2021-2021高考英语书面表达真题及满分范文汇总

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1、全国 I 卷题目要求假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1. 写信目的： 2. 个人优势： 3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。优秀满分范文Dear Sir/Madam,I m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese pai

2、nting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What s more, years of being monitor

3、 makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I

4、d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li Hua写作解析这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体 现交际性。首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用 First of all ，What s more, The mostimportant factor is that等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。最后需要使用求职信的常

5、用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。全国 II 卷题目要求假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。1注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。满分优秀范文Dear Chris,How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.As for the

6、 detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is

7、that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.So excited am I that I can t wait to join in it.

8、How about you? Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua写作指导本题要求：作为排球队队长李华，给队友 Chris 写一封邮件告知他近期球队将参加比赛，主要的要点包含三 项，分别是：比赛信息、赛前准备、表达期待。字数要求 100 左右，考生应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。作文的难度不大，可以灵活运用学过的高级短语和句型，例如定语从句；名词性从句；非谓语动词；倒装句 等等。另外要注意衔接词汇的使用以使行文连贯；高级词汇的使用以提升作品的档次。全国 III 卷题目要求假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友 Allen 参加

9、，内容包括：1. 时间； 2. 活动安排； 3. 欢迎他表演节目。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。优秀满分范文Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I m writing to invite you to join us.2The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will

10、deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to showup on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua写作指导今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时

11、间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如： How is everything going? a music festival ，in the school hall ， The opening ceremony 等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。点评本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, whichwill add color and fun to our festival. 定语从句。提升了文章档次。北京卷题目要求第一节 (15 分 )假设

12、你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问 相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括 :1. 交通出行； 2. 必备衣物。注意 :1. 词数不少于 50 ；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。优秀满分范文Dear Jim,I m pleased that you re coming to tour in China.I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you c

13、an go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to your arrival. 3Yours,Li Hua写作指导红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友 Jim 打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要 求给他回复邮件，内容包括 : 1

14、. 交通出行； 2. 必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和 第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写： 首先表达欢迎 Jim 来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物； 最后盼望朋友的到来。 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。点评本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。 that you re coming to tour in China. 和 that you begin from Beijing, and I ll show you around. 是宾语从句。 where you can stay for a w

15、eek. 是非限制 性定语从句。题目要求第二节 (20 分 )假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据 以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：词数不少于 60 。提示词：西瓜 watermelon优秀满分范文4Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most bea

16、utiful ”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my

17、parents. And they were very proud ofme.写作指导假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根 据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布 活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文 可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过 去时。点评本文内容完整， 语言表述通顺。 使用了连接词、 衔接词， 使文章自然、 流畅。文章使用了宾语从句 how h

18、ardit was to work in the fields under a hot sun.还使用了 At the class meeting, When I got home, On thefarm, While working, When I came back home题目要求等过渡词。浙江卷第一节应用文写作 ( 满分 15 分 )假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友 Alex 即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾 Alex 对你的帮助； 3. 临别祝愿。注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。满分优秀范文Dear

19、 Alex,Learning that you re leaving for the United States soon, I m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.Honestly speaking, it s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress

20、in English. It s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to co

21、nvey how grateful I am.5Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.Yours,Li Hua写作指导1. 审题立意：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2. 谋篇布局：书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾 Alex 对你的帮助；最 后一段表达祝愿。3. 关键词和句子： 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有： leaving for the United States soon ，express my he

22、artfelt gratitude ，unbelievable progress ，cheer me up 。通 过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。题目要求第二节读后续写 ( 满分 25 分 )阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happyand Confident Kids, says, “We ve gone to the opposite extr

23、eme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict. ” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they re building their children s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that s insincere, make kids afraid to try ne

24、w things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them.Still, don t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they re not good enough or that you don t care and, as a

25、result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important thanthe quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as o ften as your child does something t

26、hat deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our children s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, ” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it s the process not the

27、end product that matters. ”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising theeffort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has

28、 worked hard to cleanthe yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on acase-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的 ) to the amount of effort your child has put into it._ _ _ 6参考答案Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. (要点一 )

29、Yet, both too muchand too little praise can be equally damaging. (要点二 ) When giving praise, parents should be sincereand concentrate on the process instead of the result. (要点三 ) Similarly, they ought to give praise forhow much effort their kids have invested in the work they re involved in. ( 要点四 )写

30、作指导完成一篇概要写作，需要经过三个步骤：1. 读懂原文，抓住段落主题句。在阅读过程中，需要准确把握文章的段落大意，学会剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。2. 组织语言，转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上，组织好语言，注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性，不全盘照抄原文句子，尽量用自己的语言转换表达，同时要注意篇幅的比例安排，用较多的文字 去表达重要的内容。3. 通读全文，逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。江苏卷题目要求请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Li Jiang: Ha

31、ve you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our schoolnext month.Su Hua: Yes, I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.Su Hua: What do you think?Li Jiang: I think it

32、 s a good idea. It s an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.Su Hua: I agree. But we don t have to dress that way. That s not our daily style. Besides, it s not very convenient.Li Jiang: You see, it s the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming f

33、or. Just the right occasion.Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It s nice. It s also a better display of our school culture.写作内容：1. 用约 30 个词概括上述信息的主要内容；2. 在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由 ( 不少于两点 ) 。写作要求：1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；72. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。评分标准：内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。优秀满分范文 1Li Jiang and Su Hua

34、are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting

35、. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share

36、Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.优秀满分范文 2L

37、i Jiang and Su Hua dont agree on what to wear when greeting the British students. Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion. 写作指导本文是读写任务，今年的话题是关于中国传统

38、服装的。读写任务首先要写好概括。概括短文的内容要点实为 客观简要地转述作者的观点、论据和结论，概括包括两个部分：主题句和支撑句。概括注意要抓住要点，语言精 练，不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的语言概括。第二段用恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点（反对或赞成）。过渡语起承上启下的作用，要显自然、连贯。提出 自己的观点后要具体论证自己的观点。最后一段要总结观点，提出具体做法或号召，升华文章的主题。上海卷题目要求Directions: Write an English compositionin 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Ch

39、inese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所博物馆还是社区图书馆征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给 上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；82. 说明你的理由从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比优秀范芬范文To whom it may concern:I ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you re collecting suggestions on its location. I m writing this letter to share w

40、ith you my opinions.In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than incommunity libraries. My reasons are as follows.On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more

41、spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional andexperienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities canb

42、etter protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.WangMin点评本次高考作文考查观点论述，题型较为常见，要求对画展的展出场所做出选择，并且说明理由，而且已经提 示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析， 难度不算太大， 要写好这篇作文， 只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。范文按照书信的形式，首先要提出给收信人， Towhomitmayconcern 这里表示的是敬启者，是在读者身份 不明时用在信件、通

43、知和证明书开头的套语，也是除了 Dearxxx 之外英语书信的常见用语。信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且说明了些这封信的目的。第二段明确提出了自己的观点，用了 itismoreadvisabletodo. 句型，说明“是更合理的”，常用在提出 建议时。段落最后用 Myreasonsareasfollows. “我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。第【三】四段用 ononehand.ontheotherhand. “一方面；另一方面”进行连接，层次清楚。在论 述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。 第三段从便利性角度进行分析， 博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适， 其中用到了 whic

44、h 引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。最后一段用 therefore 简单总结并重申自己的观点。1 2010 年全国卷 I【作文题目】假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛 (speech contest) ，希望附 近某大学的外籍教师 Smith 女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间： 6 月 15 日下午 2:00-5:00地点： 501 教室9参赛选手： 10 名学生联系人：李华（电话 44876655 ）欢迎大家光临注意：词数 100 左右。优秀范文Dear Ms. Smith,I m Li Hua,

45、 chairman of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. I m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on t

46、he given topic Man and Nature. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Li Hua2010 年全国卷 II【作文题目】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友 Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封 信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：1. 教授

47、课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等2. 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3. 工作量：每周 12 学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（ advisor ）注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。优秀范文Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some cour

48、ses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing,BritainToday and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you

49、 will also work as an advisor to our students English club or our school s English newspaper.Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I d be more than happy to help.10Best,Li Hua2011 年新课标 I【作文题目】假设你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心 （Learning Center ）的帮助。根据学校规定

50、，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1 本人简介；2 求助内容；3 约定时间；4 你的联系方式（ Email ：lihua ；phone ：12345678 ）。注意：1 词数 100 左右；2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 结束语已为你写好。优秀范文Dear Sir / Madam,I m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I m writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesti

51、ng. But I have some difficulties with note -taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for studentsand I m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you. You m

52、ay email or phone me. Here are my email addres s and phone number: lihua; 12345678.Look forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua2011 年新课标 II【作文题目】假定你是李华，你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下 内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1 说明你是该报的忠实读者2 赞赏该报优点：1) 兼顾国内外新闻2) 介绍名人成功故事3 提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章11注意：1. 词数 100 左右，开头语己为你写好；2. 可以适当

53、增加细节，以使行文连贯。优秀范文Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reason s. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all

54、important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English lear

55、ning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li Hua2012 年新课标 I【作文题目】假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢 迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍 ( 包括英语能力 )2. 参加意图 ( 介绍中国、了解其他国家 )3. 希望获准。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。优秀范文Dear Sir or Madam,I m Li H

56、ua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I d like to take part in it. I ve been learning English for 10 year s, and I speak fluent En

57、glish. What is more, I lI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.12Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua2012 年新课标 II【作文题目】 假定你是李华。 你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。 请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加，要点包括： 1. 时间

58、：周五晚 8 点至 9 点2. 地点：学生俱乐部3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4. 要求：备小礼物注意：1. 词数 100 左右，开头语已为你写好 ;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ;3. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。优秀范文Hi, Susan,Yours,Li Hua2013 年新课标 I【作文题目】假定你是李华。请你给笔友 Peter 写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想 要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号： CA985到达： 8 月 6 日上午 11:30注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使

59、行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。优秀范文Dear Peter,13How are you doing?I m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you ve asked for before.Also, I d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airpor

60、t and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to theU.S.? Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he iswearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua2013 年新课标 II【作文题目】假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结 (Chinese knot) 。给开网店的美国朋友 Tom 写封信，请他 代卖，要点包括：1. 外观 ( 尺寸、颜色、材料 )2. 象征意义3. 价格注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已为你写好。优秀范文Dear Tom,How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made th