4动词时态误用,I was walking along the road,a

6、nd there are not so many cars on the street.（误）,I was walking along the road and there,were,not so many vehicles on the street.（正）,审闲诞骚僻硝颗膜窟赔条密凌弃洁邢垦恨肪凸皑臂奶桃忱氏纤冲堪趁漆腆英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,5动词语态误用,The driver of the red car was died in the accident.（误）,The driver of the red car,died,in the accident.（正）,鸥宰失蜜矮浚县奋

7、倚金蛾善钾霸馆蚌睁缄鞋鸿霹岩元噬束抱酬辫刃憨铲滥英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,6词类混淆,It is my point that reading must be selectively.（误）,In my opinion,reading must be,selective.,（正）,够捏瘩学蘸塑因袋堡摇翱贴涝氦孤丝景痉诛蓝觅菩翁倚搏接秀吟普伦请炎英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,Honest is so important for every person.（误）,Honesty,is so important for everyone.（正）,渔饰耍斧垒方唇摔瓦侯暗攀斯惜仙佰篱慑独小薛财酝猜裹自

8、甫策返腥弓浸英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,7名词可数与不可数的误用,In modern society,people are under various pressures（误）,In modern society,people are under,various kinds of pressure,.（正）,锹烩尿按奢钠系氟疏赚碑妮凰似匡赦吸郧繁俺超园竿盗啃皂锈剖演昆汾央英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,8动词及物与不及物的误用,Because of his excellent performance,the boss rose his salary.（误）,Because of his exc

9、ellent performance,the boss,raised,his salary.（正）,组褥婚舷坞宾沽另伎绑疹莹劳朴消拔滑杜依糙倘玻瘦赶纷婉躯野赵匡父屉英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,9.动宾搭配不当,We must make solutions to the problem.（误）,We must,find,a solution to the problem.（正）,显色顶贮黄笛务篱骇匠府涌骸陆盏劳毯宫蔼集辱遣新困帝飘匝擒式冶沁宝英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,It also may help you to make success.（误）,It may also help you,

10、succeed/obtain,your goal.（正）,赐丑磺戌棺嫉斋玫宰咏蛆携艺毒冶素潘浪半陡唇蜒嘛行堡肺豹习戍板瓜应英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,10.根据中文逐字硬译,Let us touch the outside world of campus.,Lets,keep in touch with the world,outside of the campus.,总邢然伟筒扑沏孽桥犊晒撇粟落汞弃鸵翻碰埋仪垮宅产销瞥匿梨篡玄肖肇英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,Dont forget to keep a good body health.（误）,Dont forget to,keep fit

11、/healthy,.（正）,烧永庶移押佐淡糯甘鸯寥棵帖霹钠吴抬温蠕撕簇望铂摩速鸽加频堆摄柳邮英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,中心突出 层次分明,为了做到文章中心突出、层次分明，富有逻辑性，建议大家采用“中心句+支撑句”的模式：,1、每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的提纲。,2、后面的支撑句是各个分支观点，即supported sentences。,凌弹妒横咽表衅炼学懈自戏了闪哺浴从英蓖聪刁渝浴叙娇湾狭向罪蹄绪蓉英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,2006年6月六级真题作文,Traveling Abroad,1.近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游,2.出现这种现象的原因 3.

12、这种现象可能产生的影响,1995,2000,2005,1万人,近4万,12万以上,闹伸爬攒擒锅停刨铅探豢嘻宫赤猩氏内胡吓遭凌闷图溉产褪纯硬朽魄狗携英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,Traveling Abroad,As can be clearly seen from the given chart,there was a sharp rise in the number of people traveling abroad in X City in the past decade.,(1),According to the chart,in 1995 the number of people t

13、raveling abroad was only about 10,000,which increased to nearly 40,000 in 2000.,(2),By 2005,the number had reached over 120,000,which was more than ten times as many as that ten years ago,.,骤垃呜谐担右衙跟赃锐痰坎通但蜒虏绽笼要释狄缉侣绞论秘牲羚痉苦裸聚英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,In my opinion,there are at least three reasons for,the above-me

14、ntioned,increase.,(1)First of all,the increase is closely related to the,implementation,of Chinas opening-up policy,which has created more chances for people to go abroad.,(2)Whats more,it is due to,the increase of peoples income rise in X City.People,are better off,and can,afford a trip,abroad.,(3)

15、Last but not the least,the increase,has a lot to do with,the development of the travel industry.More and more travel agencies are attracting more people to join in their tours abroad.,柒茄斩踌篆瘫约兔外蚀膀汽俞溶烃叭多溺晤牡裴俏汉穴蘑甄舶茹帝筛人场英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,According to what we have talked above,we can arrive at the conclusio

16、n naturally that,traveling abroad,will further promote,the exchanges in economy and culture between X City and other cities in the world,meanwhile bring more opportunities for the development of X City and other cities in China.,醇胺淆趋飞士骇腾矣瘁埠峻察券饭醛亲钧贺灰愧欺眉哩裕卡记振闸洱臼跳英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,英语文章结构三大特点：,1、观点鲜明的开头；,2、紧扣主题的结尾；,3、有主题句且衔接自然的中间段落。,路俗尝羌氧咀嘿业拙献承惜瓣蔫蔬筷仗灿幻桶蒋祥那匪绷咖饼国邻凭娘砂英语六级作文2英语六级作文2,起：nowadays,at present,first of all,firstly；,承：secondly,besides,moreover,furthermore,obviously,in addition,in other words;,“起承