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1、2011-2012海淀初三英语一模试题分析,书面表达,写的技能 （中考说明写的能力要求） 1、能正确地使用大小写字母和标点符号。 2、能运用所学词汇、语法和句型，按照题目要求写出一篇不低于60词的短文、短信等文段。能简单描述人物、活动或事件。 3、写作话题与学生个人、家庭和学校生活密切相关，学生不仅能够表述事实，而且能够表达观点、情感和态度。 4、能正确使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落。,十、文段表达。（共15分） 74昨天你高兴地看到许多同学在校园里自觉地做了一些事去保护环境。请以 “ Learn from Them” 为题给你校英语周刊投稿。内容

2、包括同学们在校园里的具体做法，你的感受，以及你要向他们学习什么。 提示词语：pick up the trash, plant， reuse, save,审主题 审内容 审人称 审时态 审结构,校园活动 环保话题 三个方面：描述同学们在校园保护环境的具体做法、你的感受、以及你向他们学习什么。 第三人称复数，第一人称 一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时 Part 1 引入话题, 介绍同学们校园保护环境活动 Part 2 自己的感受 Part 3 针对保护环境，自己的计划,审题,Learn from Them Nowadays more and more people have done a lot

3、 to protect the environment. Yesterday I was glad to see that many students volunteered their time to make our school environment better.,引入话题,承上启下,答案范文,Some students picked up the trash on the playground, some students planted the trees, and other students made posters calling on people to lead a l

4、ow-carbon life.,描述活动1,描述活动2,描述活动3,I was moved by what they did. The environmental protection is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us. Even a small effort can make a great difference， so I made up my mind to learn from them.,过渡句,点题,I will turn off the lig

5、hts when I leave the room, and I wont keep the water running when I am not using it. Besides, reusing some old things I plan to throw away will be my choice. Whats more, I will remind people around me to take part in such activities. Action speaks louder than words. Lets work together!,具体计划,主题升华,Yes

6、terday, I saw a great number of students, who are very responsible, working on protections of the environment. Most of them were picking up the trash, as well as watering plants. And ,to my great surprise, some were even creating inventions made of deserted plastic and cans. I am really impressed by

7、 what Ive seen, since even though what the students have done were just little deeds, the willingness they have shown not only became the highlight of our school, but engaged us in actions of protecting the earth. What I can learn from them is the responsibility for the better world we long for. The

8、 simple acts of offering makes me convinced that we all can be the ones who can make great changes. All we can do is little, yet, if you, and I are ready to make it to ourselves and give it a try, we will make a difference.,学生作品 一类文（1）,Yesterday, lots of students at our school take actions to protec

9、t the environment of our school without being asked. I am so moved and impressed by them that I cant help sharing my opinions on what I should learn from them. Many students were seen picking up the trash while others were reusing the paper quietly. Thats a great sense of giving. Plants were watered

10、 and the playground were cleaned throughly. With their great effort, our campus became environment-friendly and tidy in the sunlight.,学生作品 一类文（2）,I feel really touched by them and their actions. I think its the thought of not only regarding the school as home but also being willing to put themselves

11、 to volunteer work that make them do so. Im sure that they firmly believe protecting the environment of our school can be the best way to put their love to good us. Im supposed not only to learn that but also to get to know the kind of spirit of giving . Its also necessary for me to learn the though

12、t of thinking that protecting the environment is a duty. I believe if all of us can find something to learn from them . Our life will became better and better.,Yesterday I found many students in our school doing something to protect the environment. Some were picking up the trash, others were planti

13、ng threes. I am very happy to see that. I should learn from them. First, Ill turn off the lights when I leave the room. Besides, Ill save the water while taking a shower. Ill also reuse some things. Im sure the world will become better and better through our hard work. 基本符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，表达个人感受的语句显得

14、较少，并且有少量错误，语言不丰富,二档文,Earth is our home . We only have one home. So we need to keep earth clean. Im glad that I saw some students did something to clean by themselves yesterday. Some collected the old paper at some classroom, others swept the ground. One of them water the flowers and cut the grasses.

15、 They also saved the water what we were used . I think doing things like that is meaningful, so I joined in them. Cleaning it , however , took us too much time and all of us got tired but we felt happy. In my opinion, protecting the earth is just like protecting ourselves . Lets do it together.,Yest

16、erday in our school some students picked up the trash. Some Students planted the trees. Its great. I feel happy. Its good to protect the environment. Ill do something for it. I will take the bus to school. I will plant trees. Our life be better. 要点不齐全，缺少个人感受的句子，句子结构简单，语法结构和词汇存在错误。,三档文,Students pick

17、up the trash. Students plant the trees. Im happy. I can pick up the trash. I also can plant the trees. The world is good and Im happy.,四档文,My school is very beautiful because my classmate help our teacher clean our school. I think I am happy to hear my classmate clean our school because its very good. My classmate every day spend two hours clean my school. We also help my classmate. I hope our school can beautiful. We are very happy.,四档文,3分,写作应试技巧,要严格按所给提示来写,不丢项（审题）; 写好完整的句子是写作的基础和底线； 文章分三段，10句话； 用熟不用生； 表达思想清楚，积极向上，要有表达个人感情色 彩的句子;,