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1、基础写作训练,平均分： 峰值：,约15分,1719分,最吃亏学生群：,中等左右学生,书面表达是提分最大的潜力股,5分,9分,23分,高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also h

2、ad a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I n

3、o longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。,5句话强化训练, Shooting, originated as a m

4、eans of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Oly

5、mpic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,经典案例：广东08高考,句子表达有何亮点？,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm., The k

6、eeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子, The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face., The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,There are over fifty students in this sc

7、hool who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass., The old man thought of his son, with tears coming down from his face.,

8、4.过多地使用并列句组合信息, We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded., It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing., It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing., As we were driving out into the co

9、untry, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.,My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it hard to learn

10、English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,请看范例,从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英 语句子”。其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种 句子：,A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.,B) Compound sentenceA: He gave me a book but I forgot

11、 to bring it back home.,C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to do with me.,=When he heard the news, he was happy.,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.,2)借助介词短语做定语,如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短

12、发，身穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.,如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.,4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.,3)借助介词短语做状语,II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：他给我钱，

13、我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.,如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。,He gave me a lot money but I refused.,III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,1) 名词性从句,如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。,That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.,2) 定语从句,如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多、资源丰富。,China, which lies in the east of

14、Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.,3) 状语从句,如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. W

15、e find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。 小学生同时学汉语和英语。 这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English.,

16、Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children

17、from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect th

18、eir Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,情景说明 通知： 新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。 体检地点：第一人民医院 体检时间：9月9日，星期六 注意： 1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往； 2、体检前空腹； 3

19、、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。,实战练习,Notice The students in Senior Three of Xinguang Middle School will go to have a physical examination in the First Peoples Hospital on Saturday, 9th Sept. Well meet at the hospital gate at 7:45. You may either walk there or go there by bike. We are not allowed to eat or dri

20、nk anything before the examination. Please keep quiet and listen to the doctors and nurses when you are there.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇： 错别字: wrongly-written characters 网络语言：web language,要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。, There are many wrongly-written char

21、acters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to mem

22、orize the new characters,第二句: 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,合并句子：, They fail to memorize the new charact

23、ers.,连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.,Exchange and discuss your partners composition,

24、 then give each other a score according to the following criteria.,Pair work,1.一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。 2.乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。 3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。 4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。 5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。 李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。,实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过

25、观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。,A beggar,A beggar One day, Mr. Li hurried on his way to work. A beggar on the roadside was asking for money. Mr. Li paid no attention on him. The beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick. It almost tripped Mr. Li over. When he realizing the beggar was

26、 a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him. He took out a 100-yuan note, but it was suddenly blown into the air by the wind. Seeing this, the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note. It made Mr. Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.,A b

27、eggar One day, when Mr. Li hurried on his way to work, a beggar on the roadside was asking for money, but Mr. Li paid no attention on him. As a result, the beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick, which almost tripped Mr. Li over. Realizing the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to

28、search for some money in his pocket to give him. He took out a 100-yuan note, which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind. Seeing this, the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note, which made Mr. Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.,审题 列要点 依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句. 构篇章,扩句成文. 检查润色

29、 书写,写作解题步骤：,如何提高作文档次？,(1)字迹工整 (2)避免低级错误:避免语法和拼写的低级错误， 避免被扣印象分.,多样化句式,(1)用it is/was that强调句式. (2)用作状语的介词短语开头的完全倒装句或用以only in this way 等开头的部分倒装句. (3)用with的复合结构(with+宾语+宾补)作状语. (4)用非谓语动词简化状语从句或并列结构. (5)用what引导的名词性从句. (6)用独立主格结构. (7)恰当运用感叹句,被动句等. (8)适当使用插入语,如to be honest, I guess, I think,personally等. (

30、9)尽量用短语代替单词来表达同样的意思.,1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，bothand, as well as, together with, neithernor, also, not onlybut also, eitheror, as well. 2. 表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all. 3. 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand,

31、 just like, 4. 表示因果关系 so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to,三、学会使用恰当的连接词,5. 表示时间、顺序关系 shortly afterwards, next, finally, in the end, eventually 6. 表示递进、强调关系 besides, furthermore (此外), whats more, in addition, moreover (而且), worse still, to make matters worse, 7.

32、表示解释、说明关系 namely (也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this 8. 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion, at last, finally,三、学会使用恰当的连接词,（3 ）

33、注意表达的高级化 一、使用较高级的词汇,it doesnt matter whether they will go to college or not.,it doesnt make any difference whether they will go to college or not.,*高级(句式),80% students hold the view that,注意： There are 80% students hold the view that,There are 80% students who hold the view that,There are 80% students holding the view that,非谓语,定语从句,同位语从句,二、巧用精彩句式,分析原因（注意一句多译）,Several factors contribute to such changes. (reasons) lead to result in cause be responsible for account for 展开论述变化的原因,Homework,Rewrite the composition and hand it in.,