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1、对比论点作文框架第一篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1、 有人做好事期望得到回报；2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；3、 我的观点。 A great many people presume upon a re

2、ward when doing a good deed. First and foremost, there is a natural tendency to equate doing good deeds with a certain amount of reward, and reward with a certain amount of money. What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, one of the major means of earning mon

3、ey is getting reward by doing good deeds.（缺乏背景描述句） On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing a good deed should be based on peoples personal consciousness. Hence, doing a good deed is fulfilling itself and reward is of minimal significance. Numerous examples can be given, but th

4、is will suffice. Mr. Lei Feng lived a simple life dedicated to doing good deeds without expecting any reward and helping people from all walks of life, yet he was remembered as one of the most successful hero of our time. Generally speaking, it is my view that we should not expect a reward when doin

5、g a good deed. Since we do this for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, not for the purpose of reward.（缺乏升华主题句, It is high time that）框架第二篇Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 15

6、0 words following the outline given below.1有人认为名字很重要2也有人认为无关紧要，3我认为Recently, it is universally acknowledged that due attention has to be paid to the importance of name. To begin with, a large number of people assert that ones name can exert profound influence on the success of a person or institutio

7、n. In addition, some even maintain that the mental health and physical fitness of a person will be influenced or even determined by his or her name.（缺乏背景描述句）On the contrary, it is the view of a great many people that ones name is of little significance. They can think of no better illustration than

8、the following ones. “Qiu”， which means “hill”， is the name of Confucius, the greatest thinker, philosopher and educator throughout history. Likewise, another case in point is Lao Zi, the founder of philosophical and religious Taoism, whose name is “er”， which means “the ear”. These examples effectiv

9、ely clarify that ones future is only determined by his striving spirit, talent or intelligence rather than some mysterious and superstitious factors such as certain names or lucky numbers. As for me, significance should be attached to intelligence, persistence and diligence instead of ones name. Giv

10、en all the above arguments, it is high time that we put an end to this undesirable phenomenon.(适用于一方有明显的错误)对比论点框架结构第一段：1. 背景描述句 （从句套从句）2. A论点提出句 （be in favor of / prefer to ）3. A论据提出句（一） （与论点因果关系）4. A论据提出句（二） （并列或递进关系）第二段：5. 承上启下句+B论点提出句（让步状语从句倒装）6. B论据提出句（一） （与论点因果关系）7. B论据提出句（一） （并列或递进关系）第三段：8. 自身

11、论点提出句（As far as I am concerned, ）9. 自身论点支持句（与论点因果关系）10. 总结句（Given all the above arguments,）赏析第三篇Directions: For this part you are allowed30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on University Ranking. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 目前高校排名相当盛行2. 对这种

12、做法人们看法不一3. 我认为There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for some individuals or organizations to rank universities. To this phenomenon peoples attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They claim that ranking universities can help high school graduates or their

13、parents to make a sound choice when enrolling in a university or college. Besides, this practice can help promote the level of higher education as a whole in that many universities will exert efforts to elevate their position.Others, however, hold the opposite view. They point out that the result of

14、 ranking is not always credible, for many individuals or institutions do it merely for the purpose of colleting money. Furthermore, some universities overemphasize the result of ranking and waste large amounts of resources.We should not go to extremes. On the one hand, it must be admitted that ranki

15、ng is an effective means to encourage universities or colleges to compete with each other and improve their work. On the other hand, it should not be conducted and used in the wrong way. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second view. What mentioned above shows that we put an end to universi

16、ty ranking.（适用于两方没有明显的对错）仿写第四篇Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 家长送学生参加各种艺术班2. 有人支持，有人反对3. 作为大学生，我的观点There is a growing tendency

17、 nowadays for parents to send their children to register and attend a great variety of arts courses, such as dancing, calligraphy and musical instruments training, etc. The attitudes of people towards this phenomenon vary from person to person. Some people maintain that these extra curriculums are o

18、f great necessity and benefits to students. According to a recent survey on pre-school intelligence level, the respondents who take part in out-class courses tend to perform better than those who havent. Moreover, the former can have an all-round development by acquiring knowledge and skills which a

19、re not taught in their schools. On the contrary, others argue that these courses would bring about heavy burdens to students and thus oppose to this practice. They worry about that students might not have adequate time to take rest and reflect on what they have learned in school.（缺乏第二条论据）As a univer

20、sity student, I have ever participated in some arts courses, such as singing, painting classes and dancing, which they proved to be helpful for my hobby development. Therefore, taking some extra curriculum courses properly is meaningful to students development in the long-term.模板总结举例：第一段：1. , which

21、is a hot point that we are talking about recently. / There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend forTo this phenomenon peoples attitudes differ sharply.2. Some people take it for granted that3. Since/ for/ the reason is that They can think of no better illustration than the fo

22、llowing ones.4. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more第二段：5. Compared with , has also its advantages. / 让步状语从句倒装6. Since/ for/ the reason is that Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice.7. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more第三段：8. As far as I am c

23、oncerned, / As to me, I prefer to the opinion 9. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more（Actually I have reasons for it.）10. Given all the above arguments, it is high time that 单一论点文章现象解释型（框架第一篇）Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How

24、 to improve students mental health？You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要2、 因此，学校可以.3、 我们自己应当.Students mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popular

25、ity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains. Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as

26、 colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. Whats more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required

27、to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness

28、 by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.（通用结尾句）框架第二篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t

29、o write a short essay entitled Attention Should Be Given to Chinese. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1. 如今很多学生不重视中文学习2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果3. 我认为In recent years, the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among the students. In contrast, more and more students attach

30、 great importance to foreign languages since the economic globalization. In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.There are a number of factors which can be attributed to this situation. One of the most common factors is that the major

31、ity of people hold a view that English is the dominant language in the world and we should give priority to it. Moreover, although Chinese is a compulsory course in higher education, most professors and students havent given due attitude to it as fewer courses and credits are distributed to Chinese

32、and fewer students attend the class or choose it as their major. And the fundamental factor is that most students take it for granted that Chinese is their mother tongue and they have already mastered it.As far as I am concerned, this ignorance may be the very first step to furthermore overlook Chin

33、ese cultures and in order to avoid this consequence- to the students, they should read more Chinese articles not only to gain knowledge but also to broaden their scope; to the schools and colleges, they should alter the traditional teaching approaches to interest more students to study Chinese such

34、as speeches and dramas. To live, to learn, our Chinese still need to be promoted.单一论点之现象解释型框架结构第一段：1. 背景描述句 （从句套从句）2. 现象提出句 （细节提出句）第二段：3. 现象总述句4. 现象或原因（一） 5. 现象或原因（二） 6. 现象或原因（三） （并列或递进关系）第三段：7. 承上启下句+自身对现象看法8. 原因（一）（与自身看法属于因果关系）9. 原因（二）（并列或递进关系） 10. 总结句赏析第三篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed

35、 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Will E-books replace traditional books? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1、 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多2、 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是3、 我的看法Recent decades have seen the rapid development of E-books, there has been an increasing controve

36、rsy over the question of whether E-books will replace traditional books or not. Many people hold the idea that it will not take long for E-books to replace traditional books because E-books have quite a few advantages over traditional ones. The following reasons can account for their point of view.

37、First, E-books are more accessible to readers, because the readers just need to log onto the internet and read online. Second, thanks to the advanced technology, the cost of E-books is much lower, so it takes readers far less money to buy E-books. Last but not the least, reading E-books has develope

38、d into part of our daily life, which is particularly appealing to young users, who are the body part of the users of electronic products. As far as Im concerned, it is not likely for E-books to replace traditional books for lots of reasons. For example, long time of reading E-books will do more harm

39、 to our eyes, and readers will find themselves more accessible to printed materials because computers and the internet havent yet been popularized to every corner of our life. (缺总结句)For example, not only will long time of reading E-books do more to our eyes, but also readers will find themselves mor

40、e accessible to printed materials because computers and the internet havent yet been popularized to every corner of our life. what mentioned above is that printed books will ever play an important role in our daily life.仿写第四篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay

41、 entitled Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用2)分析产生该现象的原因3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of

42、college students have applied for credit cards and begun to consume by them.（少承上启下句） In this essay, I will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.（范文2中的万能句）The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards on campus. Firstly, a cr

43、edit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have not much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many ba

44、nks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students have applied for credit cards.As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit card

45、s among college students.（凑字数专用） Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and even some of them owe a big credit card debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can colle

46、ge students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.模板总结举例：第一段：1. , which is a hot point that we are talking about recently. / Recent decades have seen the rapid development of, there has been an increasing controversy over the question of whether or not.2. Indeed / In contrast In this essay, I

47、will discuss the factors and consequences of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.第二段：3. The following reasons can account for their point of view.4. To begin with/ To start with/ Above all5. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more 6. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermor

48、e/ what is more第三段：7. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that As far as I am concerned, 8. For example/ For instance 9. In addition/ beside/ moreover/ furthermore/ what is more/ not only but also10. Only in this way can / what mentioned above is that问题解决型（框架第一篇）Direc

49、tion: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重2.浪费的危害3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can eas

50、ily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can.（缺乏并列关系）Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which i

51、s harmful to their development. If they dont learn to support themselves, they will be useless people when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. T

52、here are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help. As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. Whats more, Im determined to call on more schoolmat

53、es to fight against waste. Finally, I will pay all my efforts to save money which can help poor students solve their financial problems. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.框架第二篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say no

54、to pirated products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1、目前盗版现象比较严重2、造成这种现象的原因及危害3、我们应该怎么做。At present, piracy is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China, Any product, like tape, CD and hi-tech device can be copied, not to mention book. Shortly after a newly-publ

55、ished book hits the shelves, people will unsurprisingly find its pirated counterparts in the stores. It has been widely believed that piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers, inventors and authors in many ways. For one thing, pirated products often cost much less than the original one

56、s, so they enjoy unbeatable advantage in price in spite of their relatively poor quality. the original ones, on the contrary, sell poorly. As far as pirated books are concerned, they do great harm to the authors reputation due to their misprints. For another, pirated products may also have negative

57、impacts on customers since those legitimate producers enthusiasm may be greatly hurt by the fact that some customers are more like to purchase pirated products. In my opinion, its high time that the government called on everyone to start the battle against piracy. Besides, as customers, we should de

58、velop our consciousness to resist pirated products. And law should be strictly carried out to ban piracy from spreading any further. Only in this way can we put an end to piracy and create a healthy environment for both customers and producers. 单一论点之问题解决型框架结构第一段：1. 背景描述句 （从句套从句）2. 问题提出句 （进一步明确问题所在，排

59、比）第二段：3. 问题原因总述句4. 问题产生原因（一） 5. 问题产生原因（二） 6. 问题产生原因（三） （并列或递进关系）第三段：7. 承上启下句8. 解决方法（一）9. 解决方法（二）（并列或递进关系）10. 解决方法（三）（并列或递进关系）11. 总结句（Only in this way can the phenomenon ofbe solved as soon as possible）赏析第三篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Impor

60、tance of Reading Classics. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要2现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是3我们大学生应该怎么做 It is widely acknowledged that reading classics is both important and beneficial to the character development and personal growth of the young people. As f

61、or me, nothing can bring more joy and happiness than reading those masterpieces created by great figures like Confucius and Cao Xueqin. I believe works like The Dream in the Red Chamber and The Legend of Three Kingdoms can drastically elevate ones aesthetic taste and deepen the understanding of the

62、glorious history of Chinese culture. The modern society is full of temptations. The following reasons can account for it. For one thing, compared with TV soap operas, sport events, and video games, classical literary works are old fashioned and time consuming. For another, in bookstores, “Fast-food”

63、 reading materials are replacing classics, and young writers with sensational and “cool” remarks win the support of a large number of fans. We college students should be fully aware of the important role the classics play in broadening ones vision. Therefore, we should start reading and studying the

64、 treasuries our ancestors center and absorbing the essence of those classical works. Beside, we should also advocate to the public the importance of classics so that an increasing number of general people can enjoy the pleasure of reading. (缺乏总结句) Only in this way can the phenomenon of ignorance of reading classic be solved as soon as possible.仿写第四篇Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题