高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练(17)

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11、importnce of rectinthnvironment at preset.*结束高考英语作文精选范文-应用文类1.如你是学生会主席，请根据下面图表，用英语写一则有关春游的告知。参与者高中一、二年级的学生活动内容.去博物馆看人与自然的展览。2.参与泉山植物园。集合地点学校大门前集合时间1. 月25日上午乘校车前去;.早上七点集合,七点二十分开车。注意事项.参观展览时保持安静；并认真记笔记，准备回来后讨论。在山顶野餐，要自带午餐和饮料。3.参与者在本周四前到学生会报名。注意:1.告知必须涉及表内所列内容,可以合适调节内容的顺序和增长细节，使其连贯、完整。2.词数：0左右。 .告知时间：4

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17、lie!*结束高考英语作文精选范文-应用文类1. 如果你是王林, 李明是你的好友, 她对布朗先生的公司感爱好，打算到该公司谋职(apply or psitn）。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为她写一封推荐信。词数10左右。姓名李明性别男国籍中国出生地重庆婚否已婚出生日期1980.821通讯地址重庆市人民路148号电话职业律师学历大学毕业外语水平擅长英语, 懂某些日语、德语其她有三年工作经历，办事认真,待人诚恳,与人和睦相处DaMr. ron,Ilik toitodcmy frientoyo, Mr. Li Ming, wois ng to ppy for a poito in yo fm. H

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25、容易,由于题目中提供了比较具体的情景,并且是学生常用的语言情景。但要注意体现要点要全面并按照时间顺序展开论述。考生在写作的时候,要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基本上，增长合适的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境,饶有爱好的感觉。还要注意体现内容要点时要使用丰富多样的体现方式。涉及词汇多样、句法多样,段落构造多样。以上是本题获得高分数的核心。*结束短文改错（共小题;每题1分,满分10分）假定英语课上教师规定同桌之间互换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的如下作文。文中共有1处语言错误,每句最多有两处，每处错误仅波

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