托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质

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1、托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质托福写作的题目类型很广波及话题种类繁多，有些话题考生初看之下会有完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。今天小编给大家带来了托福写作高分总分值范文点评和思路解析,希望能够帮忙到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来观赏一下吧。托福写作高分总分值范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good bossWhat are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss) Use specificdetails and examples to explain why

2、these qualities are important.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目是偏向于职场概念的一道题。还在学生阶段的考生要写好这道题，重点在于找到类似boss或者supevisor概念的对象，比方学习小组的组长，班级里的班长或是班主任老师等等。然后再往这个方向去思考自己喜欢的boss应该具有的特质。一般来说赏罚清楚，能够和下属搞好关系，对待员工公平公道，这些都是一个好老板应该具备的特征。本话题高分范文赏析A good boss is imperative to a successful workplace. The best bosses areserious, creative,

3、 and flexible. If a boss lacks any of these qualities,problems are certain to arise in the workplace.While humor and kindness are important characteristics for bosses to have,work is a serious business, and must be approached with a serious attitude. Aboss must be able to keep his/her employees work

4、ing hard and on schedule. He/Shemust set down rules, enforce them, and also personally adhere to them. If theboss comes in late to work, leaves early, or spends all day joking with theco-workers, then the employees will neither respect nor work hard for him/her. Aboss must have a serious and profess

5、ional attitude that sets an example for allof the employees in the workplace.To confront the countless problems that arise every day in the workplace, aboss must be extremely creative. If a client needs the company to meet adeadline earlier than expected, a boss must find ways to motivate employees

6、towork faster and harder. A boss who lacks creativity might force his/heremployees to work overtime. In this case, the employees might be very tired andupset; they might work slower or produce lower quality work as a result. Acreative boss might spend a small amount of money, and treat everyone to d

7、innerat the office to encourage employees to stay late. In this way the company mightmeet the deadline, preserve quality, and keep employee morale high.Finally, the most important quality that a good boss must possess isflexibility. While needing to set serious, strict rules, he/she must alsorecogni

8、ze that at times the rules need to be bent or broken. For instance, aboss should strictly enforce attendance policies in the workplace. But if anemployee with an excellent attendance record needs to take a day off forpersonal reasons, the boss should let him/her do it. In this way employeesloyalty t

9、o the company will be strengthened, and they will be more happy andproductive in the workplace.托福写作办法分享第一，在外语学习五项能力听、说、读、写、译的训练方面，学生从中学到大学在听、说、读三项能力方面得到的训练比拟多写句训练都是靠做选择项的形式来完成的，很少有真正动手写的时机;因而很多学生在做语法题或改错时有敏锐的辩别力，能够找出很复杂的语法错误，可是一旦自己真正动笔写，却错误多得不得了，而且很多都是最简单最根本的语法错误。所以，平时写的少，练的少，是构成写作困难的主要原因。第二，不少学生不足对

10、写作知识和写作技巧的了解和学习。他们一写作文，就感到脑子空空，不知如何下笔，写起来也是想到哪儿，写到哪儿，有时还东拼西凑，因而写作文时，常常是低水平上的重复，提高不快。如果能了解和学习一些英语写作知识，加上适当的指导和训练，写作水平会很快得到提高。考生要根据所给题目、素材、写作提纲、规定情景或图表等在40分钟内写出不少于150词的短文。要求内容切题，叙述分明，意义连贯，语言比拟标准。根据大纲的要求，考生要想在短文写作中取得高分，首先要具备两方面的英语根本功：一是较强的句子叙述水平，句子要写正确、叙述准确到位，要有一定的英语修辞知识。二要具备英语语篇写作知识，这样才能适应不同类型的命题，主动灵活

11、有条理地运用自己的语言知识和能力写好短文。此外，考生还应对作文考题有一定的了解，知己知彼才能稳操胜券。托福独立写作的大招数第一、熟悉托福独立写作常考话题托福独立写作要求考生利用30分时间写作出300词左右的文章。在托福独立写作中，有十类常考的话题，下列是话题分类和相关题目举例。1. 全球化影响There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and culturecontact between countries on a countrys identity. What is your opinion2. 政府投资Peopl

12、e should keep all the money they earn and should not pay taxes to thestate. Do you agree or disagree3. 科技影响Many employees may work at home with modern technol.y. Some people claimthat it benefits only workers, but not employers. To what extent do you agree ordisagree4. 文化类It is more important for a

13、building to serve its purposes than to lookbeautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work ofart. Do you agree or disagree5. 生活工作Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. What is youropinion6. 传媒类Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a d

14、etaileddescription of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do youagree or disagree7. 广告类There are many advertisements directed at children. Parents argue thatchildren are misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of usefulinformation. What is your opinion8. 环境类It

15、is said that the best way to solve the worlds environmental problems isto increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree9. 动物类Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out,although people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why have peoplefaile

16、d to improve this situation What are your suggestions10. 教育类Some people believe that educating children alt.ether will benefit them.Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given specialcourses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.第二、了解托福独立写作的常用写法“五段论托福独立写作最经典的写法就是

17、“五段论。五段论实质上就是利用“总分总结构来写。英文逻辑下写作，首段讲究开门见山，在开头的最后一句话结束前一定要有叙述自己观点的句子出现。在具体的写作内容上，倡议首先用简洁明了的句子对原题目的意思进行同义替换，然后提出自己的观点。要保证开头没有任何的语法错误。在正文的局部，三段是要保证的。也就是三个分论点。这里注意一个原那么：可以“一点多段，但不可“一段多点。也就是在一个论点写完前不要引入新的论点。如果结束了就换段，保证一段的中心只有一个。如果对于一个点的论述很长，可以分成两段。这里倡议有三个论点是因为一般情况下两个论点太少，需要用足够的论述或是例子才能使文章字数到达要求，而四个论点又太多，没

18、有足够的时间来充实每一个论点造成因为“论点开展不完全扣分。最后是起总结作用的结尾。倡议写作时只要再次提到全文主观点，但决不能照抄开头叙述立场的句子，而应该以不同的方式讲同一个话题。第三、防止托福独立写作误区考生在托福独立写作中常见的误区有三个：1.刻意选择使用复杂词汇许多考生在写作中可以选择难度词汇，期待“一鸣惊人的奇效。但是其实用复杂的词汇一方面会容易出现拼写错误造成失分，;另一方面，对难度词汇很多考生把握不到位，对它们的用法不清晰，使用会不恰当。2.生搬硬套复杂句子结构许多考生在托福独立写作备考时准备了多个句型，定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句，在考场上千方百计把句型套用上去，希望可以得到语言运用、句式多样性上的高分。但是托福写作不是考语法，而是考察语言应用。一篇好的文章应该水道渠成，自然流畅。并不是好句式就一定能得到高分，读上去顺畅、长句短句结合才是王道。3.论证中无视例子作用很多考生在写作议论文时，总会出现一个问题：纯理论探讨。在托福独立写作中，考官希望看到考生对自己的每一个论点都充沛论证，在论证中参加例子来充实文章。但是很多考生往往对一个论点以不同的写法重复，只有纯理论展示，但是却没有例子作为论据。这会成为托福独立写作的一大扣分点。托福写作高分总分值范文点评和思路解析：好老板具备的特质相关文章： 托福写作高分总分值范文点评和思路解析大全