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1、为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能CET-4 作作 文文为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能CET-4作文作文评分原则评分原则CET-4 作文作文评分标准评分标准Range-finders(4WSH2)（样卷）（样卷）为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对学大纲规定的四级和六级

2、教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2.CET作文题采用总体评分（作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（出奖励分（Reward Scores），而不是按），而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。语言点的错误数目扣分。评分原则评分原则为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能3.3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题

3、目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。理解上的障碍。4.4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。中间的几种分数。Back为

4、深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能语言语言考量学生语言运用能力的重要因素考量学生语言运用能力的重要因素1.准确性准确性（accuracy）用词是否恰当、语用词是否恰当、语法结构是否准确法结构是否准确2.复杂性复杂性（range or complexity）四级词四级词汇（亮点词汇）汇（亮点词汇）,语言结构（以语言结构（以150150词的作文词的作文为例为例,9-10,9-10句，语言结构复杂；句，语言结构复杂；14-1514-15句，语句，语言结构简单。）言结构简单。）3.连贯性连贯性(coherence)过渡及衔接是否

5、流过渡及衔接是否流畅，思维是否连贯畅，思维是否连贯(有无常常修改有无常常修改)为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能13-1510-127-94-61-31411852评分标准评分标准为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能1414分分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。1111分分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语

6、言错误。但有少量语言错误。8 8分分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。其中有一些是严重错误。为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能0 0分分白卷，作文题目毫不相关，或白卷，作文题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，5 5分分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。2 2分分 条理不清，

7、思路紊乱，语言条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。数为严重错误。为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能累计字数累计字数(CET-4)(CET-4)110110-119119100100-1091099090-999980-80-898970-70-797960-60-696950-50-59594949扣扣 分分1 12 23 34 45 56 67 79 9字数不足扣分标准字数不足扣分标准注：注：1.1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束如题目中给出主题

8、句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。句，均不得计入所写字数。2.2.规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能作作文文分分1514 13 12 11109 987654321得得分分率率100 94 87 80 74676060 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7得分率（作文分相当于百分制的得分）得分率（作文分相当于百分制的得分）Back为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能为深

9、入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能The Structure of the Writinga brief descriptionthe importance of learning basic sk

10、illsconclusionthree parts为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能作文分析作文分析1414分分1111分分8 8分分5 5分分2分为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As we can see in the picture,a teacher shows multiplication table on the blackboard to the students.Nevertheless,one of the children

11、 doubts its significance and says,“No offence,but by the time were in the job market,wont that stuff be outdated?”From his perspective,it is no use studying basic skills because it wont help them find a job.比比 however 出现少出现少多数人用多数人用importance亮点词亮点词句型多变句型多变为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发

12、挥中小学图书室育人功能 However,from my personal point of view,we should attach great importance to learning basic skills.To begin with,basic skills are the solid foundation of our knowledge system.Without it,nothing can be achieved.Furthermore,although some basic skills may be outdated as time goes by,learning

13、 basic skills can benefit us a lot in improving our ways of thinking.词组使用既准确又漂亮连接词清晰自然双重否定句型短语使用准确为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能Only by getting basic knowledge can we explore more difficult tasks.Lastly,through the process of learning basic skills we can acquire certain qual

14、ities,such as carefulness,determination and perseverance.Only by doing sth.+倒装亮点词汇亮点词汇为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 From what has been discussed above,we may arrive at the conclusion that students should do their utmost to learn basic skills.两个短语使用很亮两个短语使用很亮和 in a word 比较漂漂

15、亮亮漂漂亮亮开头：描述简洁、清晰开头：描述简洁、清晰文中：内容充实，句式多样文中：内容充实，句式多样结尾：简洁有力结尾：简洁有力14分分作文作文为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As we can see in the picture,a teacher shows multiplication table on the blackboard to the students.Nevertheless,one of the children doubts its significance and says,“No of

16、fence,but by the time were in the job market,wont that stuff be outdated?”From his perspective,it is no use studying basic skills because it wont help them find a job.However,from my personal point of view,we should attach great importance to learning basic skills.To begin with,basic skills are the

17、solid foundation of our knowledge system.Without it,nothing can be achieved.Furthermore,although some basic skills may be outdated as time goes by,learning basic skills can benefit us a lot in improving our ways of thinking.Only by getting basic knowledge can we explore more difficult tasks.Lastly,t

18、hrough the process of learning basic skills we can acquire certain qualities,such as carefulness,determination and perseverance.From what has been discussed above,we may arrive at the conclusion that students should do their utmost to learn basic skills.13-15分为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神

19、,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As is shown in the picture,when a teacher introduces the multiplication table to the students,they doubt that it is useful when they are in the job market.Learning basic skills is questioned by more and more people.They complain that these skills are never used later in their lives.T

20、hus,its a waste of time learning basic skills,and instead,we should study more practical skills.As for me,I totally disagreed about this opinion.To begin with,we have to admit that its impossible for us to learn skills far beyond our capability.Whats more,learning basic skills enable us to study bet

21、ter.We cant hold the illusion that we are smart enough to ignore these skills.In fact,we use them anywhere in our lives.Last but not least,we all learn from zero,so its necessary to learn basic skills.In short,everyone should aware of the importance of learning basic skills.Only in this way can we a

22、cquire more skills and knowledge in an efficient way.段落多段落多松散松散为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As is shown in the picture,when a teacher introduces the multiplication table to the students,they doubt that it is useful when they are in the job market.doubt 后应该是whether 或 if概括图片

23、内容概括图片内容简洁简洁为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 Learning basic skills is questioned by more and more people.They complain that these skills are never used later in their lives.Thus,its a waste of time learning basic skills,and instead,we should study more practical skills.basic 和

24、 practical 不对应public opinion为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As for me,I totally disagreed about this opinion.To begin with,we have to admit that its impossible for us to learn skills far beyond our capability.Whats more,learning basic skills enable us to study better.We cant

25、hold the illusion that we are smart enough to ignore these skills.In fact,we use them anywhere in our lives.Last but not least,we all learn from zero,so its necessary to learn basic skills.时态和搭配不恰当搭配不当中式英语亮点词汇为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 In short,everyone should aware of t

26、he importance of learning basic skills.Only in this way can we acquire more skills and knowledge in an efficient way.should be aware of 亮点句型、词汇为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能11分作文（10-12分）1.总体上表达清楚，衔接比较自然。总体上表达清楚，衔接比较自然。3.有少量语言错误，并无大的语言错误。有少量语言错误，并无大的语言错误。2.语言清楚，但是平淡。语言清楚，但是平淡

27、。清楚平淡清楚平淡为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As the picture shown,a teacher is teaching students a multiplication table and some students are looking at the blackboard carefully.One of the students say,“No offense,but by the time were in the job market,wont that staff be outdated

28、?”Maybe some people believe that its important to learn basic skills.However,others dont think so.Personally,I think to learn basic skills is useful to everyone.First,there are basic skills may help you do other things easier,especially something that has relation with the basic skills.Second,if you

29、 have learn basic skills,you can find to do many work easier so that you will have more chance than others.Thirdly,you will learn more when you are learning basic skills and the basic skills may give you some inspire and find a new way to do your work.Just as say by the student,stuff will be outdate

30、d and nowadays new skills are created frequently.We should learn basic skills to catch the society and learn other skills.8分作文（7-9分）为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 As the picture shown,a teacher is teaching students a multiplication table and some students are looking at the

31、blackboard carefully.One of the students say,“No offense,but by the time were in the job market,wont that staff be outdated?”Maybe some people believe that its important to learn basic skills.However,others dont think so.不注意语态两种不同的看法时态为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 Personall

32、y,I think to learn basic skills is useful to everyone.First,there are basic skills may help you do other things easier,especially something that has relation with the basic skills.Second,if you have learn basic skills,you can find to do many work easier so that you will have more chance than others.

33、Thirdly,you will learn more when you are learning basic skills and the basic skills may give you some inspire and find a new way to do your work.连动汉语思维严重语言错误词性混用inspirationhave learned为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 Just as say by the student,stuff will be outdated and nowada

34、ys new skills are created frequently.We should learn basic skills to catch the society and learn other skills.搭配不当语言表达错误 总体结构比较清楚。有一些语言错误，而且均为严重错误。隔三差五有错，三分之二的句子准确。8分（7-9分）马马虎虎马马虎虎为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 There is a picture of a teacher was teaching Multiplication Tabl

35、e for her students The teachers teaching way were lively and active.However,the students were confused,because they take this basic skills is unmeaning and unused.In modern job market,we merely often take effectively advantage of this basic skills that learn from school.But it is affected our ways w

36、hen we work.I think,the important role of learning basic skills is familared with the air that we breathed the wind,and the food we eated it.So we must high speedly realized that learning well the basic skills is necessary and important.If we dont study the Multiplication Table,we will dont know mat

37、hs,if we unknown math,we will not be able to scale.It is a bad circle.“No offense,but by the time were in the job market,wont that stuff be outdated”was wrong.The knowledge is wealthy.We must have confident that as long as we learn good,we must look for a good job in the future.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想

38、和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 There is a picture of a teacher was teaching Multiplication Table for her students.The teachers teaching way were lively and active.However,the students were confused,because they take this basic skills is unmeaning and unused.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会

39、精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 In modern job market,we merely often take effectively advantage of this basic skills that learn from school.But it is affected our ways when we work.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 I think,the important role of learning basic skills is familared with the air

40、 that we breathed the wind,and the food we eated it.So we must high speedly realized that learning well the basic skills is necessary and important.If we dont study the Multiplication Table,we will dont know maths,if we unknown math,we will not be able to scale.It is a bad circle.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义

41、思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 “No offense,but by the time were in the job market,wont that stuff be outdated”was wrong.The knowledge is wealthy.We must have confident that as long as we learn good,we must look for a good job in the future.confidenceKnowledge is wealth.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的

42、十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能内容混乱，思路不清晰，陈述不到位。内容混乱，思路不清晰，陈述不到位。选词含混不清，无词性、时态区分。选词含混不清，无词性、时态区分。错误频出，三分之二的句子错误。错误频出，三分之二的句子错误。糊里糊涂糊里糊涂5 5分作文分作文（4-64-6分）分）为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 In this picture,we can see there is a teacher teached students multiplication table,but t

43、he students didnt think it offense in the job market.Advance with the society more and more controversial issues have brought,one of which is teaching,just like the picture,with the developenting society,our teaching must developenting as well,now in the job market,the company request more and more,

44、but our school and college teach too simple.It due to the student cant find the job in the job market,and they say no offense but by the time were in the job market,wont that staff be outdated?Now we must to know student want,that we can make them useful in the job market,then it can solve the issue

45、.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 In this picture,we can see there is a teacher teached students multiplication table,but the students didnt think it offense in the job market.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 Advance with the society more and more contro

46、versial issues have brought,one of which is teaching,just like the picture,with the developenting society,our teaching must developenting as well,now in the job market,the company request more and more,but our school and college teach too simple.It due to the student cant find the job in the job mar

47、ket,and they say no offense but by the time were in the job market,wont that staff be outdated?为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能 Now we must to know student want,that we can make them useful in the job market,then it can solve the issue.为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,

48、充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能思路紊乱，条理不清。思路紊乱，条理不清。语言支离破碎，没有完整的句子。语言支离破碎，没有完整的句子。一塌糊涂一塌糊涂2分作文（1-3分）基本词汇不扎实，组织语言能力太差。基本词汇不扎实，组织语言能力太差。为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能高分作文亮点句型高分作文亮点句型1.It is that.（强调句）（强调句）2.Provided that (条件句条件句)3.Convenient as technology is,basic skills(让步状语从句让步状语从句)4.Only by

49、learning the basic skills well,can we.(倒装句倒装句)5.So.is.that(倒装句倒装句)为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能高分作文亮点词语高分作文亮点词语desert（Basic skills are deserted.）be supposed toalter attitudegive vote toapprove ofcultivate ones view of beautybuild ones mind为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教

50、育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能strengthen ones abilityput forwardcome up withcompetitive societyattach importance totakeinto considerationin terms of为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能低分作文常见的问题低分作文常见的问题题目题目句段句段结构结构语言语言不理解题不理解题目的要求目的要求（单词不（单词不熟）熟）;偏离偏离主题主题上下句及上下句及段落衔接段落衔接缺乏逻辑缺乏逻辑性性结构不完结构不完整，缺少整，缺少部分内容部分内容时态不一时态不一致；连动致；连动结构多；结构多；词性不分；词性不分；动词原形动词原形做主语做主语为深入学习习近平新时代中国特色社会主义思想和党的十九大精神,贯彻全国教育大会精神,充分发挥中小学图书室育人功能