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1、To continue a story续写续写 之之 如何构思如何构思Tocontinueastory续写之如何构思1What is a STORY/Why do we make STORIES?A story is to entertian,to amuse,to educate,to enlighten.Basically,a story is to deliver a piece of mind to us.So,how to deliver it well?WhatisaSTORY/Whydowemak2What makes a story?Simply put:WhoWhereWha

2、tWhenHowWhyLiterarily put:Characters(Main&Minor)Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&Resolution)Whatmakesastory?Simplyput3ThinkThinkFor a good story,which is more important,the character,or the plot?ThinkForagoodstory,which41.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but_.2.ShenMeng

3、yanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_,butwhen_shewill_.3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe_.he was a little annoyed when his food was taken by ChengSihanis in the classroomin the dormbe totally a crazy onealways speaks softly to himCharacterization Practice(Writing)1.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandhe54.WangChenh

4、aoisaquietboy,he_.5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe_.6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_.cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.looks down upon all the other boys in the class who he thinks ugly.felt he must do something4.

5、WangChenhaoisaquietboy,6Make it a one-sentence story!Make it a one-sentence story!1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptonshouse,onlyto_.2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas_.3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinnystape,_.be made lose his nerves b

6、y a little mischievous girl to become the queen of the party of the upper classdidnt let the desire to win get the better of her and returned it to JinnyMakeitaone-sentencestory!74.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteacherseyes,yethe_

7、.6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she_.aChristmasgiftfromthebossnever likes any teachers class4.Larryangrilyopenedthecar8Lets read and pay attention to the red part.Lets read and pay attention to the red part.One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom

8、,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to

9、 follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.Letsreadandpayattention9What would she dodo or

10、experienceexperience next?criedforhelp?regrettedwhatshehaddone?triedtogobackonherown?waitedforherhusband?cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?.Whatwouldshedoorexperienc10No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she be

11、came.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how She wanted to hold

12、him and tell him how much she loved him.much she loved him.Began to regretThings got worsemiss her husband and familyNoreply.Ifonlyshehadnot11 Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her

13、great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.1.Its lucky she had someting to drink and eat,but would the luck continue?2.Why we

14、re the berries most delicious to her?Janeroseatthebreakofd12 As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.Helicopter stands for?Asshepickedherwaycare13Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._Butnomorehelicopterscamea14