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1、一 不一致（Disagreements） 不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等,When one have money ,he can do what he want to . Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) . An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize. An important thing for the student t

2、o remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize. Those who wish to take linguistics are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper. Those who wish to take linguistics are expected to sign their names on this sheet of paper.,Students should learn to analyze and solve problems

3、independently. Dont rely on your teachers help. Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. They should not rely on your teachers help. She reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done. She reviewed the lesson taught last week an

4、d did all the exercises assigned by the teacher. He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious. He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly hurt. The peasants cut the wheat, and it is dried. The peasants cut the wheat, and they dry it .,Her parents thought she was just venting(泄气)

5、 her fury, so her words were not paid attention to. Her parents thought she was just venting her fury, so they did not pay attention to her words. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable. It is generally bel

6、ieved that ones action is more important that what one says. It is generally believed that ones action is more important than ones words.,The young man is honest and hard working, and is a very reliable worker. The young man is an honest, hardworking and reliable worker. the young man is honest, har

7、dworking and reliable.,二 修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解,The idea he mentioned at first sounded good. The idea he first mentioned sounded good. The idea he mentioned sounded good at first. I read an interesting story in a magazine about

8、sportsman. I read in a magazine an interesting story about sportsman. In a magazine I read an interesting story about sportsman.,She bought several picture books and put them into her bag, which she intended to give to her children. She bought several picture books for her children and put them into

9、 her bag. She put into her bag the picture books she had bought for her children. He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed. He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody belie

10、ved.,三 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生,There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on . There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper. Born in S

11、ichuan province, he later became a famous writer. Born in Sichuan province, educated in Peking University, worded in china daily, he later became a famous writer.,Betty is a kind-hearted girl; she will be successful in anything she tries. As she has a strong will and confidence in herself, she may b

12、e successful in anything she tries. The more I read, the more hungry I feel. The more I read, the more I want to read. The more I read, the hungrier I feel for knowledge. Dream of the Red Mansions is the best-known novel. Dream of the Red Mansions is one of the best-known classical Chinese novels. O

13、f all the Chinese novels written before the 20th century Dream of the Red Mansions is perhaps the most popular.,He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city, and he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes. He visited all the famous historical monument

14、s of this ancient city. Meanwhile, he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes. My niece is no good at mathematics and seldom comes to see me, and she got married last week. My niece, who is no good at mathematics and seldom comes to see me, got married last week.,This mount

15、ain is six thousand feet high, and it is only four miles from the small airport, and the field is not a very large one, but no plane has ever crashed on it. Although this mountain is six thousand feet high and only four miles from the small airport, no plane has ever crashed on it.,四 悬垂修饰语（Dangling

16、Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. When I was ten, my grandfather died. Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach. Looking out of the window, she/he can see the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach. Outsid

17、e the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach. To get ready for the trip, all the things she needed were put into a suitcase. To get ready for the trip, she put all the things she needed into a suitcase.,On entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!” W

18、hen the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!” On entering the classroom, the teacher was greeted by the students, who stood up and said, “Good morning!”,以下情况例外： Judging by what the newspapers have said, his latest play is quite successful. (good) To be frank,

19、 he is not the right man for this important job. (good) We have to study many courses: Chinese, English, maths, physics, chemistry, history, geography, just to name a few. (good),五 指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns) 指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。 Im going to the lecture on modern Chinese d

20、rama, because he is a dramatist I like. Im going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because the speaker is a dramatist I like. Mrs. Green said to her sister that she had done the right thing. Mrs. Green said to her sister, “I have done the right thing.” Mrs. Green said to her sister that she he

21、rself had done the firth thing.,六、累赘(Redundancy) 言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。 It was blue in color. It was small in size. Mary is a quiet and careful woman. He returned in the early part of the month of August. He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave

22、 were not convincing. He gave many reasons for the failure, but none of them was convincing.,In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible. In my opinion, your plan is feasible. I think your plan is feasible. This machine was jointly designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his youn

23、ger colleagues. This machine was jointly designed by the old engineer and some of his younger colleagues. This machine was designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his younger colleagues.,There are trees on all sides of the house, and the trees hide the house. People can hardly see

24、 the house from the outside. Surrounded by trees, the house can hardly be seen from the outside. The house, hidden behind trees, can hardly be seen from the outside. Li Qing, who was a first-year student of the college, would go to a park near her school every day in the morning. She would bring a s

25、mall recorder with her. In the park she would find a quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories. Every morning, Li Qing, a first-year student of the college, would go to a nearby park, bringing a small recorder with her. There she would listen to a tape of English stories in a quiet corner

26、.,七 不间断句子(Run-on Sentences),I set out for the biggest bookstore in town, at the school gate I saw a girl of my class, she was going there, too, we decided to go together, we walked, the bookstore was not far away.(把所有逗号改为句号),八. 句子结构完整 英语句子必须是主谓（宾）齐全。 Because he hadnt finished his assignment, so he c

27、ontinued working in the classroom. Because he hadnt finished his assignment, he continued working in the classroom.,How to operate this computer? Have lost my key. The old man returning home after eight years absence to find that all the neighbors he had known were no longer there. The old man retur

28、ned home after eight years absence to find that all the neighbors he had known were no longer there. Mark Twain whose experience as a sailor on the Mississippi provided him with abundant material for the novels he was to write. Mark Twains experience as a sailor on the Mississippi provided him with abundant material for the novels he was to write.,