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1、考研英语写作三段论：第一段-描述图画或图表 第二段-解释寓意 第三段-给出评论第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。描述图画注意： 第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并拟定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。 第三部; 寻找中心事物周边有关的事物，并进行简朴的描述。模式： 在图画中央有-(倒装)，它-（主谓一致、目前分词、非限定性定语从句），周边有-（独立主

2、格作状语）第二句-总结 The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.这幅画初看仿佛很简朴，但是只有具有洞察力的人才干看穿其肤浅的含义。 The authors real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实目的不是图画自身，而是要引导我们

3、去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。第二段第一句-观点的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有

4、害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策

5、的执行，国内的经济有了巨大的发展，但同步带来了某些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ）万能观点： 图画主题的重要性Nothing can be compared withis not only necessary , but also indispensable remains to be an integral part in 图画主题的有害性Nothing is more harmful or damaging.is not on

6、ly harmful , but also damaging.in large measure detrimental.第二句-进一步解说人们的态度（注重/不注重） (1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题 . (2) The public attach due attention to 重要主题 .give priority to优先考虑 attach attention to对注意 emphasize the importance of 强调的重要性 stress the fundamental role of 强调的主线作用

7、第三句-对主题进行展开 （3-4句） By doing so , 十一种角度平行展开（也可用科学论据法或举例法）(一)、十一种万能理由（角度）物质回报： 主题 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles. The industrious and insightful people will never fail to profits from (

8、benefit from) doing 主题.时间角度 节省时间 It can make the most of ones time , chance and technology. 主题(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupying spare time so constructively , makes a person contented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon. 挥霍时间As all known

9、, the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主题 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills an even murders youngsters prime time.效率角度 主题（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makes people we

10、ary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement . Ones energy gradually wears off and ones thought , creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主题 .以便和快捷 主题 （e.g. Wi

11、de World Web）provides people with up-to-date , concrete and accurate and vivid information . 主题 （e.g. MSN and other instant messengers）can shrink the distance between cities and even continents ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people .安全角度 主题 can secure his

12、 food and shelter. 主题 can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury , robbery , assaults to traffic accidents .身心健康 （主题）can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems , stress , isolation and solitude . By doing (主题) people stay healthy , and therefore prevent

13、 heart diseases , hypertension , diabetes or fattiness . (主题) can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world .生活娱乐 Its a major means of entertainment that relieves ones pressure , boredom , stress and burden .表“受益”的词组：Broaden ones mind E

14、nrich ones experienceEnhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to ones work It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information , but a source of imagination as well. It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy , e

15、nthusiasm and charm . It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious , routine and monotonous life .有助成长和成功（自己和她人） People can obtain financial aids , material support , mental comfort , or spiritual back from your support . They can draw on experience from you . Through your speec

16、hes , instructions or assistance , they can broaden their minds , increase their income . Through your encouragement , they cultivate the spirit of competition , participation and cooperation and finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness . Though your assistance , not only ca

17、n they accumulate wealth , but will also establish their career , fit into society , and even attain social status . People who treat others with love , sincerity , sympathy , enthusiasm , hospitality or generosity always win respect from others . It dose / doesnt necessarily cultivate talent , conf

18、idence , selfworth ,selfreliance and dignity .文化价值观 It cannot help people treat the world with benevolence , confidence and tolerance . It can sometimes intensify conflicts and tensions between nations . It put harmonious human relationship in danger . It cannot promote mutual understanding . It can

19、 breach the friendly ties , and widen the gap between people .环保 It means that central authority can set aside more funds to eliminate air pollution , noise pollution , reduce soil erosion or desertification , prevent the thinness of ozone layers , reduce industrial sewage , and rescue the dwindling

20、 tropical jungles . It government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation , thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment .社会宏观角度 It can minimize inflation , economic stagnation , economic recession , unemployment rate . It can maintain soc

21、ial order and reduce crime rate . It means that revolutionize the scientific level of a country , means of co communication and quality of life . It means that the authorities can allocate more funds to the construction and quality of infrastructure ranging from kindergartens , hospitals , medical c

22、enter , museums , school libraries , trains to highways and express ways . It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education , employments , selfrealization and pursuit of material wealth .（二）、科学论据法According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science （CAS）， According to a

23、 survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science (CASS) , China Daily interviewed for people from four professions a surgeon , a while collar worker , a carpenter and a farmer . The survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that 主题重要或有害. （三）、举例子 Our human history has been filled with a

24、 variety of examples of , with the following one being the foremost . 我们人类历史上与这个话题有关的例子有诸多，下面这个是最有说服力的。 Among all the touching facts relating to that I have hoard , noticed , and experienced , the most impressive one is 在我所听到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题有关的例子之中，最有说服力的是第四句 （结尾句虚拟语调和利弊句）虚拟语调：（1）积极的主题如果没有，我们也许主线做不

25、了 Were there no sth , never would we do sth .（2）悲观的主题如果状况继续下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。Were the situation to continue as it is , we would pay the high price .e.g. Were the tendency to continue as it is , our future generation would not bother to think of excuse for us . 利弊句：(1)弊不小于利The disadvantages overshadow

26、the benefits .The benefits are in large measure canceled out by the problems .(2)利不小于弊The problems seem to be pale compared with the benefits .The disadvantages cannot weighed against the benefits .第三段 好的现象It is imperative that the essence be absorbed and the drawbacks be neglected , during this pro

27、cess , especially in the times of knowledge explosion , when the news , facts , opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world .坏的现象 With a proper low and an alert public it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past .随着着一种恰当的法律和警惕的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。Only in a reasonable , prosperous and health atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost . 只有在一种理性，繁华和健康的环境中，我们才有但愿看到这样一种抱负的景象，人们能最大也许的去享有她们的生活。