2014中考英语作文突破指导

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1、 1 听力 15 2 单项 -8 3 完形 10 4 阅读 -25 5 词语 短语 句式； 三查 ：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。 五、作文一般框架： 文章分 3段： （ 1）综述： 概括性强，最多 2句话引入主题； （ 2）正文 主要内容： 层次性强，一定要有过渡型 连接词。最多展开 3个方面，每个方面最多 2句话； （ 3）结尾： 紧扣主题， 2句话内结束，尽量升华。 满分作文标准： 第一档：（ 1513分） 完全 符合 题目 要求 ， 观点正确 , 要点 齐全， 立意 高 。 句式 多样 ，词汇 丰富 。语言 准确 ，语意 连贯 ， 表达 清楚 ， 结构 合理，具有 逻辑性 。 卷面书写干净，

2、 整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小 适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，大小 写正确。 最好能有一两个 亮点句 。 （主从，定从，表从，谚语） 六、如何列提纲： 例 1：利弊型作文 Microblog的利与弊 Para1: （综述） with the development of internet more and more popular Para2: （利） First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-free Para3: （弊） However, one coi

3、n has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelings Para4: （个人） As a student, make good use of it. 七、如何列提纲： 例 2：计划安排型作文 谈假期安排 Para1: （综述） graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday Para2: （正文） Firstly, study comes first. make p

4、reparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body. Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.) 八、常见的作文类型模板： 1 书信 Dear ., Im glad to r

5、eceive your letter - - - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy a书信开头常用语 I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? / How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/

6、years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to . b 书信结尾常用语 Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you. 二、口头通知常见写作模板： 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and stud

7、ents are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and dont be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope youll have a nice time here. Thats all. Thank yo

8、u. 八、常见的作文类型提纲模板： 2 图表、数字比例型 （提出讨论或调查的事实） Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表达出不同看法或观点） Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表达个人看法） As a student, I agree to 3 说明利弊型 Nowadays is becoming more an

9、d more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点 1 Besides, 优点 2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点 1 On the other hand, 缺点 2 In my opinion,个人观点 4 不同观点型 We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾问题 . Different people hold different ideas. So

10、me believe 正方观点 . First, 原因 1 Besides, 原因 2 While others dont agree. They think 反方观 点 . On the one hand, 原因 1 On the other hand, 原因 2 As for me,个人观点 5 解决问题型 Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法 1 Secondly, 方法 2 Finally, 方法 3 I am sure if

11、everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better. 九、常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the end then/next/after that when/while/as soon as/not until at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To ones surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately in

12、 a word/in all 议论文常用连接词 表示并列： either or; neither nor; both and; not only but also; 表示递进的： besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的： because; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that); 表示结果的： so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的： so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示对

13、比的： while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do; 议论文常用连接词 表示转折的： however; but; 表示举例的： for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say 表示总结的： in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的： be good/bad for

14、sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的： love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in; 议论文

15、常用连接词 表达个人想法的： I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他： in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way; 议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的： I think/believe; (as) for me; in

16、my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他： in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way; 十、作文万能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It

17、takes sb. +时间 +to do Sb. spend（某种人称时态） +时间 /钱 +on sth./ (in) doing sth. Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to v Its nice/kind of sb. to v. Its time for sb. to do sth. Its a waste of time to Its years/days since sb. +ved Its great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing Its a pity that

18、 Its an honor to 十、作文万能句式 Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making mistakes There be doing Great changes have taken place in sth is/are well worth v-ing. It seems/seemed that It seems (im)possible to v It is said that As the saying goes, and . are different in many ways. too + adj./adv. to do Ther

19、e are many differences between and 十、作文万能句式 I have made up my mind to I am sure that I am not sure whether/if I would rather . than It doesnt matter if Thank you for v-ing. If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better. 十一、作文万能短语 have/look for

20、a chance to do do outdoor activities be/get used to (doing) sth. learnfrom be proud of/ take pride in play an important/active part/role in agree with sb. to do sth. with the help of sb.=with ones help (反义： without ones help) be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth. pay attention to take good

21、 care of make friends with get on/along well with 十一、作文万能短语 wish you successful/success as time goes by graduate from looking back to the past three years, （用现在完成时态） pass the (final) exam stick to doing keep you mind on your goals make up ones mind to do sth. (on sth.) make a decision to do work har

22、d at English once in a while/ at times/ now and then from then on 十一、作文万能短语 in the future（将来） / in future（从今以后） increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary in fact/as a matter of fact in the beginning/ at first feel like giving up have trouble/difficulty in (doing) sth. have (no) time to do have

23、experience in (doing) sth. follow ones advice/suggestions master some basic skills be required to do ask sb. for help cant wait to do 十一、作文万能短语 be supposed to do encourage sb. to do deal/do with work out/solve the problems all sorts/kinds of at home and abroad one of be full of learn sth. by oneself

24、 come up with good ideas be surprised at sth.(to do sth.) in order to keep healthy/fit a good way to v 十一、作文万能短语 keep (on) trying worry about/ be worried about in ones spare/free time be kind/friendly to be strict with help others say thank you to have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time plenty of +C

25、/U worry about/be worried about ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for help be popular with share sth. with sb. know little/much about 十一、作文万能短语 do/try ones best to v be/feel sorry for help sb. (to) do sth./ with sth. in/during class before/after class teach sb. to do sth. * 词数 80左右，不少于

26、 70词，不多于 100词。 不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被 视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真 实信息。 四、 Language errors in writing 纠错 . be多余或缺少 Im enjoy studying English. It bad for our health. I enjoy studying English. It is bad for our health. 2. 时态错误 At that time, they always help me with my English. I had enjoyed studying English since I meet

27、 him. At that time, they always helped me with my English. I have enjoyed studying English since I met him. My favorite sport is run. I think do some sports is very important for us. My favorite sport is running. I think doing some sports is very important for us. 3. 非谓语动词错误 I like do sports. I wish

28、 take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up. I wish to take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up. I like doing sports. 4. 副词位置错误 I very thank her. I very like football. I thank her very much. I like football very much. 5. 代词错误 They are good for us body. I hope me also become a basketball play

29、er. They are good for our body. I hope I also become a basketball player. 6. 缺介词或介词错误 I thank him very much help me study English. He even came to my home for help me. I thank him very much for helping me study English. He even came to my home to help me. I like it because its exciting and good for

30、my healthy. I have ever gived up English. (单词错误 ) (动词 P.P.错误 ) I like it because its exciting and good for my health. I have ever given up English. 7. 其他错误 Its good for my health. Not only make me brave, but also make me become taller. If you want to keep fit, it important for you to take an hour to

31、 sports every day. Its good for my health. It not only makes me brave, but also makes me become taller. If you want to keep fit, it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day. （缺主语） （句型错误） Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. 1. I climed slowly and was ve

32、ry tried. 2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb. climbed tired unforgettable somebody 3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. Spelling（拼写） （ others) Friday 4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together. I cant for

33、get that day because 5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever. ! Capital letter（大小写） Punctuation（标点符号） 6. I will remembered that day forever. remember 7. I thought it is hungry. was 8. My grandmother always tidy up my room. tidies 9. How unforgettable this things is! thing Find out the

34、 mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. Tense（时态） Verb agreement (主谓一致 ) Word form (词形） 10. In my fathers help, I became more patient than before. With my fathers help, 11. To cut a long story to short, . To cut a long story short, 12. I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother. by bus

35、13. My mother told me dont give it up. told me not to give it up Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. Phrases(短语和固定搭配） 14. I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road. saw an old lady lying 16. We played snow in front of house. played with 15. I sat on a seat , list

36、ening music. listening to 17. Then a lady asked who had broken her window. We all were afraid. were all Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. Missing words（漏词） 18. We should do things by our own hands. with the house 19. It is tired work. tiring Words order（词序） Using wro

37、ng word（选词错误） 22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart. carefully 21. One Sunday morning, I went to Shihua by bus and sat beside me was a girl. I went to Shihua on a bus and there was a girl sitting beside me. Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. Chinese Engl

38、ish（中式英语） In my life, many things happened. 20. In my life have many things happened. During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl cried in a corner. We as

39、ked what happened on her . She said she cuondt found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.

40、 The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays. Check and correct this article. a lot of things happened. helping I were shopping crying happened to couldnt find help her find . They could also , so 1. 是否有大小写错误 (capital letters or lowercase letters) 2. 是否有拼写错误 (spelling mistakes) 3. 是否有标

41、点错误 (punctuation mistakes) 4.是否有语法错误 (grammar mistakes) 主谓是否一致 动词的时态 语态的使用是否正确 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 Common Errors in English writing 五、整洁性 1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。 2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密， 看不清，占不满格。 3 字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。 字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够， 不会得高分。 4 规范 三写 ： 大 小 写 ,拼 写 ,书 写 以 “ My English Teacher”为题写一 篇 100字左右的英语

42、短文，提示如下： 1 孙老师， 25岁， 1.65米 , 打扮入时。 2 关心热爱学生 。 3 教学方法生动有趣。 4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎； 六、实战训练 Pre-writing 1.审： 2.定 ： “My English Teacher” 为 题写一篇 100字作文 记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时 篇章结构：三段式 首段：个人简历 正文：教学特色 尾段：作者的评价 be fashionable love students, and care about the students be lively and interesting get on well with,be popula

43、r with Writing: 3.列 1.打扮入时 2.热爱学生，关心学生 3.生动有趣 4.相处融洽，深受欢迎 My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable. She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She

44、is very popular. We all love her and her teaching ! Writing 4.连： 连词成句，连句成篇 复写 Rewriting： 5、美 润色丰富要点； 6、改 查错改错 7、抄 修改无误后，认真规 范地誊写在规定的地方。 Writing My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable. She loves her students. She cares

45、 about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching ! 请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震 中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数 100词左右。内 容要点如下： 1 谭老师个人简况： 1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后， 2 在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃， 3 对学生要求严格， 4 深爱学生。 5 谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼 坍塌时刻，用身体保

46、护 4名学生英勇献身， 4名学生得救。 6 你的感受及愿望。 参考词语： 1. graduate from a university, 大学毕业 2. be strict with, 对 严格 3. the Wenchuan earthquake, 汶川地震 4. collapse,坍塌 5. deeds,事迹 三段式： 首段： 正文： 结尾： 谭老师的个人简介 谭老师的英雄事迹 作者的感受和愿望 列出 7个内容要点： 1）外表严肃； 2）对学生要求严格； 3） 深爱学生； 4）地震时在上课； 5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护 4名学生英勇献身； 6）感受； 7）愿望。 He looks seri

47、ous. Hes strict with his students. He loves his students deeply. He was giving lessons at that moment. When the teaching building callapsed, he protected four students with his body. I feel deeply moved. Ill learn from him. 连句成文： Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province. He graduated from Huna

48、n University. He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there for 27 years. He looked serious. He was very strict with his students. He loved them deeply. When the Wenchuan earthquake happened, he was giving a lesson. The school building collapsed. he prot

49、ected his four students with his body. The students were saved. Mr Tan lost his life. I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is an ordinary teacher and a great hero. I will learn from him. Homework Finish rewriting the composition after class， using the techniques learned in this lesson. Tan Qianqiu

50、 was born in 1957 in Hunan province. After graduating from Hunan University, he taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there for 27 years. Though he looked serious and was very strict with his students,he loved them deeply. When the Wenchuan earthquake hap

51、pened, he was giving a lesson. At the moment the school building collapsed, he protected his four students with his body. The students were saved, but Mr Tan lost his life. I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is not only an ordinary teacher, but also a great hero. I will learn from him. I will study harder and be a person like him when I grow up. 温馨提示 : 后期复习应以阅读为中心，坚持 “ 全面、系统、扎实、灵活 ” 的基 本指导思想，立足语言基础知识， 进行系统地梳理、归纳、总结和拓 展，突出语言应用，注重能力培养。 Thank you! Goodbye! A good passage= A right title + A healthy body + A nice conclusion/ end