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1、作文讲评ASSESSMENTS(评价标准)Structure 框架结构Is the article divided into parts?Content 内容要点Are all the details stated?Are all the details to the point(切题)?Language语言表达 Does the writer use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?表达错误 Is there any advanced vocabulary or sentence patterns(高级词汇和句式)?structure:_ p

2、aragraphs P 1:_ P 2:_ P 3:_ 3descriptionreasons for the phenomenon measuresparagraph one:(1)As is vividly shown in the picture,an old man is falling down on the road.Many people passed by but no one stopped to give a hand to him because they are afraid of being wronged as the offenders._fell down/is

3、 lying_passed by/pass bystopped/stopswere/are(2)Form the picture we can see that an old man fell down on the ground and many people were surrounding him.However,people didnt dare to help him.because.for fear that.they would be wronged as offenders.paragraph two:(1)In the past few years,too many peop

4、le have been wronged as offenders.As a result,people have the sense of fear.(2)Some examples where the elderly will wrong the helpers as offenders make people dare not give a hand.=deep reasons people cant believe in each otherlack the sense of social morality example 1:example 2:People cant believe

5、 in each other,because there are so many cases where kind people are accused of offenders after helping the old.Its that people are lacking in traditional virtues that leads to the phenomenon happening.paragraph three measures(about low trust)government should make laws to protect the helpers(about

6、lack of morality)increase the sense of moralityLanguage：Proper linking words(恰当的连词恰当的连词)时间顺序时间顺序 first,second,then,finally,at last,soon,immediately,suddenly对称顺序对称顺序for one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序转折顺序but,yet,however,while,though,otherwise，in reality,instead,neverth

7、eless,after all.因果顺序因果顺序because,since,as,for,thanks to,owing to,due to,as a result,条件顺序条件顺序as long as,on condition that,if,unless，only if让步顺序让步顺序though,as,even if/though,whether,wh-(what,when,where,how)+ever.递进顺序递进顺序and,whats more,besides,in addition,furthermore,moreover,to make the matter worse,whats worse过渡性插过渡性插入语入语Im afraid,you know,As we all know,As is well known,in a word,to sum uphomework:Rewrite your composition and further improve it according to the assessment form,trying to make your final copy as neat as possible.