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1、2009 年 12 月英语四级写作范文及解析 1、建设绿色校园很重要 2、绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境 3、为了建设绿色校园，我们应该 Creating a Green Campus Recently the topic of a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention.Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact

2、 on both individulas and society,for its significance cannot be denied。 A green campus environment, rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students. Needless to say, a green campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environmen

3、t.If there were no green surrounding among the college students, their soul would be not as pure as we wish.In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere。 In view of the seriousness of the situation, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to cre

4、at a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Furthermore, it is ripe time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves. Only in this way, can we get a satisfactory results. With these measur

5、es taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future。 历 年四级作文题及范文(2009-06)2009/06/26 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么? 也会带来一些问题 你的看法 Free Admission to Museums(满分版) Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad. The hidden r

6、eason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only with free access to this live database, can most people fully enjoy what museums could o

7、ffer to them. However, free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations. As a result, our government has to work out othe

8、r ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control. On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserve

9、d in the museums. As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct. Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some closed days for mus

10、eums for regular maintenance. Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development. 历 年四级作文题及范文(2008-12)2008/07/26 1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2. 造成的问题 3. 限制使用塑的意义 Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags ? These days disposal products often hit the headline

11、s of newspapers and have been brought into focus of the public. Indeed, it is widely accepted that they have gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life. Taking a look around you, you can find examples too numerous to list: When you walk on the street, you can see plastic bags fly

12、ing over your head; When you ramble along the river, you can find plastic bottles floating on the water; When you stroll in the park with your lover, you can notice waste paper thrown everywhere. ? Among the most important reasons often cited by people is the quickening pace of modern life. They are

13、 often too busy to wash dirty dishes or glasses, as a result they can do nothing but use disposal products. Also playing a part is the improvement of peoples life. As a result of the policy of opening and reform, an increasing number of people are much richer than before and can afford disposal prod

14、ucts. (原因) ? Admittedly, they might benefit us in a short term. Unfortunately, they will do us harm in more than one way. The major harm is (that) they are sure to pollute the environment. To make matters worse, they are likely to have potential harm to public health. To illustrate this point, I can

15、 think of no better example than HP, the river through S. As a result of disposal products in it, the water has caused some diseases in the local people. (影响) ? To sum up, for the factors mentioned before, we can safely reach the conclusion that the prevalence of disposale products is bound to cause

16、 a chain of undesirable effects. In view of the present situation, it is high time that the government tried every means to protect the environment. Only in this way, can we have a bright future. 历年四级作文题及范文(2008-06)2008/06/25 1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷， 进而影响学习 3. 你对于网络的看法 Recreational Ac

17、tivities In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help peopl

18、e relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally. However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves

19、 in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful too

20、l for our development. 来源：江涛英语第一时间解析 2008 年 6 月 21 日四级写作 分析： 此次写作题目与昨天我们预测的写作题目之一 The Internet 重合度非常高， 都属于正反论证类，需要考生论述正反两方的观点，并最终表明自己的观点。写 作中可用的句型和表达也与 The Internet 的范文达到高达 70%的重合度。具体参 加下面的预测范文。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Interne

21、t. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习 历年四级作文题及范文 (2007-12)2007/12/25 1、各学校开了各种各样的选修课 2、学生选课有不同的原因 3、就我而言 范文一 Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose fro

22、m. However, students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas. Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation. Because they assume that some more know

23、ledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job. Others may have their choice made just for fun. They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses. As far as Im concerned, Im inclined to choose electives

24、based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. 范文二 Nowadays many college students prefer to have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily courses. There are many factors that may

25、 account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more competence when they seek a job. Furthermore, as for me, I dont care about degree or job, I just want to obtain some necessary sk

26、ills to make my college life worthwhile. What Im concerned most is how to own more skills that may be necessary for my future. Finally, some students want to learn anything that is different from what they are learning now. The science students, for example, want to know about Shakespeare while the

27、art students want to tell how a vehicle works and how to deal with it when it breaks down. So, they can all get what they think is useful to their college life. On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of multi-demand of the employment market. There is still a long way for us to improve th

28、e elective itself, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting. 作文评析： 今年四级的作文，从题目看是明显的议论文。 按照我们曾经介绍过的议论文模式，可以用模版来写一 些，开头可以用议 论文典型的开头，比方说，Many students nowadays prefer to have electives because ., 或者，With the development of the employment market, many students would like to have anot

29、her course这样在文章的开篇就提出了明确的主题现 象。 第二段可以按照题目要求，根据自己的经历和现在学校的状况，举例说明 这种选修课给自己所带来的利弊，如果自己倾向于上选修课，那么可以多举些优 例如： a _ majored student myself, I prefer to choose _ as As 势的例 子， my elective, and I find that _. 比如可以丰富自己的学科范围，扩大知识 面，增强竞争力等。 第三段可以说这种现象的劣势， 比如： Good as_ is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages

30、 also. The apparent example is _. 就你自己的经历来看，可 能有比方说，耽误了正课的时间，学习太多无法消化，精力分散等。 最后可以总结，On the whole, above all, 等等，陈述你的观点。历年四级作文题及范文(2007-06)2007/06/26 欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部 欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。 标题：Welcome to our club 本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞，属于一篇应用文写作，与 04 年 6 月的导游词 类似，笔者认为难度不大，可按照以下提纲书写： 1.表达你的欢迎； 2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。 范文： Ladies and

31、 Gentlemen, First of all, please allow me to express the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our English Club. We have been looking forward to seeing you for long. It is a wonderful day today. Now I would like to brief my club to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to

32、discover. Our club, organizing various activities regularly catering for the needs of participants, is well-known among many English learners. If you want to meet native English speakers, please join us. If you want to speak English not only accurately but also fluently, please join us. If you want

33、to discover the most attractive aspects in English, please join us. I do hope that you will enjoy your journey of English study with us. Thank you! Sincerely Yours Li Ming 历年四级作文题及范文(2006-12)2006/12/26 1、许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 2、但有些人提出取消春节晚会 3、我 的看法 The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a nation

34、al issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes. Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced

35、by other programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of this gala is its tradi

36、tionally close link with ordinary peoples lives. Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television. I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedl

37、y, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its appeal and meet young adults need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show. 【点评】 本次四级考试作文总体上来

38、说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体 裁，二是题材。 对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料， 又回到了老的考查模式。 很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。 但是这 只 能得到最基本的分数。虽然模板对于考查学生的语言表达并不益处，但还能测试 出考生的语言基本功。从四级考试写作的测试目的来看，还是注重考查学生对基 本 语法、基本词汇运用能力的掌握情况。所以除了模板之外，考生还要在基本 表达上狠下功夫，只有在平时多操练，在考场上才游刃有余。除此之外，学生还 要在作文 中多采用闪光点，这样就会使作文在基本分数上有所提升，有所突破。 2006 年 6 月英语四级作文

39、 题目：An announcement for a voluntary program 1、校学生 会组织依次暑假志愿活动现招聘志愿者 2、本次志愿者活动的目的、内容及安排 3、报名条件和联系方式 Volunteers Needed 范文 A： Ladies and gentlemen, our StudentsUnion is calling for your due attention for a voluntary program to be launched in this imminent summer vacation and we are looking forward to y

40、our keen concern andd active participation in earnest. This Program is designed to offer the young kids from a certain poverty-stricken area of Yun Nan Province an opportunity of tree education, which means a two-month stay there. We are convinced it si bound to help us university students to put ou

41、r learning to full play, to foster a meaningful conception of life of being more caring and tolerant and to assume new tasks and responsibilites after graducation. Dear fellow students, we are beneficiaries of a rare privilege of formal education, meanwhile, there are many people, as innately lalent

42、ed as us, have been deprived of this equal chance, therefore, we hope sophomores and juniors, if interested and willing to help, in this university to contact us at or by 021-12345678. 历年四级作文题及范文 (2005-12)2006/07/26 1 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2 校园是否应对游客开放， 人们看法不同 3 我 认为 2005 年 12 月 24 日英语四级作文及范文 Part V. Writing

43、 (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below : 1名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3我认为 参考作文Should the University Campus Be Open

44、 to Tourists? 参看范文一 One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus. During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites. In my opinion, university campus should be open to tou

45、rists. In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities. Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students. Besides this, as more

46、 tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism. In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists 参看范文二 In university compus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking Universit

47、y and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere. Although most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university compus should not be open to tourists. First, tourists visit will disturb the normal teaching. They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so

48、on. They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere. Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words. These will affect the environment of the compus badly. The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism. So It should not be open. 2005 年 6 月 18

49、日英语四级作文及范文 Teachers Day ： 1. 向老师致以节日的问候。 2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。 3. 我如何报答老师。 参考范文之一 This is Teachers Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field. You

50、have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers Day. The whole secret of the teachers force lies in the conviction that men are convertible. Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth; for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a go

51、od life. What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule. My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigge

52、r thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude. 参考范文之二 National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May. And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher. I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I

53、 had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding. Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she

54、 aslo told me thats very common like many yong people of my age. She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just cant remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now! Another teachers day,to all the teachers,to our parents. 参考范文之三 Th

55、e Once per year s Teachers Day will come soon. At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher. Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school. My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry. After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute e

56、nteritis. My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me. My teacher fed me food and medicine on time. After struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left hospital. Then my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in succession. I express gratitude to my teacher, I cant recover so fast without my teacher. Because of my teacher I can participate todays CETD. I want to repay my teacher. No present can express my grateful feeling to my teacher. And the best repayment is that I can pass the CETD this time.