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1、9B月考英语作文月考英语作文讲评讲评目标分：12分 网上购物网上购物（Shopping on the Internet）成为）成为一种时尚的购一种时尚的购物方式，受到物方式，受到许多青少年的许多青少年的青睐，请你结青睐，请你结合下面的提示，合下面的提示，谈谈网上购物谈谈网上购物的利与弊。的利与弊。网购网购 Advantages 1.全天营业全天营业2.节省时间节省时间3.商品（商品（goods）更便宜）更便宜 Disadvantages 1.只能看图片只能看图片2.容易被骗（容易被骗（be cheated）Your opinion(自由发挥自由发挥)文体文体:_时态时态:_主题：主题：_人称人

2、称:_要点要点（要注意看已给出的英文部分，不要重复（要注意看已给出的英文部分，不要重复要点。）要点。）结构结构:_题目关键词句题目关键词句 网上购物网上购物（Shopping in the Internet）成为一种时尚成为一种时尚的购物方式，的购物方式，受到许多青少受到许多青少年的青睐，年的青睐，请你结合下面的提请你结合下面的提示，谈谈示，谈谈 网上购物的利与弊。网上购物的利与弊。网购网购 Advantages 1.全天营业全天营业2.节省时间节省时间3.商品（商品（goods）更便）更便宜宜 Disadvantages 1.只能看图片只能看图片2.容易被骗（容易被骗（be cheated）

3、Your opinion(自由发挥自由发挥)主题主题观点观点1观点观点2观点观点3论据论据论据论据此要点已给出，此要点已给出，勿重复！勿重复！文体文体:_时态时态:_主题：主题：_人称人称:_要点要点(几个几个)：_结构结构:题目关键词句题目关键词句议论文议论文一般现在时一般现在时论题：网上购物的利与弊论题：网上购物的利与弊其他人的观点：第三人称；自己观点：第一人称其他人的观点：第三人称；自己观点：第一人称主题：主题：1；观点：；观点：3；论据：；论据：5-6(分四段分四段)第一段：主题；第一段：主题；第二段：第二段：advantages;第三段：第三段：disadvantages;第四段：第

4、四段：Your view The shops online are open 24 hours a day.We can save a lot of time.The goods online are cheaper.We can only see the pictures of the goods.We can be cheated easily.全天营业全天营业are open 24 hours a day.Step2、List out(列列)Tip1 Tip1 根据要点写出关键词或词组。根据要点写出关键词或词组。Tip2Tip2补上句子缺少的成分。补上句子缺少的成分。Tip3Tip3根据

5、简单句结构合并词汇。根据简单句结构合并词汇。主主 +谓谓+宾宾 +地状地状 +时状时状用用英语简单句英语简单句列出文章的列出文章的要点要点节省时间节省时间can save a lot of time商品更便宜商品更便宜the goods are cheaper只能看到图片只能看到图片can only see the pictures容易被骗容易被骗can be cheated easily Nowadays,shopping on the Internet is quite popular in our daily life._ _ _ _ 37 words5-6加：加：1.加观点加观点 2.

6、加拓展（每个论据后面拓展加拓展（每个论据后面拓展1个句子）个句子）The shops online are open 24 hours a day.We can save a lot of time.The goods online are cheaper.We can only see the pictures of the goods.We can be cheated easily.Step3 Add（加）（加）加上主题和观点加上主题和观点主题：网上购物的利与弊。主题：网上购物的利与弊。There are both advantages and disadvantages to shop

7、 online.观点一：网购有好处。观点一：网购有好处。It has many advantages to shop on the Internet.观点二：网购有缺点。观点二：网购有缺点。Shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.自己的见解：自己的见解：In my opinion,its interesting to shop on the Internet,but we should learn much about the goods before we decide to buy it.Step3 Add（加）（加）在每个在

8、每个要点要点后加上后加上匹配匹配的的补充补充！The shops online are open 24 hours a day.We can save a lot of time.The goods online are cheaper.We can only see the pictures of the goods.We can be cheated easily.The shops online are open 24 hours a day.we can buy things at any time.我们在任何时候都可以买东西。我们在任何时候都可以买东西。because？/So?how

9、？what？We can save a lot of time.我们不用逐间店去挑选商品。我们不用逐间店去挑选商品。we dont have to choose goods from one shop to another.because？/So?how？what？The goods on line are cheaper.例如，一件裙子，商店买例如，一件裙子，商店买50元，网上也许元，网上也许30元就可以买到。元就可以买到。For example,we should pay 50 yuan for a skirt,but it may cost only 30 on the Internet

10、.We can only see the pictures of the goods.我们不能确定商品好不好。我们不能确定商品好不好。我们很容易被骗。我们很容易被骗。we are not sure whether they are good or not.We can be cheated easily.because？/So?how？what？Nowadays,shopping on the Internet is quite popular in our daily life.12-13There are both advantages and disadvantages to shop

11、on line.It has many advantages to shop on the Internet.The shops on line are open 24 hours a day，we can buythings at any time.We can save a lot of time.wedont have to choose goods from one shop to another.The goods on line are cheaper.pay 50 yuan for a skirt,but it may cost only 30 on the Internet.w

12、e shouldShopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.We can only see the pictures of the goods，sure whether they are good or not.we are notWe can be cheated easily.In my opinion,its interesting to shop on the Internet,we should learn much about the goods before we decide to buy it.Nowadays,sh

13、opping on the Internet is quite popular in our daily life.There are both advantages and disadvantages to shop on line.It has many advantages to shop on the Internet.The shops online are open 24 hours a day,we can buy things at any time.we can save a lot of time,we dont have to choose goods from one

14、shop to another.the goods online are cheaper.For example,we should pay 50 yuan for a skirt,but it may cost only 30 on the Internet.Shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.We can only see the pictures of the goods,we are not sure whether they are good or not.we can be cheated easily.In my

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