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1、个人品质主题 Honesty is the best policy In his speech Li Hua spoke of an overseas excellent Chinese student who couldnt find a job because of his dishonesty. The story shows the readers that honesty really is the best policy. By giving an example that an overseas excellent Chinese student who couldnt find

2、 a job because of his dishonesty, the speaker shows the readers that honesty really is the most important. Most stories: 狼来了，找多钱，考试作弊 Li Jiacheng 下订单，做不了，诚实告知，反得订单- 陈熙璐 Liu yong, 为哥哥还债 -李坦航 Tang Jun, 假文凭-冼瑞韵 San lu, 卖假奶粉-梁伟军 Though we have witnessed a great many people who reaped benefits for themse

3、lves in a dishonest way, there are also lots of people who act as good examples, such as George Washington, the first president of USA. （体现关键词，看首句知道例子中心）When he was young, he cut down a cherry tree which was a treasure of his fathers accidentally. （起因）He was ashamed of himself for his wrongdoing. Af

4、ter thinking over, he chose to be an honest man so he admitted cutting down the tree. There was a pregnant silence when his father learned the truth. （经过）To his surprise, his father forgave his fault with a smiling face, which sowed a seed of honesty in Georges heart and led him to be a respectable

5、and admirable president in the future.（结果+总结）最好还能跳出例子升华总结林钰涵 Not only do the incidents of dishonesty arise in our daily life but also it exists in the official circles.(体现例子的中心词，看首句就知道例子写什么) Chen Shuibian, the former president of Taiwan, grafted a great amount of money during his presidency. When be

6、ing involved in the scandal of corruption and bribery, he innocently and resolutely claimed that he was too honest a man to do that. （起因）However, after further investigation, he turned out to be a national thief who diverted a huge sum of national wealth and ended up with life imprisonment.（经过）As a

7、consequence, his wrongdoings disgrace all his family and gain himself a notorious reputation forever. （结果）A moments dishonesty may benefit people a lot and fulfill ones needs temporarily, but it will also drag them in to the evil abysm in the end.（跳出例子，进行升华）郭嘉贤 Honesty has been regarded as a gem of

8、virtue in our society all the time, while dishonesty will bring one shame, even ruin ones reputation of integrity, and the following one is a typical case in point.(体现例子的中心词，看首句就知道例子写什么) Da Vinci, one of the most famous imported furniture companies in China, has been appealed to the Consumer Council

9、 recently, because a majority of consumers complaint about the discomfort caused by using the products of Da Vinci. (起因)This led to a further investigation to the high-priced furniture, and it turned out that their luxurious appearance is a disguise of materials of inferior quality underneath.（经过） L

10、ater, the manager of the company made an apology to the public and beg for their forgiveness with a tearful look. However, it is hard to retrieve the companys reputation owing to not only its inferior goods but also the deception to the customers, or rather, the society.（结果） It was dishonesty that d

11、isgraces oneself and even brings a succession of credit crisis in our society.（对例子主题升华） 梁萃芬 正式范文Honesty is the best policy 如果所给的是诚信的例子，感受就这样写：I am also impressed and deeply admire the young man much for his praiseworthy quality, because honesty is a relatively precious virtue in present society wher

12、e tricks, lies and deceits are not unusual to find. (重点写感受) 如果给出的是不诚信的例子，感受就这样写After reading this instructive speech, I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work, great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits. Now, he knows be

13、tter than anyone that dishonesty costs dearly. People would mistakenly think cheating and deceiving would bring them interests easier, but instead, it is honesty that is the stepping stone to reward and achievement. （过渡）Waltons success is a good case in point. Once the young man went to an interview

14、. But strangely enough, the interviewer insisted that Walton was the man who had once returned an important document so that the company avoided a great financial loss. However, Walton honestly told the boss that he couldnt be the right man. The moment he thought he lost the job, the boss smiled and

15、 congratulated him on winning the post with high salary and good welfare. The interview turned out to be a test of honesty. （例子说明起因，经过，结果便可，突出要突出的部分：诚实）Honesty not only brings one wealth, admiration and reputation outwardly, but more importantly brings the sense of peace and pride inwardly. （好处） Her

16、eby, the lesson taught in the stories is that honesty is the best policy, which is not only applied to individual but also the whole community. To constitute an honest and harmonious society, in terms of the school, credit education should be strengthened and highlighted from little children. In ter

17、ms of the government, it is advisable that good examples of honesty should be highly publicized and praised, while the opposite should be heavily punished. Being honest, the traditional virtue of our country, would enhance the mutual trust between people, which is the base to constitute a harmonious

18、 society, and should be fixed in everyones heart.正式范文Honesty is the best policy 2 After reading this instructive speech, I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work, great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits. Now, he knows

19、 better than anyone that dishonesty costs dearly. My classmate Wang Tao once made a similar mistake. During a math quiz, he was having trouble working out a problem. When the teacher looked away, he peeked and copied the answer from his classmate. He was glad that he had a high mark in the quiz. But

20、 when he came across a similar question in the final exam, he didnt know how to solve it and eventually failed the test. While dishonesty helped him in the short term during the quiz, it hurt him in the long term because he didnt revise that type of problem for the final exam. I shall always remembe

21、r this lesson and be an honest person. After reading this instructive speech, I felt really sorry for the student who had ruined his own promising future just for some short-term benefits. On the other hand, I also thought it was correct to punish someone who had been dishonest. I once read another

22、story about dishonesty. In that story the author found himself alone in his headmasters office, where he accidentally found the writing contest paper. He was going to take part in the competition and so couldnt resist the temptation to read it. As he prepared well beforehand, he won the first prize

23、in the contest. But instead of feeling happy and proud, he felt guilty. This feeling started the moment he decided to read the paper and it followed him all his life. From these stories, I really learned the lesson that honesty is the best policy. In life we are often tempted to be dishonest, but fo

24、r a happy and guilt-free life we know what the best choice is. After reading this instructive speech, I felt really sorry for the student who had thrown away his years of hard work, great academic achievements and a promising future just for some short-term benefits. Now, he knows better than anyone

25、 that dishonesty costs dearly. When it comes to dishonesty, my classmate Wang Tao once made a similar mistake. During a math quiz, he was having trouble working out a problem. When the teacher looked away, he peeked and copied the answer from his classmate. He was glad that he had a high mark in the

26、 quiz. But when he came across a similar question in the final exam, he didnt know how to solve it and eventually failed the test. While dishonesty helped him in the short term during the quiz, it hurt him in the long term because he didnt revise that type of problem for the final exam. I shall alwa

27、ys remember this lesson and be an honest person. After reading this instructive speech, I felt really sorry for the student who had ruined his own promising future just for some short-term benefits. On the other hand, I also thought it was correct to punish someone who had been dishonest. I once rea

28、d another story about dishonesty. In that story the author found himself alone in his headmasters office, where he accidentally found the writing contest paper. He was going to take part in the competition and so couldnt resist the temptation to read it. As he prepared well beforehand, he won the fi

29、rst prize in the contest. But instead of feeling happy and proud, he felt guilty. This feeling started the moment he decided to read the paper and it followed him all his life. From these stories, I really learned the lesson that honesty is the best policy. In life we are often tempted to be dishone

30、st, but for a happy and guilt-free life we know what the best choice is. 第二节 读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Self discipline An elderly carpenter was ready to retire. He told his employer his plans to leave the house building business and live a more leisurely life with his wife enjoy

31、ing his extended family. The employer was sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a personal favor. The carpenter said yes, but in time it was easy to see that his heart was not in his work. He used shoddy(劣等的) workmanship and used inferior(次等的) materials.

32、It was an unfortunate way to end his career. When the carpenter finished his work and the employer came to inspect the house and handed the front-door key to the carpenter. This is your house, he said, my gift to you. What a shock! What a shame! If he had only known he was building his own house, he

33、 would have done it all so differently. Now he had to live in the home he had built . So it is with us. Think of yourself as the carpenter. Each day you hammer a nail, place a board, or erect a wall. Build wisely. It is the only life you will ever build. Your life tomorrow will be the result of your

34、 attitudes and the choices you make today. 写作内容 1以约30个词概括本文的故事； 2以约120个词写一篇短文，包括如下要点。（1）你读短文后的感想；（2）叙述你的一次真实或虚构的对某一件事高度自律或负责任的经历；（3）那次高度自律或负责任的经历对你的影响。 写作内容 1以约30个词概括本文的故事； 2以约120个词写一篇短文，包括如下要点。（1）你读短文后的感想；（2）叙述你的一次真实或虚构的对某一件事高度自律或负责任的经历；（3）那次高度自律或负责任的经历对你的影响。 Summary: 1以约30个词概括本文的故事；起因：the carpente

35、r was asked to build a house before he got retired.结果：he was given the house he built and felt regretful.中间必要因素：he built a shoddy house without responsibility.组合：A carpenter was asked to build a house before he got retired. Without strong responsibility he built a shoddy one. However, he was given t

36、he house he built as a gift and felt regretful. (43)如果题目是 1以约30个词概括本文的内容； ？则故事只写起因和结果 By giving a story that a carpenter built the last house before he got retired with shoddy materials,(起因) only to find it was a gift for himself with regret,（结果） the passage tells people to be responsible for their

37、life and future.（寓意不能抄原文的内容，自己换词换句表达） 2以约120个词写一篇短文，包括如下要点。（1）你读短文后的感想；（2）叙述你的一次真实或虚构的对某一件事高度自律或负责任的经历；（3）那次高度自律或负责任的经历对你的影响。 让正确和准确的倒装成为你的亮点 1. sothat结构倒装 So bored did I feel that I decided to ignore the teacher. 2. 一就倒装 Hardly had I picked up the book when I noticed that she was explaining an impo

38、rtant problem. No sooner had the colorful vacation begun than I made a plan for the long holiday. 3. 否定词提前倒装 Not until the holiday was over did I regret that I wasted the whole holiday. Not only does this experience teach me the importance of self-discipline, but it also gives us a lesson. When talk

39、ing of self-discipline, never will I forget my experience. 4. only+状语 Only by doing/ when/if 从句 did I _. 5. 虚拟倒装 Had it not been for this experience, I wouldnt have realized my weakness. Were I the principal of ZY High School, I would not allow . 6. 地点状语提前 In the front of ZY stands a statue. Shame s

40、hameful shameless ashamed Its a shame to take money from those who cant afford it . I feel it a shame not to tell him the truth. Your beautiful handwriting puts my untidy scrawl to shame . A shameful conduct, deceit, A shameless cheat, liar, He felt ashamed of having done so little work. I feel asha

41、med that I havent written for so long. Regret regretful regrettable Regretted regretting I heard of his death with profound /deep /great regret . Much to my regret, I am unable to accept your invitation. I regret that I cannot help. I regret to say the job has been filled. He regretted not building

42、the house with his heart put into it. a regretful smile, look, Regretfully, I must decline. regrettable failures, losses, mistakes, 写正确例子的关键： 1. 反向思维！要抓住关键词，以关键词为中心来设计例子能否套用曾子杀猪例子？ Keep ones promise = be responsible for what you did/said? Keep ones promise - do what you said be responsible for what

43、you did/said do what you should do/ perform your duty! 2. 如何检验例子是否适用，看所提供的文章脉络。但要注意正反面：接受任务或工作没有做好任务 #结合要求：（2）叙述你的一次真实或虚构的对某一件事高度自律或负责任的经历；改例子：接受任务或工作（如何）做好任务例子不需过长，说明起因，经过，结果，重点突出关键词也不能过短，因为是文章主体 品质道德类的例证文章，往公益道德角度想，突出自己的光辉形象！ 事例作文句法第句：过渡+总起第句：背景（可以有，也可以没有）第句：起因(矛盾)第句：经过1第句：经过2第句：结果第句：抖一抖（升华+总结）关键词

44、多一句话进行突出，强调 三大抖法 1. 虚拟语气写反面结果：Had it not been for my self-discipline, I wouldnt have succeeded in losing weight. 2. 强调句强调良好结果：It was just by virtue of my self-discipline that I won my friends respect and trust. it is not my leadership but my self-discipline that enhance my worthy image and guarantee

45、 my confidence to lead the team, thus making me a responsible person. 3. 比喻：it is no exaggeration to say that this experience has sowed the seeds of self-discipline and responsibilities in my inner heart and has made it possible for me to make greater progress in the coming exam. （3）那次高度自律或负责任的经历对你的

46、影响。离题，只写感想所以不要自以为自己已经见够世面了！ 例子一 At this moment, the story refreshes my memory about an experience of my acting responsibly, which is still vivid in my mind. （1.过渡）One day in summer vocation, both my dad and mother had to drive to another city for business, leaving my little brother and us unattended

47、.（2.背景）I could have gone out for fun with my friend but I didnt think it appropriate to leave him alone, so I decided to stay at home and look after my brother.（3.起因/矛盾）When he was hungry, I made something for him to eat.（4. 经过1/如何解决问题1）When we felt bored, I took him to ride a bike in the afternoon

48、until my parents came back.（ 5. 经过2/如何解决问题） Seeing me taking care of my brother so well, my parents praised me that I did such a good job and I had learnt how to be a responsible person.（6. 结果）Had it not been for this chance, I wouldnt have learnt the importance of responsibility. After that, I alwa

49、ys keep responsibility in mind and try to do everything responsibly. (7. 抖一抖) 例子二： Simple as the story is, it conveys the significance of self-discipline and there are numerous examples to testify it, among which my experience is a case in point. （1.过渡） As the leader of our schools basketball team,

50、I must set a good example to my teammates when my coach was out for a week.( 2. 背景） Every time the bell rang, I hurried to the court and do training with my coachs order. （3.矛盾/起因）After my clothes were all wet through, my teammate arrived at the court and felt very shameful. （4. 经过1）From that day on

51、, they all arrived on time and with my help, they promoted their skill, which largely satisfied my coach and gain my worthy image. （5.经过2+结果）Literally speaking, it is not my leadership but my self-discipline that enhance my worthy image and guarantee my confidence to lead the team, thus making me a

52、responsible person. (6.又来抖) After reading the instructive story, I take pity on the carpenters great loss. (直接表达感受)However, I stick to the idea that he deserved this consequence because of his undisciplined and irresponsible behavior. （原因） It is self-discipline and responsibility that lead one to sa

53、tisfying reward and promising future.（正面强调） Therefore, never could we overlook the virtue of being self-disciplined, and my personal experience would illustrate the importance of it again.（1. 过渡+总起） Once, our school called on us to plant trees in response to Arbor Day.（2. 背景） On arriving the tree pl

54、anting field, our head teacher was called away because of an emergency, so we were supposed to plant trees by ourselves. （3. 起因）Without supervision of the teacher, many students surrendered themselves to entertainment activities. （4.经过1） However, I disciplined myself by rejecting the temptations and

55、 following the order given by the teacher previously. （5. 经过2） By turning the desire to play into the passion to plant trees, at last I proudly looked at the seedlings I had planted waving their hands and nodding their heads to me in the wind. (6. 结果)My strong sense of self-discipline and responsibi

56、lity not only brought me admiration from classmates and praise from teacher outwardly, but more importantly brought the sense of peace and pride inwardly. （7.抖啊抖）（旧瓶装新酒） This experience strengthened the significance of self-discipline and responsibility which has been rooted in my mind deeply ever s

57、ince. I have been bearing this virtue of excellence in mind and trying to be a good carpenter of my own life and future.（作比喻，回应原文） After reading the passage, I register profound respect(肃然起敬) for Mr. Zeng. (过渡)What Zeng did would help actualize the childs growth to a reliable and creditable man（结果），

58、 because his insistence on keeping the promise not only informed his son of the significance of creditability but also sowed the seed of integrity into his inner heart.(原因)(何慈恩) Therefore, never could we overlook the virtue of abiding by ones promise, and my personal experience would illustrate the

59、importance of it again.（1.总起过渡） In Senior 2, I had made a promise to one of my classmates that I would help him with his English during weekends.（背景：做出承诺） One weekend, no sooner had I prepared to go than the rain poured down in torrents. My parents persuaded me not to go for fear of the possible dan

60、gers on the way. After a second thought, I insisted on going because I didnt want to break my promise. When I arrived his home, I was all wet through and he was deeply moved. From then on, he became a loyal and sincere friend to me and I was highly esteemed as a man of my word. Obviously in my incid

61、ent, it is a small act of sticking to my promise that not only reaps a valuable life-time friendship but also brings me admiration and reputation outwardly. If everyone bears this moral virtue in mind, our society would be a civilization of harmony and creditability. (感受与总结升华一段)下个星期，重点背品质道德的文章！月考内容！

62、 第二节 读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Forming good study habits is a great start on a path to success. Even small changes can make a big difference and, over time, will change not only your approach toward studying and organizing but your overall outlook on school and work. Having effe

63、ctive study habits creates a more efficient academic environment. Planning your study schedule in advance and faithfully sticking to it saves time. Even giving consideration to small details makes a difference. Developing an efficient study plan can make your academic life go much more smoothly. Whe

64、n you have good study habits, you tend to be less stressed. Students who are anxious on exam day are typically those who came unprepared. Students who organize their lives and stick to their study schedules are confident and relaxed at test-taking time. Regardless of whether you are setting a good e

65、xample for classmates or for friends, showing good study habits can have a positive effect on those around you. Your friends and classmates may turn to their own studies as you study. Your roommates may be inspired to organize their own rooms and study plans. 写作内容你校的英文报组织了关于“养成良好学习习惯”的讨论,上文是刊登在该报上的文

66、章。你看完文章后，想就这一主题写一篇英语短文并投稿，内容包括： 1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容； 2. 以约120词就“养成良好学习习惯”进行讨论，并包括以下要点：（1）你有哪些好的学习习惯；（2）好的学习习惯帮助你成功的经历；（3）如何才能养成好的学习习惯。 Summary:每段段首句就是该段的主题句，这种类型summary要注意： 1. 最好的结构就是总分结构！原句：Forming good study habits is a great start on a path to success.有的同学总的不够总： A good study habit brings a lot of benefits. 2. 不要运用原句！换词换语序 Developing good study habit is a beginning of/key to success. 3. 需要注意词性和句型的并列。 Sample: Developing good study habit is a beginning of/key to success. (总！)They can create effici