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1、英语写作常见言语错误及其纠正战略 -韩 伟:hanwei6168126v请思索如下问题:v1、学生写作过程中主要存在哪些方面的困难？v2、他在指点学生写作时采用哪些指点战略？v3、提高学生英语写作程度最好的方法是什么？v一、了解错误类型，弄清出错缘由v1、主谓不一致。E.g.when a beggar have enough money,he can use them to buy what he want.v2、冠词误用。E.g.My father is doctor and he likes to play the basketball.v3、指代不明。E.g.The old man li

2、ves alone in a big house and he must look after myself.v4、词性误用。E.g.They without food and gave up at last.v5、运用赘词。E.g.Yesterday I returned back the books to the library.vHis performance approached to perfection.vBecause it was raining hard,so we didnt go to the park.vSam was the policeman(whom)I aske

3、d him for help at the station.v6、措词不当。vAfter having supper，the children began to speak stories.vHe was healthy like an ox.He lifted the heavy box easily.v7、修饰语错位。vThey had enough grain to be stored，so they wanted to find a house which would be enough big as their storehousev8、句子不完好。vWith the develop

4、ment of science and technology，we can know the world at home in many ways.For example,by TV,by radio,by internet and so on.v9、语句不衔接。vAt the age of seven,his grandfather died.vWhen he was seven years old,his grandfather died.vWater is very important and no it we cannot live.v10、套用母语。vHe is hard worki

5、ng.You will find him in his book room.v二、预防为主，将言语错误消灭在萌芽形状v1、学习冠词时，教师应协助学生明白：有些名词在汉语中能够是可数的，但在英语中却是不可数名词，e.g.paper,bread,news,advice等,又如,play后接体育工程时,名词前不用冠词;而接乐器称号时,名词前不用冠词.v2 学习相近类似的词汇.如与说有关的单词say,speak,tell,talk,或表示相遇遇到遭遇的单词和短语meet,come across,suffer,meet with,encounter,be confronted withv3 文化错误.比

6、如“您一路上辛劳了“you must be tired.“Im afraid you must have had a tiring journey.虽然语法上正确,但是在这种场所下英语的应付语通常是“Did you enjoy your trip?“Did you have a good trip?v三 针对错误选择相关练习v1 加强根底知识练习v 例如,为了让学生区分与家有关的单词family,house,home之间的区别可做如下练习.v他家要搬走了.(His family is going to move.)v他要搬新家了.(He is going to move to a new ho

7、use.)v他全家人都是教师.(His family are all teachers.)v她家被烧毁了,她的家人也去世了,她暂时住在旅馆.(Her house was burnt and her family were dead,so she made her home in a hotel for a time.)v请改错:Changes in Green Villagev The Green Village is far from the Sunshine City.There about eight thousand peoples.v In the past,there were v

8、ery poor.Most of people had a hard life.The communications were not very good.vIn 2019s,there were taken place a big change.There had appeared ring roads,factory and school.Many children had chance to receive a good education.The communication were very easy and quick.The people had a happy life.v再如

9、,为了分别where在不同上下文中的用法,同时了解从句知识,教师可以要求学生区分下面从句的类型.v He works where he was born.(引导地点状语从句)vHe works in the city where he was born.(where引导定语从句)v He told me where he was born.(where 引导宾语从句)vThis is where he was born.(where引导表语从句)vI have no idea where he was born.(where 引导同位语从句)v2 纠正干扰性错误练习v(1)我很喜欢这座美丽的城

10、市.v错:I very like this beautiful city.v正:I like this beautiful city very much.v(2)我这部手机曾经买了两周了.v错:I have bought the mobile phone for two weeks.v正:I have had the mobile phone for two weeks.v(3)任何人都做不好这件事.v错:Anyone cant do it well.v正:No one can do it well.v四、培育学生的自我纠错才干v1、鼓励学生正视言语错误,引导学生本人改错,树立写作自信心.v2

11、、采用归谬法,培育学生发现问题、纠正错误的才干。v3、采用争辩法、协助学生加深了解v4、建立错题档案，温故而知新v书面表达v 水对人类重要吗?人类在哪些方面需求水,而水资源的形状如何,我们能做些什么呢?结合本人的生活,写一篇80个词左右的短文.v学生作品:Water covers most part of the earth.But there is less water in some places.Some places are too dry.Many lakes,rivers,seas,even oceans are dirty now.We must decrease the pol

12、lution and make the water clean.That will make our lives safe.v Water is very important in our daily life.Human needs water to drink,to cook,to clean something,and etc.In fact,water makes up the largest part of the human body.So we have to save every drop of water to protect ourselves now.v六、学生作业分析v

13、 The factory waste water into the river and sea.Too many water pollution.water is important to us.But the waste water causes ill.Now many places have less water.v We must save the water.Open the tap.You must closed the tap.Water not only important to people,but also important to animals and plants.S

14、o we must save the water.v Many places fewer water.The soil is no water.and there is little river and sea.People lifes are very hard.v So we must protect water resources.v Water covers 75%of the earths surface.There are a lot of mountains,lakes,seas,oceans,rivers and so on.Water makes up the largest

15、 part of the human body.So it is very important to humans.We cant live without water.We often need water to drink,to cook and to clean.But the water we can use is not so much.Water pollution is a serious problem now.so we must keep the water clean and save every drop of water to protect ourselves.We

16、 must try our best to fight against water pollution and save water.v七、英语写作中词汇运用战略v1、词汇量与词汇等级的问题v“本酒店提供24小时热水效力并且游泳池可以免费运用。vWe offer hot water 24 hours every day and the swimming pool is free to use any time.vHot water is available 24 hours every day in our hotel and you can have free access to the s

17、wimming pool anytime you want.v2、五大太普通词汇v书面表达中的五个常见概念：“以为，“重要，“事情，“不同，“越来越多-I think vVery important，a thing，more and morevDifferentvE.g.首先,上中文学习班很重要,由于他可以有教师来辅导,还可以与同窗多进展练习.v普通表达:First,it is very important to takevA Chinese course because the teacher will teach you how to learn,and you can practice

18、with your classmates.v优秀表达:First of all,it is of great important to take a Chinese course,for you will be able to learn from your teacher and benefit a lot from the interactive practice with your partner.(be important;of importance,significant,vital,essential,critical,play a key role.)vE.g.随着2019年北京

19、奥运会的日益临近,越来越多的外国人开场对中国文化和中文感兴趣.v普通表达:As the 2019 Olympic is coming,more and more foreigners become more and more interested in Chinese culture and Chinese.v优秀表达:With the 2019 Olympic approaching,an increasing number of foreigners begin to show growing interest in Chinese culture as well as Chinese.(

20、more and more people;an increasing number of people;the number of is on the rise)vE.g.来自世界不同国家不同种族不同肤色的各国选手有着一样的梦想.v普通表达:Athletes of different colors and different races from different countries have the same dream.v优秀表达:Athletes of various colors and different races from all over the world share th

21、e same dream.(different;various,a vary from person to person)vE.g.我以为学唱中文歌是一种很好的方法,由于这种可以轻松愉快地学习词汇.v普通表达:I think singing Chinese songs is good way because it can make vocabulary study easy and enjoyable.v优秀表达:I hold the belief that singing Chinese songs is an effective way because by doing so vocabu

22、lary study will be easy and enjoyable.(think;argue,believe,hold,agree,assume,insist,as far as I am concerned,in my eyes,in my opinion)vE.g.环境维护成为人们越来越关注的事情.v普通表达:Environmental protection is becoming an important thing people pay special attention to.v优秀表达:Environmental protection is becoming a focus

23、 of peoples attention.v(thing;issue,problem,focus)v3.词汇的有效交换v(1)运用代词逃避反复vE.g.双人间的价钱比单人间要高.vThe price of the double room is quite higher than that of the single room.v(2)同义词、近义词、反义词交换。vA computer invention，tool，friend or partner，magic box，monitorv3用省略手段逃避反复vSome books are to be tasted，others areto be

24、 swallowed，and some few areto be chewed and digested.v八、做好英语书面表达题的五个关键环节v1、审题标题要求v1确定写作的人称。v2确定写作的动机，即要到达什么样的交际目的。v3确定要用什么时态v2、确定写作要点v写信包括：自我引见 信息来源 祝贺生日 赞赏任务人员 索要相片 适宜的结尾v3、选好动词，搭好句子的骨架v例如对任务人员的照顾表示赞赏，至少有如下说法：vA、Id like to express my thanks to you for your hard work.vB、I thank you very much because

25、 you look after them well.vC、you take good care of them so I gave my hearty thanks to you.vD I express my thanks to you for your excellent job.v4、有效衔接，使短文构造紧奏v so，but，and，thoughv5、仔细检查，保证卷面整洁v1、内容要点能否齐全？v2、词形变化能否正确？主谓能否一致？v3、词性与句子成分能否对应？v4、句子成分能否齐全？构造能否完好？v5、句与句之间能否衔接？v6、单词拼写、大小写能否正确？v7、标点符号能否正确？九、英

26、语写作才干培育九、英语写作才干培育 v一打好词汇量根底，理顺语法句型构造 v二 遵照由易到难，循序渐进的原那么 v三以范例引路，加强写作技巧的指点 v四多读、多背好文章、范文 v五注重课外练笔，在实际中不断提高 一打好词汇量根底，理顺语法句型构造一打好词汇量根底，理顺语法句型构造 v词汇是英语写作必不可少的根本要素，对于英语写作，词汇的学习是最根底的、最根本的、也是最重要的 v在进展词汇学习时,不仅要掌握它的正确发音和拼读,还要运用到句子中。学生有教材，最好是结合教材中的句子去学习单词。换句话说，字词句同时并举，效果会比单独学习词汇要好得多。这样一来就不会出现学了词汇还学不好英语的结果了。二遵

27、照由易到难，循序渐进的原那么二遵照由易到难，循序渐进的原那么 v英语写作才干并非一蹴而就的，它必需遵照先易后难，先短后长，先学会简单句、并列句，后学会用复合句表达，先写正确句子逐渐过渡到围绕一个人、一件事、一个观念去写有中心的文章；由不限定时间到限定时间，由限定时间长到限定时间短，由限定字数少到多等这样的原那么，脚踏实地，一环扣一环地进展，切不可为追求进度，而操之过急。Look at the pictures and describe the people.short,tall,fat,straight hair,curly hair,long hairin the pastnowKate i

28、s tall now.But she was very short in the past.Kate used to be short.参考词汇参考词汇:fat,heavy,medium height,medium build,curly hair,long/short hair,friendly,kind,beautiful,ugly三以范例引路，加强写作技巧的指点三以范例引路，加强写作技巧的指点 v需求特别指出的是教师在指点模拟范例写作时，要充分利用好英语课文，由于在每单元里，几乎都有一篇较长的文章，且体裁广泛、内容涉及面广，难易程度适中，非常适宜学生复述。可以让学生在复述课文的根底上,再

29、用笔头的方式加以落实,即把文章内容写下来。为了减轻学生作业负担,或全文或写一段,或一情节,或加以本人的观念和评论,有能够的话,再续写文章,发扬学生的想象，培育他们的发明力。当然，也可以采用改写、缩写、写中心思想等方式；或让学生做一些语句排序、填空练习或解答问题，再用适当的词句把这些答案重新组合起来就是一个有意义、有内容的故事。这些练习充分发掘了课文的潜力，既训练学生的写作，又稳定已学的课本知识，加深对课文的了解，并有助于学生用英语思想思索问题。四多读、多背好文章、范文四多读、多背好文章、范文 v“熟读唐诗三百首，不会写诗也会吟，英语文章也是如此。平常多读多背好文章、好句子、谚语、俗语,写书面表达时会起到画龙点睛的作用，而这些句子、文章往往就在我们身边。五注重课外练笔，在实际中不断提高五注重课外练笔，在实际中不断提高 v英语写作要突出实际,正如学习游泳一样,写作的才干是练出来的。课外练笔是课堂写作训练最有益的补充,由于课堂时间有限,仅靠课堂写作训练培育学生的写作才干是不够的。作文不是学出来的,而是写出来的。学生必需进展大量的写作练习才干掌握并且灵敏运用各种写作技艺,而且写作技艺只需在不断写作的过程中才干逐渐得到提高和完善。v经过对学生进展听、说、读、写等各个方面的指点，学生们渐渐掌握了学习的方法，对英语的学习兴趣就会越来越高，最终的英语运用程度就会到达理想的境界。