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1、关于地方、关于地方、景点介绍景点介绍荷塘月色.mp3一、地方特点一、地方特点位置位置：be located inbe located in，be situated inbe situated in，lie lie in/to/on the east of,There in/to/on the east of,There stands/lies,lies on the(eastern)coast of stands/lies,lies on the(eastern)coast of,lies off,lies offHubei province lies in the middle of Chi

2、na.Hubei province lies in the middle of China.Hunan lies on the south of Hubei.Hunan lies on the south of Hubei.ZhongxiangZhongxiang lies about 220 kilometers(to lies about 220 kilometers(to the)northwest of Wuhan.the)northwest of Wuhan.Shanghai Shanghai lieslies on the eastern coast of China.on the

3、 eastern coast of China.Taiwan Island lies off the eastern coast of Taiwan Island lies off the eastern coast of China.China.历史历史：have/with a(long)history of.have/with a(long)history of.,date back to,date from,have ,date back to,date from,have witnessed too much in historywitnessed too much in histor

4、y Although a small country,it has amazing Although a small country,it has amazing history of over 5,000 years.history of over 5,000 years.Few places on the planet are packed with Few places on the planet are packed with history as Ireland history as Ireland The Great Wall of China dates back to more

5、 The Great Wall of China dates back to more than 2,500 years ago.than 2,500 years ago.l人口人口：have/with a population of.,the population of is,percent of the population arelNew Zealand has a population of about 3.8 million people,of which about fourteen percent are MaorilIreland has a young population,

6、with forty four percent of the total population under the age of 25.l面积面积：cover/have/with an area of.,take up,the area/size of is环境环境：with green hills and beautiful rivers,be surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers气候：气候：neither too cold nor too hot，the climate varies from place to placeThe c

7、limate of the British Isles is mild with a lot of rain.The coldest month is February,when the temperature can be as low/high as n n特色特色：be famous/well be famous/well known/distinguished for.,have known/distinguished for.,have the distinction of,the special the distinction of,the special character of

8、 the place is,is character of the place is,is home tohome ton n名胜景观名胜景观：a place with many a place with many tourist attractions/places of tourist attractions/places of interest/scenic spotsinterest/scenic spots ,have/get a,have/get a good/fantastic view ofgood/fantastic view ofv二、地位和评价二、地位和评价v1.The

9、cathedral is famous for the height of its tower,which is without doubt the highest and handsome in England.v2.You will never regret if you pay a visit to it.v3.It is really a great feast for your eyes.v4.A trip to China will make you know more about it besides/as well as/in addition to/apart from it

10、s culture and history.v5.Youll be rewarded not only by/with the view of,but also byPracticev苏州位于上海西面苏州位于上海西面50英里处，人口五百多万，英里处，人口五百多万，占地占地8488平方公里。平方公里。vSuzhou is located/is situated/lies 50 miles(to the)west of Shanghai,covering an area of 8488 square kilometers,with a population of over 5 million.n钟

11、祥一中坐落在南湖湖畔，全校拥有师生近四千钟祥一中坐落在南湖湖畔，全校拥有师生近四千余人，一年四季被绿树红花环绕着，是一个风景余人，一年四季被绿树红花环绕着，是一个风景如画的地方。如画的地方。nLocated on the bank of the South Lake,No.1 middle school of Zhongxiang has a population of nearly 4,000,including teachers and students.Surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers all the year round,i

12、t is really picturesque(风景如画的风景如画的)all the time.整体结构分布整体结构分布lPara 1 总体介绍/位置，面积、人口lPara 2 周边环境，交通状况，历史，名胜古迹，本地特色，风土人情lPara 3 针对描述，结合写作要求进行结尾。语言语言 1涵盖所有的要点 2运用灵活的表达方式，长短句结合；运用较多的语法结构和词汇，尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇 3 有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4 书写工整，卷面整洁l澳大利亚位于最小的大洲澳大利亚位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界第六大国家。大洋洲，是世界第六大国家。它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有

13、少部分沿海地区有它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本充足的雨量。它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本(Melbourne)、悉尼悉尼(Sydney)是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光、数不是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。到这里体验它独特的美丽。l总面积：总面积：7,686,850 square kilometersl人口：约人口：约2,000万万l注意：要有标题，介绍必须包括所有的内容要点，但不要注意：要有标题，介绍必须包括所

14、有的内容要点，但不要逐条翻译成英语。逐条翻译成英语。_ nLocated in the smallest continentOceania，Australia is the sixth largest country in the world。It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million.It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have adequate rainfall.I

15、t is made up of six states，of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities.Because it is famous for its bright sunshine，countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife，tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its beautiful scenery.澳大利亚位于最小的大洲澳大利亚位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界大洋洲，是世界第六大国家总面积：第六大国家总面积：7

16、,686,850 square kilometers 人口：约人口：约2,000万万1、Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers,Australia,whose population is 20 million,is the sixth largest country in the world,situated on the smallest continent,Oceania.（李翔）2、Australia,the sixth largest country in the world,lies on the smallest contin

17、ent,Oceania.It covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers,with only a population of 20 million.（韩雨璁）3 Covering an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(彭珊)4 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 20 million,which

18、 makes it the sixth biggest country in the world.(王丽娟)3、Australia is typical of a country with dry climate,and only a few parts which are close to the ocean have adequate rainfalls.（邵敏）4、The dry climate covers the whole country except for a few offshore districts which have abundant rainfalls.（杨昕琰）5

19、、Rain seldom falls on the land except for some areas along the seaside，so most parts of the country are very dry and hot all the year around.（杨扬），它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。有充足的雨量。Most parts of the country is dry all over the year Most parts of the country is dry all over

20、 the year with few places(having)abundant rain.(with few places(having)abundant rain.(曾诚曾诚)It has so hot and dry a climate that only in some It has so hot and dry a climate that only in some parts along the coast is there enough/adequate parts along the coast is there enough/adequate rain.(rain.(王丽娟

21、王丽娟)What is known to us all is that Australia is a place What is known to us all is that Australia is a place where the climate is dry and only a minority of where the climate is dry and only a minority of areas by the sea have enough rain.(areas by the sea have enough rain.(夏洁莲夏洁莲)它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本它由六个

22、州组成，其中墨尔本(Melbourne)、悉尼、悉尼(Sydney)是最大的两个城市是最大的两个城市It consists of/is made up of six states,of which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest.它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。而著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。6、There are warm sunshine,a good many cattle and countless sheep as we

23、ll as special wild animals and plants,which have appealed to the tourists all over the world to enjoy/experience its unique view.（李丝丝）7、Its universally acknowledged that Australia is not only famous for its warm sunshine and a good many cattle and sheep,but also is home to a rich diversity of fantas

24、tic wild animals and plants.（熊曼婷）8、The warm sunshine,countless cattle and sheep as well as many other strange wild animals and plants make it one of the most famous country,attracting a great many people from all over the world to experience its charm of nature.（孙安安）9、When you come there,you are ser

25、ved/rewarded not only with its lovely sunshine but also by the numerous sheep and cattle as well as unusual wild animals and plants.（洪胜男）10.Having so beautiful scenery,it attracts hundreds of thousands of tourists throughout the world to come here,where they can have a feast for their minds as well

26、as their eyes.（李翔）11.It is also said to be one of the most suitable place to live in.(崔雅倩)12.It is a fascinating place marked out for tourists.(谢千驰)补充语句oHaving been separated from other continents for millions of years,Australia has many plants and animals that cant be found anywhere else in the wor

27、ld.How to polish your composition?n应用定语从句nAustralia is made up of six states,of which Melbourne and Sydney are the two biggest cities.nWith结构作定语nIt covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers,with only a population of 20 million.n分词作状语nSituated on the smallest continent,Oceania,Australia is the si

28、x largest country in the world.nHaving been separated from other continents for millions of years,Australia has many plants and animals that cant be found anywhere else in the world.n名词性从句What is known to us all is that Australia is a place where the climate is dry and only a minority of areas by th

29、e sea have enough rain修饰词汇的使用修饰词汇的使用la good many/a rich diversity of/tens of thousands of lunusual/unique/countless/fantastic/specialladequate/abundant 积累与仿写（积累词汇，仿写书中的长句）but also is home to a rich diversity of fantastic wild animals and plants.you are served/rewarded not only with its lovely sunshine but also by the numerous sheep and cattle as well as unusual wild animals and plants.（仿选修六第五单元 The lake of heaven）Homework周练十一The more you practise,the better your writing will be.