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1、I recall when I was young oh I will play and always having fun with the neighbor next to me and well play until the setting sun try to be the best among the others in a game call the spider battle it doesnt matter who is the best now Those were the days of my past few years later when I got to schoo

2、l and was late for lesson all the time always day dreaming in the class till I dont even know the lessons done then my teacher always tell me never ever be lazy again what can I do now what can I say now those were the days of my past as the days go on and on I grew up and had my first love candle l

3、ight and sandy beach finally give away my first kiss mother said I was too young to fall in love and then I will one day regret so love was over but I do miss her those were the days of my past just when I left my high school and got my first job in a sales night working hard all day and night no on

4、e there to lend a helping hand daddy told me not to worry and said that l should go on step by step what can I say now what can I do now those were the days of my past then one day I settled down with the only one I really love got a small family with two kids that is what Im always hoping for but I

5、 still remember having fun with all my friends when I was young I miss my home town I miss my old friends those the days of my past I miss my home town I miss my old friends when will i see them again Life without limbs, life without limits极限极限,learning without limits. 学习目标：学习目标：1 1、能通过书面来表达个人情况内容，、

6、能通过书面来表达个人情况内容，如：名字、年龄，生日、居住地、语言、外貌、如：名字、年龄，生日、居住地、语言、外貌、工作、家庭、兴趣爱好、变化等；工作、家庭、兴趣爱好、变化等；2 2能从尼克的故事中有所感悟，燃起对个人理想的追求。能从尼克的故事中有所感悟，燃起对个人理想的追求。3 3、写作策略、写作策略: :（1 1）能通过能通过WH-questionsWH-questions获得细节。获得细节。（2 2）能明白主题句与细节的关联。）能明白主题句与细节的关联。（3 3）同种意思的多种表达法。）同种意思的多种表达法。（4 4）能使用连词和过渡词。能使用连词和过渡词。（5 5）使用谚语和复合句美化文

7、章。使用谚语和复合句美化文章。Wh-questionsWhatWhyWhoWhomWhoseWhichHowHow old/long/far/often/soon/many/much.Ask questions as many as you can!NameSexDate of birthBirth placeNationalityJobLanguageBe good atTelHobbiesNicks Personal informationNickMale December 4th, 1982Australia Australian Englishspeakerspeakingswimmi

8、ng1.Nick is years old. 2. He was born in / on . He was born without arms or legs.3. He is from He comes from4.He spends a lot of time learning to write.5. We should learn from him.6. His story encourages me to .7. There is no doubt that he is a successful .8.He used to like,but now he is more intere

9、sted in个人信息话题的常用表达ChildhoodNicks childhood was full of difficulties.1.It was difficult for him to 2.He had many difficulties in doing sth. 3.Walking was also a hard thing.4.He spent a lot of time learning to The sentence which tells us the main idea(主旨) is _.The information in the body should suppor

10、t(支持)_.topic sentencetopic sentenceAnswer the telephoneBrush his teethUse the computerDress himselfWrite with his mouthHowever, he has faced challenges and overcome his difficulties.He also has many hobbies and interests.1. He can2.He likes/enjoys3.He is interested in 4.He takes an interest in5.He h

11、as the ability to Eve, a talented dancer, always loves dancing. Topic sentencetalentedlovesPlease give some information that can support the topic sentence.1.won the first prize in a dancing competition2.started dancing at the age of 33.be strict with herself in dancing 4.practice dancing when she i

12、s free学会使用连词或过渡词。学会使用连词或过渡词。conjunctive words1.表示表示并列关系的：并列关系的：and, as well as, or, also 2.表示表示转折转折关系关系:but, yet, however, on the other hand3.表示表示时间关系的：时间关系的：when, while, after, before, first ,then, after that, a month later, finally/lastly/at last 4.表示表示因果关系因果关系的的:because, so, therefore ,as a resul

13、t5.表示表示目的的：目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that, thus 6.表示举表示举例例的的：for example , such as, and so on7.表示表示总结性总结性的的:in general, generally speaking, allin all, in a word, in my opinion, personally, as for me 8.列举：列举：(肯定肯定) whats more, more importantly, besides(否定）否定）whats worse, even wors

14、e He shares his experiences in life and how to get over challenges. He thinks we should be thankful，have big dreams, never give up. He encourages and inspires children, youths and adults who are disappointed by life so that they will become all that they can become in life. He is a successful speake

15、r. A girl from Japan fell in love with him when she heard of Nicks story. Nick got married. He said, “I may not have hands to hold my wifes hands but when the time comes, Ill be able to hold her heart, I dont need hands to hold her heart.”He got his lover because of his hard work.哪些哪些谚语谚语 可以用来描述可以用来

16、描述Nick?1.Where there is a will , there is a way.有智者，事竟成。有智者，事竟成。2.Well begun is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。良好的开端是成功的一半。3.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。4.You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success. 相信自己是成功的秘诀。相信自己是成功的秘诀。5.Everyone has his price.天生我才必有用。天生我才必有用。6. Life without limits .

17、人生无极限。人生无极限。使用高级的句子美化文章使用高级的句子美化文章:谚语谚语proverbs或复合句或复合句compound sentences以读促写篇章以读促写篇章 Nick was born on December 4th, 1982 in Australia. Unluckily, he was born without arms or legs. As we can imagine, his life was full of difficulties. When he was a little boy, some unkind children laughed at him at

18、school. Nick was really sad and ever wanted to end his life. Luckily, his mother made him change his mind. Over the years, Nick has learned how to take care of himself and live basically by himself. He can shave, brush his teeth, comb his hair and get dressed. And he can swim, surf, play golf, ride

19、a horse, and use a computer. When he was 17, he started to give talks in the church. At the age of 21, Nick graduated from university. Then he began to travel around the world to give speeches on life, hopes and dreams. One of his great speeches is called No arms, No legs, No worries. He is so optim

20、istic /ptmstk/乐观的乐观的. He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far, in about 35 countries. He has ever visited China five times. In 2008, he visited Chengdu, China to help the survivors /svaiv/幸存者幸存者of the earthquake in Sichuan. He believes that having a healthy mind and spirit is more importa

21、nt than anything else. His book “Life Without Limits (人生不设限人生不设限)” has inspired (激励激励) many people. Nick has successfully changed from a life without limbs 没有四肢的人生没有四肢的人生 to a life without limits人生无极限人生无极限. 学习目标：学习目标：1 1、能通过书面来表达个人情况内容，、能通过书面来表达个人情况内容，如：名字、年龄，生日、居住地、语言、外貌、如：名字、年龄，生日、居住地、语言、外貌、工作、家庭、

22、兴趣爱好、变化等；工作、家庭、兴趣爱好、变化等；2 2、能从尼克的故事中有所感悟，燃起对个人理想的追求。、能从尼克的故事中有所感悟，燃起对个人理想的追求。3 3、写作策略、写作策略: :（1 1）能通过能通过WH-questionsWH-questions获得细节。获得细节。（2 2）能明白主题句与细节的关联。）能明白主题句与细节的关联。（3 3）同种意思的多种表达法。）同种意思的多种表达法。（4 4）能使用连词和过渡词。）能使用连词和过渡词。（5 5）使用谚语和复合句美化文章。）使用谚语和复合句美化文章。Now lets write something about Nick! Beginni

23、ng: The person I will never forget is Nick. Nick is very special because Nick was born without arms or legs.Body: paragraph 2:paragraph 3: paragraph 4:Ending :Please give some information that can support the topic sentence. 1._ 2._ 3._ 4._ NameSexDate of birthBirth placeNationalityJobLanguageBe goo

24、d atTelHobbiesNickMale December 4th, 1982Australia Australia EnglishspeakerspeakingswimmingThe person I will never forget is Nick. Nick is very special because Nick was born without arms or legs.佳句欣赏与模仿佳句欣赏与模仿1. Thats because he was a really good student. 我的妈妈非常的强健，那是因为她每天坚持做我的妈妈非常的强健，那是因为她每天坚持做运动。运

25、动。2. Thats when I decided to change. 我妈妈过去很胖，而且经常生病。医生建我妈妈过去很胖，而且经常生病。医生建议她要多做运动。那时她决定改变自己。议她要多做运动。那时她决定改变自己。My mother used to be very fat and fell ill often. The doctor advised her to do more sports. Thats when she decided to change herself. My mother is really fit. Thats because she keeps doing sp

26、orts every day.3. Now shes not shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds. So he was no longer interested in studying and missed classes. 我妈妈不再肥胖了。我妈妈不再肥胖了。4. Its very important for parents to be there for their children. 对孩子们来说与父母沟通很重要。对孩子们来说与父母沟通很重要。5. Her grandparents have had a great influ

27、ence on Kate. 我妈妈对我产生巨大的影响。我妈妈对我产生巨大的影响。My mother has a great influence on me.My mother isnt fat anymore. / My mother is no longer fat.Its very important for children to communicate with their parents.中考英语话题复习P106. To Li Wens surprise, their conversation changed his life. 使我惊奇的是，我的妈妈变得越来越美了。使我惊奇的是，我

28、的妈妈变得越来越美了。7. There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher. 毫无疑问，我的妈妈是一位伟大的妈妈。毫无疑问，我的妈妈是一位伟大的妈妈。There is no doubt that my mother is a great mother.To my surprise, my mother becomes more and more beautiful.中考英语话题复习P10请把模仿的7个句子，结合自己的语言拓展，编成具有逻辑性的小篇章。1. My mother is really fit. Thats because she k

29、eeps doing sports every day.2. My mother used to be very fat and fell ill often. The doctor advised her to do more sports. Thats when she decided to change herself. 3. My mother isnt fat anymore. /My mother is no longer fat.4. Its very important for children to communicate with their parents.5. My m

30、other has a great influence on me.6. To my surprise, my mother becomes more and more beautiful.7. There is no doubt that my mother is a great mother.参考范文 My mother used to be very fat and fell ill often. The doctor advised her to do more sports. Thats when she decided to change herself. Now she isnt

31、 fat anymore and is really fit. Thats because she keeps doing sports every day. To my surprise, my mother becomes more and more beautiful. My mother is very kind to me. We are like good friends. I get on really well with her. No matter what happens to me, she always talks with me and encourages me.

32、In my view, its important for children to communicate with their parents. My mother has a great influence on me. There is no doubt that my mother is a great mother.初中阶段令你印象最深刻的是哪位老师？请用初中阶段令你印象最深刻的是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为英语写一篇题为“The Teacher I Will Never Forget”的作文。词数在的作文。词数在100左右。内容包括：左右。内容包括：1. 教师的性格或特长；教师的性

33、格或特长；2. 例举一个事例；例举一个事例；3. 对对老师的感谢和祝福。文中不得出现真实的姓名老师的感谢和祝福。文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。或校名。Many people around us also move us a lot!Such as .中考英语话题复习P10【亮点点拨亮点点拨】1. 本文的开头语言丰富，自然过渡到文章的主题本文的开头语言丰富，自然过渡到文章的主题；2. 主体部分中主体部分中“She helped me not only in class but also after class.”可被视为主体部分的主题句可被视为主体部分的主题句，作者之后的细节就是紧紧围绕主题句展

34、开的。，作者之后的细节就是紧紧围绕主题句展开的。3. 最后一段的祝福简洁，可以说是点睛之笔，感最后一段的祝福简洁，可以说是点睛之笔，感情饱满。情饱满。4. 画线部分的语言值得我们借鉴。画线部分的语言值得我们借鉴。【写作微技能小贴士写作微技能小贴士】描述个人情况所牵涉到的细节很多，我们可以通过描述个人情况所牵涉到的细节很多，我们可以通过 “Wh-questions” 来获得细节。如：来获得细节。如：what, why, where, who, whom, whose, which, when, how, how old / long / far / often / soon / many / m

35、uch .等问题来获得细节。此微技等问题来获得细节。此微技能可适用于任何的话题写作。能可适用于任何的话题写作。中考英语话题复习P11实战演练实战演练中考英语话题复习P11中考英语话题复习P11 身边有许多人关心你、爱护你。请以身边有许多人关心你、爱护你。请以“My _”为题，用英语写一篇为题，用英语写一篇120词左右的词左右的短文，表达对他或她的感激之情。内容包括他短文，表达对他或她的感激之情。内容包括他或她的基本信息、他或她对你的关爱以及你的或她的基本信息、他或她对你的关爱以及你的感激之情等。感激之情等。参考词汇：参考词汇：appreciate, care about, encourage, full of love