2012年12月英语四六级写作技巧：平行结构7800字

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1、2012年12月英语四六级写作技巧：平行结构7800字 2012年上半年四六级考试已经结束，毕业整理复习资料，希望对下半年的备考有帮助 第 1 页：第2页：精典范例 Parallel Structure 毕业论文 平行结构 简历大全 /html/jianli/ 相似的思想应用相似的形式表达出来。句子的成份相近，则也应以相似的形式出现。请注意以下标有NO的句子是不规范的。 毕业No: The school bus skidded, turned sideways, then comes to a stop.Yes: The school bus skidded, turned sideways,

2、 and came to a stop. 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/(并列时态) 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/No: I dont know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and a bore.Yes: I dont know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and boring. 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/(形容词平行结构) 论文代写 No: In the wreck th

3、e circus lost a panda and elephant. 论文代写Yes: In the wreck the circus lost a panda and an elephant. 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/(不定冠词的平行结构)No: I debated whether I should give the beggar money or to offer him food. Yes: I debated whether to give the beggar money or to offer him food.(不定式的平行结构)

4、 论文代写No: They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes days.Yes: They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes for days. 毕业论文(介词平行结构) 简历大全 /html/jianli/ No: Michaels vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and dust filled the air. 总结大全 /html/zongjie/Yes: Michaels vac

5、uum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and filled the air with dust. 毕业(并列谓语) 毕业No: The mechanic explained the problem, method, and the tools that he was going to use. 毕业Yes: The mechanic explained the problem, method, and tools that he was going to use.(并列带有定冠词the的名词) 毕业No: He retired respec

6、ted by his associates, admired by his friends, and his employees loved him. 论文代写 Yes: He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and loved by his employees. (并列被动语态) 毕业论文No: As a young man he had been to Shanghai, fighting in the Anti-Japanese War, and following the Nationalist

7、Party to Chongking. 论文代写 Yes: As a young man he had been to Shanghai, had fought in the Anti-Japanese War and had followed the Nationalist Party to Chongking. 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/(并列过去完成时) No: Jane is pretty, with brown hair, and has a graceful manner. Yes: Jane is pretty, brown-hair

8、ed, and graceful. 简历大全 /html/jianli/(形容词平行结构) 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/No: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and because his health deteriorated rapidly. 简历大全 /html/jianli/Yes: He left the city because of his lack of success in busin

9、ess, the departure of his friends and his rapidly failing health.(作宾语的名词平行结构) 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/No: They bought the house for location and affordability. 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/Yes: They bought the house because of its location and its affordability. 作文 /zuowen/ (并列名词;注意代词的所有格) 毕业论文No

10、: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and as if he was unimportant? 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/Yes: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and unimportant? 总结大全 /html/zongjie/(形容词的平行结构) 总结大全 /html/zongjie/ No: This could be a problem for both the winners and for those who lose.Yes: T

11、his could be a problem for both the winners and losers. 论文代写(名词平行结构) 作文 /zuowen/No: The prisoner was not only found guilty of bribery but also adultery.Yes: The prisoner was found guilty not only of bribery but also of adultery. 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/(并列介词短语) 毕业论文 为使平行结构清楚明了，随时都可以重复介词、冠词、助动词、不定词标志，或者长

12、的短语或句子的介绍词。 简历大全 /html/jianli/Awkward: I admire Tennyson for the ideals in his poems but not his style. 毕业Improved: I admire Tennyson for the ideals in his poems but not for his style. Awkward: The sentences are difficult to understand, not because they are long but they are obscure. 总结大全 /html/zong

13、jie/Improved: The sentences are difficult to understand, not because they are long but because they are obscure. 简历大全 /html/jianli/Awkward: He explained that the advertising campaign had been successful, business had increased more than forty per cent, and additional capital was sorely needed.Improv

14、ed: He explained that the advertising campaign had been successful, that business had increased more than forty per cent, and that additional capital was sorely needed. 毕业论文在商业和正式文件写作中，越来越多的用到圆点散句。除了更易读之外，它们更能从视觉上引起人们注意。作者需要决定在圆点之后用什么形式来写，是用名词，动词，形容词，副词，还是介词短语，定语从句甚至完整的句子。应该记住的是它们相互间应该保持一致。平行结构较多用。

15、作文 /zuowen/ Examples: 总结大全 /html/zongjie/Our recommendations for improving computer-user comfort are as follows: 论文代写 Anti-radiation screens should be available for computer monitors. 毕业 Wrist supports should be used to help maintain proper wrist position during computer use and possibly reduce the

16、risk of carpal tunnel syndrome. 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/ Employees need adjustable chairs with a stronger back support. 简历大全 /html/jianli/ (主谓一致结构) 总结大全 /html/zongjie/What makes me different from other job applicants? Ability to converse in English, Japanese in addition to my native Mand

17、arin 作文 /zuowen/ Completion of two-month customer satisfaction training 简历大全 /html/jianli/ Impeccable medical report card Outgoing personality and eager desire to help(名词平行结构) 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/Awkward: At Yi Xin Associates, we have 15 years of combined legal experience in all types of injury case

18、s one can think of. Other areas we handle are wrongful death, automobile accidents and medical malpractice. If you slip and fall in a public building, we can represent you in filing a law suit against the owner. Also, our clients come to seek our help in handicap discrimination and denial of insuran

19、ce claim cases. 论文代写 Better: At Yi Xin Associates, we have 15 years of combined legal experience in: 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/ All injury cases 简历大全 /html/jianli/ Wrongful death 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/ Automobile accidents 总结大全 /html/zongjie/ Medical malpractice 作文 /zuowen/ Slip and fall 总结大

20、全 /html/zongjie/ Handicap discrimination 简历大全 /html/jianli/ Denial of insurance claimsIncorrect: The duties of the Executive Secretary of the Administrative Committee are: 论文代写 To take minutes of all meetings (不定式短语) 论文代写 The Executive Secretary answers all the correspondence; and (句子) 总结大全 /html/zo

21、ngjie/ Writing of month reports. (话题) 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/ Correct: The duties of the Executive Secretary of the Administrative Committee are: 论文代写 To take minutes of all meetings; 毕业 To answer all the correspondence; and 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/ To write monthly reports.精典范例: 毕业论文Let the word go forth

22、from this time and place, to friend and foe1 alike, that the torch has been passed to a new generation of Americans, born in this century, tempered by war, disciplined by a hard and bitter peace, proud of our ancient heritage, and unwilling to witness or permit the slow undoing of those human rights

23、 to which this nation has always been committed, and to which we are committed today at home and around the world. 论文代写 So let us begin anew, remembering on both sides that civility is not a sign of weakness, and that sincerity is always subject to proof. Let us never negotiate out of fear, but let

24、us never fear to negotiate. Now the trumpet summons us again - not as a call to bear arms, though arms we need2; not as a call to battle, though embattled we are3; but a call to bear the burden of a long twilight struggle, a year in and year out rejoicing in hope, patient in tribulation, a struggle4

25、 against the common enemies of man: 5 tyranny, poverty, disease, and war itself. 总结大全 /html/zongjie/And so, my fellow Americans, ask not what your country can do for you6; ask what you can do for your country.-美国前总统John F. Kennedy 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/注意： 毕业(1)划线部分为平行结构 开题报告 /html/lun

26、wenzhidao/kaitibaogao/ (2)例 1.头韵;例2&3. We need arms和 We are embattled为倒装结构;例4.同位语;例5.见冒号的用法。 论文代写在句中使用 and 或on时, 须连接结构相同的部分。总的原则是：词与词相配, 短语和短语相配,从句和从句相配 ,句子则和句子放在一起。所有这些搭配必须是平行结构，它们应采用相同的形式。 作文 /zuowen/No: My parents went to Tibet, to Mongolia, and they even saw Hong Kong and Macau. 论文代写Yes: My

27、parents went to Tibet, to Mongolia, and even to Hong Kong and Macau. 论文代写 No: Jonathan noticed the way Stephanie talked and how she kept fidgeting with her fingers. 简历大全 /html/jianli/Yes: Jonathan noticed how Stephanie talked and how she kept fidgeting with her fingers. 毕业一些连词，如 both/and, either/or,

28、 neither/nor,和not only/but also.常用于连接平行结构。 毕业论文No: That conference was both helpful and contained a lot of information. 毕业 Yes: That conference was both helpful and informative. 思想汇报 /sixianghuibao/No: Here we either turn left or right, but I forget which. 毕业Yes: Here we turn either left or right, b

29、ut I forget which. 论文代写 No: Fu Chong, the pianist, was heavily influenced both by his mentor and his parents. 总结大全 /html/zongjie/Yes: Fu Chong, the pianist, was heavily influenced by both his mentor and his parents.No: Elizabeths overcoat is at either the theater or her dormitory. 总结大全 /html/zongjie/Yes: Elizabeths overcoat is either at the theater or in her dormitory. 开题报告 /html/lunwenzhidao/kaitibaogao/2012.6四六级真题答案专题 论文代写2012年6月英语四六级成绩查询时间 作文 /zuowen/